Caged

SAW 14: The Mysterious Mastermind
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Amu felt her heart tightening as the sight of Yuki inside a small cage came before her eyes. It’s true that Yuki and her never been in good terms. But she knows for a fact that she’s one of the most important people in Daiki’s life and her precious existence will depend on a string of hope that Amu possesses.     “Let me do it… I’ll do this round… Let Amu-chan go!” Daiki insisted as he pulled Amu behind him – as if protecting someone so important. He took a glance above where his sister helplessly seeks for help before challenging the Game Master once again.     “Nii-chan please… Don’t go! These nails can’t hold your weight …” Yuki analysed the state of the pipe before shouting down to her brother.     “In short, Amu-chan was chosen because she’s the lightest among us…” Kim supported Yuki’s statement while looking seriously at Daiki’s eyes. The boy on the other hand just looked down and clutched his fist as the thought of being useless was indeed within him.     Seeing how vulnerable Daiki is, Amu felt the urge to take her boyfriend’s hands and make him feel her warmth. She then propped her chin on his shoulder and whispered to his ear… “I can do this. Yuki-chan is my family too. I can’t let anyone hurt her…” she silently said with a fake smile. Despite being half scared to death, she just felt the urge to hide everything from Daiki.     Amu was about to take her position towards to pipe when a sudden pull was felt by her arm… “Losing you both is just too much! Don’t do this.” Daiki cupped Amu’s face before leaving a soft kiss on her lips.     “If I come back safely, you have to treat me and Yuki-chan some ice cream and some pocky and never ending supplies of chocolate ne?” Amu tried to brighten up the mood to convince her boyfriend to support her… “I love you…”     Amu’s confidence immediately went down to zero as soon as she saw the height of what she’s a about to step on. She tried her best to quickly go through every poking nail available and positioned her foot on the stronger ones. Amu then pulled herself up and slowly but successfully went already halfway the pipe.      “Amu-chan! Relax… Take it slowly…” Hanna shouted while the others are busy worrying about the said girl. Amu then nodded slightly while feeling a rush of her own sweat travelling her body – her nervousness made her heart beat like an aggressive drum ready to go out her chest any second now. By this time, she’s almost in level of Yuki’s cage in altitude.      “Amu-chan… Don’t look down…” Yuki silently uttered. Her solemn voice tingled inside Amu’s ears, enough to make lose her concentration. It was indeed the first time Yuki spoken to her in a normal manner. She knows for a fact that Yuki hates her but this time; they have no choice but to stick together. Amu was about to take another step upwards when her foot suddenly slide unexpectedly in one of the nails. The group watching her in the lower ground gave off a loud gasp including one boy that could've given anything just to save Amu.      “AMU-CHAN!” Daiki shouted after seeing his girlfriend nearly falling from the pipe. He felt his own heartbeat rebelling against his sound of heavy breathing while his fist clutched ready to punch the one who designed this game. He knows for a fact that there is a possibility that his sister and his beloved girlfriend while be gone from his life with just a click of a finger.      Luckily enough Amu had her hand grip tightly on one of the nearest metal bars that kept her in place. She smiled slightly before hearing Yuki speak with a broken voice.     “I know you hate me too. I never treated you like my brother’s girlfriend… I’m sorry…” Yuki said while seeing Amu strive her very best to reach the said lever to free Yuki.     “The thing is, never hated you Yuki-chan. I promised your brother I’ll save you so I can’t break that promise…” Amu confidently uttered as she struggled to reach for the red lever. She positioned herself closer to it but she still can’t stretch enough to get a hold of the metal.     “She’s nearly there… But there’s only 2 minutes left until the rope can hold unto the cage any longer...” Fai informed the others which weren’t helpful enough to ease Daiki’s restlessness.     Amu heard Fai’s statement and just tried her utmost best to reach the metal. She can feel more sweat coming down from her as she managed to slowly clutch the lever into her hand. “Yokatta!” she thought to herself before slowly pulling it down. As expected the cage gently came down while she continually pull the massive lever in her hand. She took a deep breath and pulled even more for the cage to reach the ground safely - this time, she isn't thinking for herself. All she manage to think of is her boyfriend's sister helplessly needing her help and with one last pull, she saw Yuki being rescued by the others...      Amu felt relieved and smiled at the scene where Daiki freed the girl in the cage.  She then slowly let herself down using the same pipe when suddenly…       “AHHHHHHH!!” She screamed after sliding her foot once again - the next thing she knew was herself hanging onto a metal bar. By this time she knows, she has no chance to get down using the same pipe again.     “AMU-CHAN!! Hang in there…” Daiki's celebration after his sister was rescued ended soon as he shouted in panic. He saw Amu hanging from the top of the ceiling, struggling to save herself.     “I – I can’t… my hands are slipping…” Amu struggled to speak as her bare hands were unable to support much of her weight any longer.       “She’s gonna fall at any rate now… Kei, Ryo, Yuya and Dai-chan…” Yabu started to instruct… “We’ll act as her futon. She has no choice but to jump…” the leader continued and soon enough made the boys nod in agreement. They made a
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YabuHanna
#1
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Such a masterpiece!!! I FREAKING LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

