Review

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              ⇨ Exchange Student || Hunny_chan210 || turtleception ⇦                      Set, 

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T i t l e ❧  3.5/5 

Very simple but i guess it's too simple and common. Nothing wrong with it though. u v u

P o s t e r & B a c k g r o u n d ❧ 7/10 b u l g e s

In my opinion, i don't like the poster at all, it has no feel or meaning behind it. I don't get how two polaroid pictures of boys and a full body shot of a girl is related to an exchange student? I see no school on the background or anything related to school. If i didn't read the title, i would have never guessed it to be about an exchange student. I suggest you get a new poster. 

The background is fine.

P l o t & o r i g i n a l i t y ❧ 6.5/10  t h i g h s

When i read the foreword, the only words that crossed my mind was cliche. cliche. cliche. A lot of stories have this kind of plot. And for originality, uhm. not that great to be quite honest. It's similar to my old fic so i have no comment. 

G r a m m a r & s p e l l i n g ❧ 9.5/10 b u t t s

 You were nearly there. Nearly. At the very start you have some spelling mistakes, please re-read before publishing. The other chapters have perfect spelling. The words you use are simple which is great, i'm fine with it. I suggest you use more describing and unique words but it's your choice. 

In chapter 3, it said "What is she doing with our oppa's?". Please get rid of the apostrophe in oppas, because i'm sure you were trying to say "Oppas" not "Oppa's" because if there's an apostrophe there, it's like saying "Oppa is" and it doesn't make sense. 

W r i t i n g  s t y l e & s t o r y  f l o w ❧ 10/10  a b s

The story flow was great and like i said before, the writing style is simple which is good. 

C h a r a c t e r i z a t i o n ❧ 6/10  n e c k  v e i n s 

Uhm, Okay. At the start, i asked, who the hell is the main character? what is she like? how does she look like? I had a lot of questions in my head about this. So in other words, you didn't express the characters that well. Just because you wrote down some things about her on the foreword, doesn't mean you can't talk about the character in the story. You also need to show more of each of the character's feelings. Like for example, when the girl got the call, you should have added more feelings into it, like what is she feeling right now as she listens to the person telling her the news? It's very important to express these feelings. u n u 

O v e r a l l  e n j o y m e n t ❧ 65/100  

It was very awkward for me to read as it is similar to my own story, it felt like i was reading my own story but on the other hand, there were some bits i enjoyed but the whole story itself was very awkward for me to read. 

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A/N : Sorry if that was harsh, i can redo the review if you wish but i'm only willing to do so after you have fixed the mistakes i pointed out. ciao.