Part II

Salvation

 

They first met on a cloudy day (but then again, everyday was cloudy). The thick green fog had dissipated into a thin, sickly yellow mist. Not safe enough to travel without a gas mask, but much safer than when it had been a fog. Junjin had decided to venture out into the streets of Seoul.

It was a sad sight, once towering buildings reduced to nothing but rubble and ashes, streets empty and littered with filth, and every essence of life gone from the once vibrant city. Junjin knew it was a sickening sight, but he couldn’t help the sense of awe, of wonder as he jumped over fallen debris and strolled through lines upon lines of withered trees.

There was a grotesque sort of beauty to post-apocalyptic Seoul, the sort achievable only by destruction. Sure he hated it, but he would be lying if he said it did not strike a sense of wonderment inside of him.

When he was in the middle of his fifth lap around his neighborhood (because one was just never enough), he heard a slight rustling sound. It was an odd sound, because it wasn’t one of the rustling sound he was used to. And his ‘rustle’ was a different rustle. His was smooth polyester against polyester, the other was of coarse fabric against an even coarser surface.

He paused, turned around to scan the area before him, but nothing was well out of the ordinary—granted the thick green lenses from the gas mask was obscuring his vision. He paused for a while. But when there was no other sound heard, he turned back, figuring he just imagined everything. Because if someone—or something—was actually there, he, she or it would have made themselves known by then. Junjin was not armed and nowhere near dangerous, the only things he had on his person were his clothes, bread cap and gas mask.

Another sound—this time the sound of glass shattering under a hard boot—made Junjin turn around and get into a defensive stance, because even if Junjin meant no harm that didn’t mean the other party will be the same.

The person in front of Junjin froze in the middle of retracting their booted foot. Staring straight at Junjin (at least that was what he presumed, he couldn’t see the other’s face behind their gas mask) as he lowered his foot back to the ground.

Junjin could see that the other person was a male, both from choice of clothes and the way the person moved. He was shorter than Junjin, his hands were clutched close to his body and he took a small step back, as if preparing to run away if Junjin made even a single movement.

He was scared, Junjin realized. Junjin himself didn’t remember when was the last time he had seen another living thing, let alone another person. He understood if the other was wary around him. Seoul had been abandoned by its people when the war ended, but Junjin were one of those who chose to stay. Junjin didn’t know who chose to stay, but he knew he wasn’t the only one.

Relaxing his stance, Junjin stepped back a little from the other male, trying to signal to the other that he did not want to hurt him. They stood in silence, and since the other male had not decided to run away when Junjin let down his guard, Junjin decided to speak.

“What’s your name?” Junjin asked. His voice slightly muffled by the gas mask.

The other didn’t say a word. He didn’t even make a single movement at Junjin’s question.

“What’s your name?” Junjin repeated, louder this time.

Junjin didn’t know if he had been too forceful or too loud, but the other had jumped as if he had been shocked and ran away straight after, clumsily jumping over fallen debris and trudging across bits of broken glass.

Junjin stared hard at the space where the other was, but then sighed and shook his head before heading towards his home. It was a strange encounter, and Junjin would most likely forget about the whole ordeal in a matter of days, so there was really no use putting too much thought into it. Besides, Seoul was a big city, what was the chance that they would coincidentally meet again?

(But what Junjin didn’t know back then was that the gears of fate had finally turned)

A/N: next one in a few days

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Wunderbar
#1
Chapter 14: I LOVE your story! I couldn't stop thinking of Fallout 4 the entire time I was reading it and as it's one of my favorite games, it made your story all the more enjoyable. :) I can't help but wonder what happened to Eric and where he is. Is he a leader of some band of survivors somewhere? Are Minwoo and Dongwan ever going to show? I also love your characterization of Jindy. So different and yet so alike still in many ways. Really a job well done! I hope you get to continue this but fully understand if you can't. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
NIROVA #2
Chapter 14: WAAAAHHH!!! A new chapter!!!! and a quite important game changer one. The world is now full of infinite possibilities.
Junjin living with Andy...could that become a permanent status? Could Andy change his heart and let Junjin take Junghyuk's place somehow and Junjin do the same? I'm just wondering, will Junghyuk ever come back?...and what if he actually does?
I'm just thinking out loud here, hahahaha.
Thank you so much for this chapter, yur hard work is really noticeable in every chapter, the story plot is very engaging...I just can't stop reading once I see there's a new chapter out!
Keep the passion on!
Phoenix_Soar
#3
Chapter 14: My, I can see what you meant by a 'pivotal' chapter. This chappie is everything! :D
I love the beginning, how Junjin's conflicting feelings about Andy is still there - that split moment of suspecting Andy - but in his heart, he has definitely taken the step to accepting Andy, trusting his sincerity. Ahh this part, "Junjin knew that whatever Andy did and said was heartfelt and sincere, enough to chip away at the frozen walls of his blackened heart." ♥ ♥ ♥

I also love this particular aspect of your fic - how the audience is left guessing, as much as the two characters are left guessing about each other. Junjin's most prized possessions - ooh I can't wait until we - and Andy? - get a good look into that bag XD

That detail about Junjin enjoying listening to Andy's voice - GAHH MY HEART. Oh yesss, we can definitely see not-so-platonic like on the horizon now hurhurhur.

