06. [Rubric] Title

It’s Time to Review Reviews!

 

The section dedicated to scoring a fanfic’s title should not take up too many marks on its own; it is, after all, merely a title. I personally allocate the title section five points, and I believe it really shouldn’t be any less or more. Less would perhaps be more preferable than more, though, in this case, if five really doesn’t work for you. Definitely no more than ten.

There are a few main things you should be taking into consideration when marking the title.

 

Ability to grab attention

One of the most important jobs of a title is to serve as an attention-capturing feature; the few seconds readers spend reading the words placed in the title section is essentially the amount of time you have to sell your story. Therefore, it should come as no surprise that reviewers should be paying some heed to the title’s ability to do so – that is, successfully endorse the story.

 

Originality

This could be one of the hardest boxes to check off, especially in the world of fanfiction. In order to meet this criterion, the title obviously cannot be overly cliché or common. If you feel as though you are guaranteed at least another five different search results by entering the title into the AFF search engine, then it probably isn’t the most original one out there.

 

Length

Now, this one could be debatable, in some cases. Many reviewers tend to have the incorrect perception that all long titles are equal to poor titles, and end up scoring the author lowly on the section based solely against the explanation that their title was too lengthy. While, ideally, a title really shouldn’t be more than approximately six words or so (in my personal opinion), sometimes long titles are implemented for a certain purpose. For example, some comedy stories will deliberately adopt a ridiculously long title to serve the purpose of humour, colloquialism, absurdity etc. It is imperative that the genre and style of the fic be taken into account when judging the title’s length. One-worded titles should also be evaluated appropriately – contrary to the misconception of some reviewers, titles that consist of one sophisticated or eloquent word do not always equate to providing ‘a sense of mystery’.

 

Relevance to story

A title should, first and foremost, encapsulate the general idea of the story. Do note, however, that for some works, it may not be until you are well into the story that you realize the role the title plays. For some, readers won’t understand the purpose of the title until they have finished reading the entire story, when everything has tied together and the title finally seems to make sense. It is also this reason that makes judging a title’s relevance slightly difficult for incomplete stories that fall under this category.

 

Correct spelling/grammar

Quite self-explanatory, I believe.

 

Use of symbols/emoticons

No symbols. No emoticons. It’s as simple as that. This means the inclusion of any flowery or ornate signs, marks, icons, logos, emoji etc. Though they do certainly carry out the role of capturing the reader’s attention, they are inappropriate and forbidden, in most cases, and marks should be deducted immediately upon sighting them – unless the reviewer can judge for themselves and deem the usage of the symbols fitting, which, most of the time, won’t and shouldn’t be the case.

 

As you can see, a section as small and simple as the title actually encompasses many factors that need to be carefully considered and thought over before choosing the single-digit number to award the author.

The title should not be fully reviewed until the reviewer has completed the reading process of the story, which may come as a surprise to many. I have seen many reviews where the title section clearly indicates that the reviewer simply provided the author with a short and concise explanation that did not point out how well the title serves as a representation to the fanfic and how relevant it is to the story. Assessing a title simply by its originality and attention-grabbing ability is not enough. The core existence of the title and its accuracy in encompassing the story need to be sensibly evaluated in order to provide an accurate and justifiable score and reasonable accompanying explanation, and that clearly won’t be possible until the reviewer has gone through the reading process in its entirety.

