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Stay Alive

3RD POV

    "What are we going to do?" Sooyoung asked. " We have to get rid of them" Leeteuk said. "What we cant!" Jessica said shocked that anyone would even think of harming their maknae's. " Sorry Jessica but we have to stop them before any of us get killed" Onew told her. She nodded. In the room they were in was a barred window and the bars were lose enogh to be taken off which Onew did and handed one to Leeteuk, Kagin, Jonghyun, Key, and himself. "Ok on the count of 3 i'll open the door and if you see one them hit them ok the rest of you stay here" Onew said. He counted to three and opened the door they jumped out but there was no one there."Where are they?" Kagin said. Then all off a sudden Mir and Taemin came out of no where and came and swung at him with a crow bar. Once he was on the floor head bleeding they gave each other a highfive and ran away before the others could catch them.

     NOTE; SORRY ITS SOOOO SHORT BUT MY MOM IS REALLY PISSINF ME OFF AND IS GETTING REALLLY ANNOYING BUT ILL TRY TO UPDAT A SUPER DUPER LONG CHAPTER ON FRIDAY I PROMISE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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itstraac #1
Chapter 10: omg fx whyy
yurifan14
#2
Lol so sad I hate it but love it
hello-nan-nie #3
woa.... it is so.... mean! i knew they are going to "finish" their jobs! woahoho..
ukiss7
#4
(hands covers mouth) i new it i jus knew it....<br />
i didnt know who it would be but i was just thinking....."What if they are doing good and later on they come back and kill them...but i dint expect it to be f(x).....and i didnt know tha maknae's would be killed O.O...this is the second fics that i read and they were evil...total twist. lol<br />
but all in all...great story....i had a blast reading....<br />
you keep me on the edge of my seat, and my eyes wide.:D<br />
great just great...koawoyo chingu...^^
ukiss7
#5
iam so glad that they made it out..<br />
now i wonder whats gonna happen...<br />
i like really held my breath when i thought that onew was gonna die...until joon whistled and got the two on the ground....i was like so relieved...my eyes went from wide back to normal...lol<br />
wow one chap. left...final.....hmm....i wonde3r what will happen...to them and to the maknae's.....<br />
come on lets find out....
daydreams_
#6
Whao, that's a twist in the end. :O
sapat_lang_o2
#7
evil maknaes ! .. XDD
Ssunshine #8
Wow, I imagined it like a movie O.O , it was so good~
byungsoo93
#9
Omg!! My shinee!! Taemin!! Dongho!! <br />
Aww this story ended... Well I LOVE IT!!
naughtymoose123
#10
Why is Yoona not here? Lol. Atleast she didn't get hurt.