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Reincarnation: ≈PIRATES ERA≈
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"Why am I wearing this again?" Rin frowned "Shh! I'm concertrating! Lift your arms up!!!" Baekhyun slapped her leg "Oww!!" Rin scoffed but straighten up her arms to her side   "But it's in the middle of the night! Why am I wearing a dress in the middle of the night?! I am not going to sleep wearing this" Rin sighed "It's not middle of the night Rin.. Hold you breath" Raera said as she tied Rin's Crocet   "I don't get how you can rip this up" Baekhyun shook his head as he sew the skirt "Not so tight!! Can't breath!!!" Rin move her hands in circles "Sorry~" Raera stuck her tongue out as she loosen the crocet a bit   Baekhyun stood up and took some heels "Here" he kneeled down and put the heels in front of Rin "I am not going to wear a- Hey!!!" Rin struggled as Baekhyun lift her foot and put the heel on and did the same to the other foot   "Now!" He got up and clapped "Time for the hair" he took out a chair   "Why?" Rin whined "Now~ Now~" Raera pushed her down on the chair making her sit Raera started braiding Rin's red hair  Baekhyun hand her a ribbon and Raera tied it to Rin's hair   "What with the ribbon and bow?" Rin questioned "Just shut up and let us do our job woman!" Baekhyun rolled his eyes "Well I'm sorry.. Man" Rin faked a cough and looked at the mirror   "Done" Raera smiled as she held Rin's shoulder "So what now?" Rin furrowed her eyebrows "What now? Baekhyun is going to you to the upper d
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MarshmallowL6666 #1
That was probably one of the best stories i have ever read
Lion_Heart36
#2
Chapter 3: Ok, so, where is the setting? Because now you are specifying clothes but they don't match Korean historical style clothing. Sure this could be an alternative universe, but we don't know that. I don't mean to be picky, but I know a lot about pirates and that time period, and also quiet a bit about Asian pirates and that is quiet a bit different. Also what I forgot to state in my comment in chapter one is that their speech is too modern as well, which makes me even more confused. Also what I forgot to state about chapter two is I don't now what anyone is doing. I don't know where they are, what anyone looks like, if they are sitting or standing or what. Did Baekhyun enter a room, or just randomly bring up the subject and already have been there, but where is there? I really don't want to seem mean or anything but I wanted to at least give some constructive criticism because based on many comments it seems this story has a lot going for it, and so far it has some great ideas.
Lion_Heart36
#3
Chapter 1: Uhm...what time period is this? Becuase you don't describe their clothes at all, and you said this was going back to a time there were pirates and if that is so...there wouldn't be vinyl players. In the 1600s if someone wanted music, it would be played live. If this is a more modern time I would like to know when, that way I can picture what they are wearing better since you don't specify, although it still wouldn't be in the time of vinyl players, because pirates were very uncommon, basically non existent, by that time period.
gemmymars #4
Chapter 63: Aww~ this story's so good and I liked how it was different from the other stories I've read so far^^ I really enjoyed reading the story authornims!!^
VICTORYiaLee #5
Chapter 63: Awwwwww. The ending!! >.< FEELS!!
cocoflower #6
Chapter 13: Lol , ha this is cute , cute kai ~
cocoflower #7
Chapter 10: Wifey... chanyeol.... ok ... kai blushes ... Lol
cocoflower #8
Chapter 8: I love this... nice
cocoflower #9
Chapter 6: LOL Chanyeol just to find a wifey ahaha xDD
cocoflower #10
Chapter 2: Lol suho ok