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stupidfella
#1
Chapter 6: This is so freaking awesome and helpful- <3
Please update soon ;o;
natures
#2
Chapter 6: I really agreed with your (this) story
and it helps me a lot...
Please take care of it and continue ;A;
pxmens
#3
I have a question regarding deducting points: do you think it's right to give zero points just because the reviewer says it plainly ?
Because I once sent a request for a review and I got below 20 points out of 100 just because most of the sections which got graded 'plainly '. The reviewer also said word for word 'your plot maybe is original but it '.
Also is it right to use such words such as , hell, and other which are always used in this century?
Just want to hear your opinion because that one review for my fanfic was stuck in my head which deleted right afterwards.
shawolistic #4
Chapter 6: the section about the title was spot on! There have been numerous times when reviewers have just written "It is too long for a title" and skipped on to the next section not actually paying the sort of attention a title, especially the excessively long and the excessively short ones need. Old comedies and the early new comedies reveled in their long, ridiculous and farcical titles!
contrarily, I have met reviewers who are not fans of one-word titles. if anything, they are pretty anti one-word titles (obviously, not a healthy indulgence either. they believe such titles are too elusive.
Also a lot of author do resort to flowery words when it comes to titles to "grab attention". This practice is something which passively condoned by reviewers, readers and authors. So I really find it difficult to laugh at such titles because technically, they are trying to meet the criteria of a "good and acceptable" title (and failing miserably). I have had several reviewers politely and impolitely point out how a more flamboyant title could have done more justice to the "attractiveness" of a story.
As for symbols and emoticons, I have never seen one on the title of a novel however, we all know that the dynamics of novel writing do not apply to the fanfic world since the fanfic world is freer and more experimental only because of a lack of scrutiny. Having said that, I am intrigued by the prospect of using titles with symbols. Not just abusing symbols to attract more readers or to make a story "prettier" but to genuinely add on to the title. In such case, to establish the normative style of writing titles in such strict boundaries leaves little space for possibilities.
P.S- sorry for indulging in this commenting spree. AFF does have several good workshops some polite, some rude but all of them very informative but I like the fact that yours is so concise. It actually encourages me to finish a chapter and not be intimidated by the length.
shawolistic #5
Chapter 5: I genuinely can't rant enough about reviewers who deduct marks despite the story/section being "absolutely perfect". It has happened to me several times and each time I have avoided asking for a reason because I assumed if they had a reason to deduct my marks they would have mentioned it.
I think some reviewers feel that if they give full marks in sections that they deem important and consequently, allot higher total marks in, renders them as someone who is either very lenient or is not a "serious" reviewers. One of the popular stereotype on this site is that a "serious" stereotype is highly stingy with her marks which is okay as long as there is a justified reason for it. whether there is or not i'll never come to know because as you have mentioned they just do not write it down or even hint towards it!
shawolistic #6
Chapter 2: I am in two minds about this particular issue. While I am in complete agreement with your argument, I do feel that the fanfiction community especially that of AFF is more informal than any other community (for e.g. hpff) This informality persists because of the use of emoticons and abbreviations in reviews. What this sort of approach towards writing reviews does is that it often puts the author at ease. This is to be taken into account because AFF, unlike hpff, where stories are screened by admins and if deemed worthy, are published online, is all inclusive.
Since it is also a place for not-so-good writers to write stories and also get it reviewed maybe it is advisable to keep the reviews informal in such cases (?) Of course, choosing "such" cases questions the criteria of meritocracy on this site which is subject to doubt. however, my point is that if there are certain not-so-respectable transgressions in the realm of "professional reviewing", on this site in particular, then I think some of these transgressions can be forgiven simply because it helps make certain authors feel at ease. To put it simply, one can write a scathing review but mellow the effect a little with some random digressions, farces, abbreviations or emoticons.
Also, and this is just a doubt, if a review is published in an all accessible medium like the internet i.e, the review can't be made any more public than it already is then doesn't it give us the right to copy paste stuff from it as long as we credit the reviewers. We do that with articles, essays, journals, other genuinely professional reviews, then why not with the ones on AFF? :\
KrystalHana #7
Chapter 6: i am so grateful for this chapter! i've always been stuck at how to grade titles. do i grade them at first glance or after i finish the stories and such. but this really helped!
bless this chapter :D
falliblefantasy
#8
Chapter 6: Agreeing with every point up there! I just face-palm every time I see stories with a whole lot of fancy symbols and weird fonts. I mean, it's fine for a shop to have those, but stories? You don't ever see books on shelves that have hearts and stars and fleur-de-lis symbols in their titles ><

Oh and there's another thing. I realised lots of people here like to use titles with foreign languages like Latin. I'm not saying it's a definite no-no, but really, some don't even fit the story's theme/ genre/ 'feel', which makes me wonder if they use those words just to look cool ~
contradictori
#9
Chapter 6: Amen to this.

Another point I'd like to raise though, is the use of overly flowery words. Sometimes I would scroll down an author's fanfics, and it would be chock-full of stories with complicated titles featuring English words even the dictionary doesn't actually realise the existence of. Like, wow people. This is not a vocabulary contest. Make some sense and stop trying too hard to impress people; let your writing speak for you rather than how mindblowingly complicated the title is.
BringingyBaek
#10
As a reviewer who only started reviewing a month ago, I find this tutorial very helpful!
I have a question though: Is it okay if the total marks is over 100?
I made 125 the total marks because I felt like some criteria's needed more attention and I made the total marks for them higher than the rest.