Snow Fight

Description

Its December. Its snow. And they're having fun.

Foreword

Another one from me! Attempting a longer oneshot. Just a bit.  ^^

 

I hope you like it! >_<

orenkiut
DONE! yayy! tell me what you think! ^^

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Ms_koala #1
Chapter 2: This is so cute, I love brotherhood moment...
Thanks..
ninadebrov23 #2
Chapter 2: I love thisss story sooo muchh!!
justLIKEmagic
#3
Chapter 2: It's so warm and cozy ^^ idk why but somehow imagine that is what Seungri really feels :( .. Good Job (y)
sadiraelau
#4
Chapter 2: 1) I like the way you describe Ji takes care of Ri.
2) you described well on Youngbae's character here!

Just love this story unnie! ^^ ♥
Tharyar
#5
Chapter 2: Re-read
Re-read
Re-read...
YOu're stories never fail me!!
I need more of them.
You did a great job this time too~ I love it. Especially when the maknae is sick and the hyungs take care of him. You must be a loyal ViP. You can capture all of the members characters in your stories and make it beautiful stories~ I love you-author-nim, Mwah~
IRAbpholic
#6
Chapter 2: re-read the second chapter... since I can't comment due to my super busy life when I'm reading it for the first time..

what can I say~~
I love this..
you portrayed their character well.. I can imagine themselves saying those lines in their own way.. :")
and simply says, I can imagine the situation in real life, no fake. :D

Ji and Ri moment,, sweet brothers...
I smiled at pandara moment,, POGI~~ hehe
and I'm touched at how the elders take a good care of riri...help him and soothe him.. :")
todae moments was hilarious..
and how papa YG let riri stand in front of him while he's talking on the phone remind me to Strong Heart,,,hehe

all in all...
keep writing unnie..
I love reading words by words in your masterpiece... :")
I can feel the loneliness in Ri's heart..how he misses his hyungs..:")

write more brotherhood story of BB okay..:DD
Bontsikka #7
This was so sweet and please write more stories like this ^_^
lifeofafangirl
#8
Chapter 2: AAAWWW so sweet! with Pandara and gri in it :'D aaww so cute!!
Soulhope
#9
Chapter 2: That was awesome and sweet!!! d(>.<)b
love it so much! ^^
woah!! you are great authornim
keep write dear ^^v