Please don't judge me too hard for my first one-shot. I just got inspired and wanted to write something down. I know I'm not a fantastic writer, but it'd be good to receive some comments from some readers.

I know it's not right for me to read Lay's ex-gf's letter to him, but I stumbled across it on Tumblr and felt the need to convey some emotional writing down. I'm in a creative writing class and I need some constructive criticism on the way I structure my writing, so I felt that maybe if I posted this up, I could get some.

Once again, I'm sorry if I offend anyone by writing this piece. I know it's not exactly the most wordy piece of writing that many of you may have read, but please understand as a writer and a reader that this is completely FICTIONAL and that I drew inspiration from her words. 

Also, please do not plagiarize and take my words somewhere else. I'll be having this posted on my final project by the end of this year so even if you do take my words out of this place, my tertiary education institution will hunt you down :D Thanks very much for obliging and I hope what you read is pleasant to your eyes.