I LOVE SAW MOVIES NOW!!! XDD *well, I actually love them xD*
pockypenguinmonster
#2
Chapter 6: i feel like i just got trolled? xD LOL

THIS IS AMAZING~~~~~~ THIS IS PURE TROLL~~~
AyumiKonaoko
#3
Chapter 6: I CAN'T....I JUST OMG...THIS WAS PERFECT! I EVEN MADE SEI READ THIS! *O* LOLOLOL
(Though the entire time he was like who is this person? Who is that? XD) LOL

I AM SERIOUSLY GOING TO READ THIS OVER AGAIN!

HOW ARE YOU SO AMAZING? AND WHAT MISTAKES? THIS WAS FLAWLESS I TELL YOU! I can't wait for your next fic! <3

I MISSED YOUR UPDATES SO MUCH THAT WHEN IT SAID "new updates", I took a picture of it xD
fai-chan
#4
Chapter 6: G.E.N.I.U.S.!!!

THIS IS REALLY LIKE A CONCLUSION IN A MOVIE!! THIS SHOULD REALLY BE MADE INTO A MOVIE!!

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YabuHanna
#5
Chapter 5: MOTHER OF CHRISTIANFVCKINGGREY *O*
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OKAY, I'LL SHUT UP NOW. *coughs* UPDATE *coughs* NOW.
fai-chan
#6
Chapter 5: i commented already but when i refreshed the page...NOTHING WAS POSTED!! GAHHHH~~!! *SCRAPES FACE OFF*

WHERE IS MY PRECIOUS COMMENT???

anyways..

OH MYY F****** FREAKING ASDFGHJKBSUAGDFUAGVUWEEFTGWTAWAWE!!! *currently using the keyboard as a piano*

"Baby....sweetie..cupcake..sweetiepie..."

OH MY DEAREST YUYAN, DO I LOOK LIKE A PIECE OF PASTRY TO YOU??? LOL. XDD

a-a-and why does THAT word have to be CAPITALIZED???!? EMPHASIZING MUCHHH??!?
MY EYES WIDENED AND I WAS LIKE: "HAAAA!????"

OH AND YAMA-CHAN!! GAMBATTE NE?!
*offers a mountain of STRAWBERRIES to the YamaRio couple*
AyumiKonaoko
#7
Chapter 5: This is... LOVE! I feel like,y comments are repeating themselves but- I CAN'T FIND THE RIGHT WORDS TO SAY.. OMG OMG OMG I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. PLEASEEEE UPDATE. OMG I KNOW YOUR SICK AND ALL BUT THE NEXT CHAPTER.. I WANT TO READ IT SO NADLY. HOW ARE YOU FEELING. REMEMBER IF YAMA DOESN'T HELP YOU AT ALL THEN I SHALL NAKE HIM. MOUUUUUU IM DYING FOR THE NEXT ONE! ><