Your Andy is ... I love your Andy. I love the brightness of ihs personality, and how through all that, he still gives off that vibe that something is off about him and how you convey that so well through Junjin's eyes. It does a good job of putting the reader on edge in certain scenes involving Andy, and also increases our curiosity, that's for sure! :D

"Whatever he was getting into when he decided to stay at Andy’s, he knew that it was going to be troublesome." - Yeah, Choongjae, like falling in lurve.

I'm so giddy after reading this chapter, I'M SO EXCITED FOR THE FUTURE, BECAUSE YES, BRING ON THAT ROMANTIC!JINDY~
Ahh this fic is still amazing and keeps me on my toes and draws me into its world completely. I'm so happy you updated. Good luck with the next chapters~♥
NIROVA #4
Chapter 13: wow, this story is really one of my favorites!!! Since the update came out I had to read it all over again, but it was completely worth it. It made me fall all over again this pair of guys who try so hard to survive not only the day-by-day post-apocalyptic Seoul but also their fragile (sort of forced at the beginning) relationship, and I found myself wondering what would have really happened to Junghyuk.
You have a great imagination and the way you transmit Junjin and Andy's outer as well as inner worlds is really alluring, I sincerely appreciate the time you spend working on your writing (any of your stories), and all the passion you put into it.
Thank you for coming back to this story, and thank you for keeping the hard work of imagining and translating into words this sad but hope giving universe.
Thank you so much, and don't ever give up, no matter how much this story takes to be completed, this reader will always wait patiently for it.
puking
#5
Chapter 13: embrace the light junjin...embrace andy's friendship TTATT
Jasonlee #6
Update soon authornim.. I love your story.. Please update soon
kill3rpuppy #7
Chapter 13: I love this story!! I have been looking for so long to find a well written jindy story and your's is the best! I'm glad that junjin is starting to warm up to the idea of being friends with Andy. I also wonder when Andy will realism that Eric is dead. He is isn't he? Anyway great story and I hope you plan to continue it. =)
Phoenix_Soar
#8
Chapter 13: I internally screamed when I saw the update! I'm so glad you're back with this fic :D
I missed a couple of chapters earlier, so I had a great time catching up with this story. Totally loving how the tension between Junjin and Andy is thawing out.
And I adore this chapter because Junjin is finally admitting to himself he's changing thanks to Andy. And that he likes Andy XD Hehehe ain't no one safe from Andy's sun-powered beaming smiles :D
This is still one of the best Jindy fics I've ever come across and perhaps, love best, so I'm always willing to wait for updates. Thanks for this chapter! ♥
puking
#9
Chapter 12: HHHHH jinnie your walls are crumbling!!
andy's sun powered beams are highly effective!! ^p^
TheLetterV
#10
Chapter 11: Wahhh you just KNOW how to write those tension moments rightly! I love how you portray the moments so well, distinguish between the silences, the awkwardness to the peacefulness. It's a great achievement to be able to make it so clear..so emphasized..so comprehensible. Really, that's amazing achievement for a writer; you did great. d-(^ヮ^)

And now for the chapter: that's so out of character for Junjin to actually go on with Andy &ask him questions about his past..oh&swing him..&touch his hand in the process..&the whole-..shaking-..-hands..starting-over thing~ (//∇//)
Andy seems to have a hold on Junjin or something.. something that provokes him..
Andy changes him, makes him react even though all Junjin's trying to do is maintain his cold facade, which is obviously not his true self; but it seems that so much time trying to maintain that facade, in addition to the current situation he's gotten into and the lost he had experienced, just made him believe in this facade for a while as it was true.
A lie becomes the truth after you tell it to enough times to convince even yourself.
But Andy, with all his-.. vitality.. makes Junjin's facade crack.
Reading all of this is so captivating, thrilling, interesting.. and with all the coldness, it's still exciting.

You've done a great job writing this chapter, chincharo.. your writing skills are fantastic. The developments you chose are slow, yet, have a strong impact. I really like it that way, those slow developments are convenient, reasonable & rational. They fit the situation, the mood, the tense- slow-yet-timeless -feeling in the air perfectly. The flow of the story is absolutely making it all so very realistic.

I love the psychological side of it, the unsolved-unanswered questions, not only the reader has but also the characters have about each other and themselves.
I hope you'll have much luck writing the next chapters! 11 chapters is honorable- you've really done a great job writing this story! FIGHTING! ❤ o(〃^▽^〃)o