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Reincarnation: ≈PIRATES ERA≈
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"Hey guys" Baekhyun walked towards his friends "Guess what I got?" he smiled   "Err... Got laid again?" Suho answered with a bored tone "That! and this!" Baekhyun held up an invitation card "The girl gave the card saying there's going to be an engagement party for a noblemen couple tomorrow. Should we go?" he asked   "Invitation?!" Chanyeol took it from him and just read the first line    'You are invited to the engagement party of Kim Gangmin and Yong Raera '   *Engagement party + girl + love = wife* Chanyeol widened his eyes "We're going!" he said without giving any second thoughts "Seriously Chanyeol? Why do we need to go there?" Kai asked "Just because" he grinned   "Chanyeol. I think we shouldn't-" Suho got cut off "I'm the captain here! So what I say goes!" Chanyeol crosses his arms and smiled   "Sometimes.. I wondered why you were the captain again.. I always wanted to be that.." Suho mumbled before walking away "What ever you say dude" Kai shook his head before walking off with Suho   "My invitation" Baekhyun took back the invitation before going into his room *I can't wait for tomorrow* he grinned    
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MarshmallowL6666 #1
That was probably one of the best stories i have ever read
Lion_Heart36
#2
Chapter 3: Ok, so, where is the setting? Because now you are specifying clothes but they don't match Korean historical style clothing. Sure this could be an alternative universe, but we don't know that. I don't mean to be picky, but I know a lot about pirates and that time period, and also quiet a bit about Asian pirates and that is quiet a bit different. Also what I forgot to state in my comment in chapter one is that their speech is too modern as well, which makes me even more confused. Also what I forgot to state about chapter two is I don't now what anyone is doing. I don't know where they are, what anyone looks like, if they are sitting or standing or what. Did Baekhyun enter a room, or just randomly bring up the subject and already have been there, but where is there? I really don't want to seem mean or anything but I wanted to at least give some constructive criticism because based on many comments it seems this story has a lot going for it, and so far it has some great ideas.
Lion_Heart36
#3
Chapter 1: Uhm...what time period is this? Becuase you don't describe their clothes at all, and you said this was going back to a time there were pirates and if that is so...there wouldn't be vinyl players. In the 1600s if someone wanted music, it would be played live. If this is a more modern time I would like to know when, that way I can picture what they are wearing better since you don't specify, although it still wouldn't be in the time of vinyl players, because pirates were very uncommon, basically non existent, by that time period.
gemmymars #4
Chapter 63: Aww~ this story's so good and I liked how it was different from the other stories I've read so far^^ I really enjoyed reading the story authornims!!^
VICTORYiaLee #5
Chapter 63: Awwwwww. The ending!! >.< FEELS!!
cocoflower #6
Chapter 13: Lol , ha this is cute , cute kai ~
cocoflower #7
Chapter 10: Wifey... chanyeol.... ok ... kai blushes ... Lol
cocoflower #8
Chapter 8: I love this... nice
cocoflower #9
Chapter 6: LOL Chanyeol just to find a wifey ahaha xDD
cocoflower #10
Chapter 2: Lol suho ok