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Reincarnation: ≈PIRATES ERA≈
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Raera brushed her long brown hair in front of the mirror *the engagement party* she sighed She was already wearing her dress with the help of her servants of course   Her dress was a white silk dress with long sleeves which at the end was wrapped around her middle finger and flowy, 4 layer, long skirt. She already wore her croset inside like usual and there was another croset from the dress to cover it. There was gold ribbons at the front and a gold ribbon around her waist   "Young miss, young master is here to see you" one of the servant said "Let him in" Raera took a deep breath as she stood up very straight "Hello there darling" Gangmin came in smiling   "You can leave now" he said to the servant, the servant bowed before leaving "You look beautiful darling.. I might get jealous tonight" he suddenly laughed "Who am I kidding? Who would look at you anyways after finding out your mine" he smirked as he put an arm around her waist The door suddenly opened   "How's my sister and my brother-in-law?" Myungjae came in "Hyungnim" Gangmin smiled brightly as he bowed "Look at my favourite couple. You look pretty sister" Myungjae smiled "Thank you brother. You look not bad yourself" Raera smiled   "I should leave you alone, but my parents wants to meet you Gangmin" he said "I shouldn't keep them waiting then. See you later darling" Gangmin pecked Raera's forehead before going out with Myungjae "Aish.." she wiped her forehead like t
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MarshmallowL6666 #1
That was probably one of the best stories i have ever read
Lion_Heart36
#2
Chapter 3: Ok, so, where is the setting? Because now you are specifying clothes but they don't match Korean historical style clothing. Sure this could be an alternative universe, but we don't know that. I don't mean to be picky, but I know a lot about pirates and that time period, and also quiet a bit about Asian pirates and that is quiet a bit different. Also what I forgot to state in my comment in chapter one is that their speech is too modern as well, which makes me even more confused. Also what I forgot to state about chapter two is I don't now what anyone is doing. I don't know where they are, what anyone looks like, if they are sitting or standing or what. Did Baekhyun enter a room, or just randomly bring up the subject and already have been there, but where is there? I really don't want to seem mean or anything but I wanted to at least give some constructive criticism because based on many comments it seems this story has a lot going for it, and so far it has some great ideas.
Lion_Heart36
#3
Chapter 1: Uhm...what time period is this? Becuase you don't describe their clothes at all, and you said this was going back to a time there were pirates and if that is so...there wouldn't be vinyl players. In the 1600s if someone wanted music, it would be played live. If this is a more modern time I would like to know when, that way I can picture what they are wearing better since you don't specify, although it still wouldn't be in the time of vinyl players, because pirates were very uncommon, basically non existent, by that time period.
gemmymars #4
Chapter 63: Aww~ this story's so good and I liked how it was different from the other stories I've read so far^^ I really enjoyed reading the story authornims!!^
VICTORYiaLee #5
Chapter 63: Awwwwww. The ending!! >.< FEELS!!
cocoflower #6
Chapter 13: Lol , ha this is cute , cute kai ~
cocoflower #7
Chapter 10: Wifey... chanyeol.... ok ... kai blushes ... Lol
cocoflower #8
Chapter 8: I love this... nice
cocoflower #9
Chapter 6: LOL Chanyeol just to find a wifey ahaha xDD
cocoflower #10
Chapter 2: Lol suho ok