Lovestruck

Description

 

Do Kyungsoo was a Love God who didn’t believe in love. 

 

 

 

                   Kim Jongin was a guy fated to love someone else.

 

 

Foreword

 

Pairing: Kim Jongin (Kai) x Do Kyungsoo (D.O.)

Genre: Romance, Fantasy,

Rating: PG -13

Disclaimer: This is not real. 

 

 

A/N: It's been a long time since I wrote something this weird... XD

Still, reading, commenting and subscribing would mean SO much! 

This is for the Fable Me This: 2012 [Writing] Contest, run by BaiLingLing.

 

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lidia00
#1
Chapter 7: OMG!! I love you author-nim <3<3 this fic is so amazing, wonderful and ONE OF THE BESTTTTT!
Wow kai is so cute like puppy >///< and i like how kyungsoo is dominant...and funny taobaek LOLOL
Thank u for ur writing!!!
Please please please continue.....update soon!!!!!
EIBBB_KPOP #2
Chapter 7: Lol i cracked up reading this story
nkenyang #3
Chapter 7: omg! Kyung is soooo unconsciously falling head over heals for Jongin and he dun even know it! xD

"at least he likes cats" lmao!
theentrancestone
#4
Chapter 7: "Because, seriously, I’m going to, seriously. Any minute now."....Waiting
"and Zitao is the violent, Chinese mafia cop who beats the rest of you into submission. "hahaha perfect image
"Badass Timelord would have kicked my to next century (literally, I’m afraid)" *happy for the reference/great job!*
" Do Chinese people not speak sarcasm? Wait, was that racist?"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
"Reminds me of my grandpa who loved Japanese yakuza movies and only knew how to say ‘you bastard’ and ‘stick ‘em up’ in Japanese."hahahahaha whaaaaaat??
"Like the boy who cried wolf, or whatever."WOOOAAAA RELEVANT TOO,IT BLEW MY MIND
"I like him because he’s more serious than kids his age; I like him because he’s innocent and cute; I like him because he is always curious about me. But in the end, the truth is, I like him because I just do. Because if the reason I fell for him is an arrow stuck in my chest, then how can there be logic to love?"FAVORITE THING
"Jongin with his innocent pleading look has become, I think, the rock that tore my knee and the only person who can kiss it better."
"A confused-looking guy – Lay?-"
"He deadpans in a slightly foreign accent that reminds me of Tao and zombies in Chinese thrillers."EXCUSE ME *ROLF*
"sitting on top of his couch, like he’s king of the world, drinking hot milk and planning his next attack on Suho."accurate
“At least Suho likes cats.” BAM
Woaa,great,filling chapter. Full of fun,hilarious punchlines and really cute stuff and then THE PERFECTION OF WHY HE LIKES HIM UGH
Totally conpensated for the late update author-nim, it was puurfect!
suppai #5
Chapter 7: aww this end~ a-ha chen is sooo funny <3
omg i love how kyungsoo's dependent kai looks sometimes~ and i definitely love how dominant kyungsoo is here, he just don't have his innocent and immaculate image as usual.
and ooooomo some cute/funny baektao here <3
awww thanks a lot <3
nightli #6
I really don't like writing comments because i'm too lazy to do that but i really really like Kyungsoo here & the other characters!!! Thank you for an update! Your story is really awesome!!! Keep up the good work
SapphireSeptember
#7
Chapter 6: Okay, when D.O was describing who his Head Cupid was, I was like, 'this person sounds familiar...'
*Then Heechul pops into the story*
OMG! BWAHAHAHAHA! So, it was Heechul! No wonder the Head Cupid sounded familiar! XD

Aw Jongin is just so cute in here.
The other D.U.L.L are so weird!
I want Baekhyun and Tao and Kris to appear too!

Good fic idea BTW! It's so captivating!
theentrancestone
#8
Chapter 6: "When I stand so high above everything, I can’t help but get detached from the world. Looking down on a maze-like city, I begin to see people as mice running around frantically and suddenly, the mere thought of sending arrows to their hearts makes me feel like a real Love God."This is my favorite thing.
suppai #9
Chapter 6: i'm a little lazy now to comment but wow.
this chapter was a such masterpiece, and i really needed leave a comment here~

jongin asking kyungsoo to live together~~ /dies
jongin call kyungsoo just because he missed him~~ /sobs
chen like a stalker beside suho~~ /cries
chanyeol the legend of the strays~~ /LOL

omg i really laught a lot in this chapter~ is kai gain more personality? or is just my imagination? haha kyung will him from dance school~ so cute *o*~~

and the strays~ impossible not fall for them <3 just like a troublesome gang, i like it xD

i'm totally gled that ther others members had a little part here, will you planing put some others pairings? i see a little baektao and suchen besides kaisoo <3 if you put some little krisyeol i'll be the happiest people in the wolrd <3

omg i really need to work~~ but a big thank you for the update <3
FlameFlowerful
#10
Chapter 6: actually this job is sounds really cool. sounds like avengers-style shooting arrows and LMAO I love the members in D.U.L.L. (what does that even stand for rly)

hahaha
ahahahahahahah
(YES FOR SUCHEN

and uh.
do we get xiuhan in this? <3)