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The Story of Us

 Nichkhun watched as Victoria danced in the backyard. He was peeking so he had to be very careful.

 Oooooh.....she's dancing a different one this time, thought Nichkhun.

"You know what?" said Victoria suddenly. "I think you'd be more comfortable if you sit here and not hide behind the fences."

Nichkhun blushed furiously, he stepped out from behind the fence and looked down at his shoes sheepishly. "How long did you know?" he whispered shyly.

"Since you started peeking," said Vic. She saw Nichkhun's tomato face and chuckled. "Seriously, stop being so shy around me."

"Sorry..." squeaked Khun. He still can't get enough courage to look Vic the eye.

"Come here." said Vic, gesturing for him to come closer. "There's something I want to ask you."

Khun slowly walk closer to Vic, who is looking at him and making him totally nervous.

(Conversation)

V: Why are you so interested in me?

K:I-I-I, I'm not!! (Blush)

V: So why are you peeking?

K: I was inspecting you.

V: (laugh) Sure. You are just "inspecting" me with no reason. (scoffs) Got any better reason?

K: (silent)

V: I'm still waiting.

K: (blurt) I like you. (face turns completely red)

V: (smile) oh, then, thank you.

(silence)

V: Well, then, I like you too.

( Vic skips off.)

K: Whew!!!! That was---

 

Khun pumps his fist in the air. "I did it!!" he screamed. "Yes!!" Then he heard something call his name :"Nickkhun, don't get your hope up."

Nichkhun turned around and saw Minho, another foster kid. "Mo??" he asked.

"Victoria is going to be mine. You're wasting your time." said Minho. Then he left.

Nichkhun was speechless. Hee felt his hand curl into a fist. If that's what Minho thinks.........

 

Bring it on.

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Is this one long enough??? Hope you like this one though`` <3

What kind of story do you want this to be??

A. Happy ending( Khuntoria)

B. Sad ending.(KHuntoria didn't get together)

C. Surprising ending(well it's a surprise so...)

D. Touching ending

 

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fritzi_song123
#1
Chapter 11: so cute.. i love it.. cute love story
Yoontae981
#2
"The Story of Us-Bonus Story" is a go!!! Go check out the short novel apof Khuntoria's happily ever-after!!
Sgvalana
#3
Chapter 11: I love the ending! It was so amazing!
Yoontae981
#4
Chapter 11: I plan on writing a bonus one-shot story of this fanfic!!
Remember keep on reading^^
Yoontae981
#5
Chapter 1: Thanks to all of the people who supported my fanfic!!!
Check out my other fanfic also ~
And yes!
I will keep on writing!!!
cuppyieka #6
Chapter 11: The ending is something make my hearts flutter!! Keep writing an amazing story
aarasa #7
Chapter 11: Oh it's already ended? I didn't expect the story to end so soon lol. Anyway, good story and good writing! thanks for sharing this with us and I hope you'll write more Khuntoria fics and make it longer next time hehehe ^^
aarasa #8
Chapter 9: Ooh I liked it! keep on writing you :D
cuppyieka #9
Chapter 9: I like it!!
aarasa #10
Chapter 8: LOL that was definitely short, but since you said that the next chapter will be exciting then I'm ok with this super short chapter haha. Can't wait to read it ^^