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Reincarnation: ≈PIRATES ERA≈
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The air was tense the next day Kai wouldn't talk to Sehun, and Rin won't talk to Kai Even though Kai tried to talk to Rin, she always avoid him   "I hate when things becomes like these..." Raera rested her head on her hands as she looked out at the 'couple'  "Well.. You can always have happy moments in a relationship" Suho shrugged   "Are they even in a relationship from the start?" Baekhyun crosses his arms as he leans against a pole "I think it was getting there... I'm not sure.." Raera scratch her unitchy head   "Don't think too much Wifey" Chanyeol backhugged her "I'm sure thinks will work out soon" he smiled "Let's hope it will" Raera sighed   "It will~ Plus! Aren't we going to be their cupid?" Chanyeol grinned "Cupid?" Baekhyun frowned "Seriously guys!"    "What?" Chanyeol raised an eyebrow at him "You guys wanted to play cupid! Without me! Wah~!! My pride hurts!" Baekhyun wailed as he hit his chest for a few times   "Why do you want to be a Cupid anyways?" Suho asked "Because~ Joining two lovers together is my speciality!" Baekhyun exclaimed proudly   "Speciality my ! More like having one nights stands is his speciality" Chanyeol whispered to Raera, which doesn't seem like a whisper at all "I heard that" Baekhyun narrowed his eyes at him "You were meant too! Plus!" Chanyeol put an arm around Raera's shoulders and grinned    "Kai is my crew and Rin is Raera's Best friend! So we are suited to be their cu
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MarshmallowL6666 #1
That was probably one of the best stories i have ever read
Lion_Heart36
#2
Chapter 3: Ok, so, where is the setting? Because now you are specifying clothes but they don't match Korean historical style clothing. Sure this could be an alternative universe, but we don't know that. I don't mean to be picky, but I know a lot about pirates and that time period, and also quiet a bit about Asian pirates and that is quiet a bit different. Also what I forgot to state in my comment in chapter one is that their speech is too modern as well, which makes me even more confused. Also what I forgot to state about chapter two is I don't now what anyone is doing. I don't know where they are, what anyone looks like, if they are sitting or standing or what. Did Baekhyun enter a room, or just randomly bring up the subject and already have been there, but where is there? I really don't want to seem mean or anything but I wanted to at least give some constructive criticism because based on many comments it seems this story has a lot going for it, and so far it has some great ideas.
Lion_Heart36
#3
Chapter 1: Uhm...what time period is this? Becuase you don't describe their clothes at all, and you said this was going back to a time there were pirates and if that is so...there wouldn't be vinyl players. In the 1600s if someone wanted music, it would be played live. If this is a more modern time I would like to know when, that way I can picture what they are wearing better since you don't specify, although it still wouldn't be in the time of vinyl players, because pirates were very uncommon, basically non existent, by that time period.
gemmymars #4
Chapter 63: Aww~ this story's so good and I liked how it was different from the other stories I've read so far^^ I really enjoyed reading the story authornims!!^
VICTORYiaLee #5
Chapter 63: Awwwwww. The ending!! >.< FEELS!!
cocoflower #6
Chapter 13: Lol , ha this is cute , cute kai ~
cocoflower #7
Chapter 10: Wifey... chanyeol.... ok ... kai blushes ... Lol
cocoflower #8
Chapter 8: I love this... nice
cocoflower #9
Chapter 6: LOL Chanyeol just to find a wifey ahaha xDD
cocoflower #10
Chapter 2: Lol suho ok