Caring For A Maknae

Description

Taemin goes for a Maknae outing with Mir, Sehun, Tao, Ren, and a few others. When he comes home, he's in tears and refuses to tell what took place - only that Mir was the one who caused it all. Similar situations seem to be popping up all over the place as the Maknae's from each group start complaining of odd feelings and discomfort, and Seungho and Papa Rain's phones are sure to be broken by the end of the night if the calls don't stop pouring in.  There's only one question on everyone's mind:

What the did Mir do?

 

Our cast:

Onew:

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Real name: Lee Jinki

Age: 22

Jonghyun:

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Real name: Kim Jonghyun

Age: 22

Key:

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Real name: Kim Kibum

Age: 20

Minho:

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Real name: Choi Minho

Age: 20

Taemin:

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Real name: Lee Taemin

Age: 19

Rain:

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Real name: Jung Jihoon

Age: 30

Seungho:

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Real name: Yang Seungho

Age: 24

G.O:

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Real name: Jung Byunghee

Age: 24

Joon:

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Real name: Lee Changsun

Age: 24

Thunder:

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Real name: Park Sanghyun

Age: 21

Mir:

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Real name: Bang Cheolyong

Age: 21

Xiumin:

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Real name: Kim Minseok

Age: 22

Luhan:

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Real name: Lu Han

Age: 22

Kris:

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Real name: Wu Fan

Age: 21

Suho:

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Real name: Kim Joonmyeon

Age: 21

Lay:

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Real name: Zhang Yixing

Age: 20

Baekhyun:

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Real name: Byun Baekhyun

Age: 20

Chen:

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Real name: Kim Jongdae

Age: 19

Chanyeol:

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Real name: Park Chanyeol

Age: 19

D.O:

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Real name: Do Kyungsoo

Age: 19

Tao:

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Real name: Huang Zitao

Age: 19

Kai:

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Real name: Kim Jongin

Age: 18

Sehun:

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Real name: Oh Sehun

Age: 18

Baekho:

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Real name: Kang Dongho

Age: 17

Ren:

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Real name: Choi Minki

Age: 16

 

The Couples:

Taemin&Minho:

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Jonghyun&Key:

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Joon&Onew:

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Seungho&G.O:

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Thunder&Mir:

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Xiumin&Tao:

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Luhan&Sehun:

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Kris&Kai:

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Suho&D.O:

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Baekhyun&Chanyeol:

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Lay&Chen:

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Baekho&Ren:

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I had descriptions up for all the couples, but AFF being lovely as it is...everything from the background image to the forward, even the list of characters, was deleted. I'm not happy, and I don't know why it happened, when it happened, or how long people have been looking at the first page thinking "She's an idiot."

 

I'll re-add the couple descriptions later, when I'm feeling less...'light the world on fire' - ey.

Foreword

Minho was relaxing on the couch, waiting for Taemin to come home with an air of utter boredom. He wanted to play video games, but Onew was no good, Key claimed they were bad for your eyes, and Jonghyun was too busy following Key around like a lost little puppy. He really needed Taemin to come home.

Why had he even gone on that stupid Maknae outing? Mir made him uncomfortable, this was something Minho knew for a fact, so why did he agree to just go hang out with him? Well, it wasn’t just Mir he was hanging out with. Sehun and Tao were there, along with Kyuhyun, Ren, and he was pretty sure there were a few others. Why all the labels decided to have a Maknae Day was beyond him, but Taemin should be back soon, right?

As the thought was crossing his mind he heard the doorknob rattling, and he looked over at the door expectantly. When Taemin came in, though, Minho didn’t know how to react. The boy was shaking, tears streaming down his face, and he looked scared. Minho was up and across the room in an instant, and not a moment too soon, because Taemin was falling.

“Tae? Taeminnie?” Minho called to him softly, but the younger boy simply clung to him. He was sniffling and whimpering, and Minho lifted the maknae, letting his legs go around his waist. “What happened?”

“M-Mir...” Taemin started, but his tongue felt thick, his throat dry, and his head felt lighter than air.

“What did Mir do?” Minho asked, but Taemin’s only answer was to drop his head on Minho’s shoulder. A moment later, quiet, frustrated sobs erupted from the maknae, and Minho decided he needed help.

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Djatasma
#1
Chapter 11: Oh! It stopped?!
Foreverdreamergirl1 #2
Chapter 11: please please please finish this!
XkayX1
#3
Chapter 11: No offence but the maknaes should seriously stop ganging up on mir sure he gave them drugs but everyone makes mistakes and it could be worser also they need to learn to forgive yes I would be wanting to kill whoever did that to me but still -_- ALSO I HOPE U UPDATE CAUSE I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHERE MIR IS AND ALSO THIS IS A GREAT FANFIC ;)
BlackRere
#4
Chapter 11: oooh this is a nice fanfic. first one with this style of mystery though xD oh the cliffhangers are worse here xD
ilan14 #5
I've waitede forever....more please.
LittleArmy #6
Chapter 11: Please continue..... I'm really curious
ultimateotaku2412 #7
Chapter 11: PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! I must know how Sehunnie turns out (HE IS MY ULTIMATE BIAS). I love how you wrote this fic. It's sp emotional gripping and leaves me wanting more.
Virelei #8
Chapter 11: Will you be continuing this?
Eye-Candy
#9
Chapter 11: Just discovered this. I was initially reading your OnTae fic "Never Alone" (promise I sub and comment as soon as I finish all the chapters, love that so much) and since I always read the writer's note at the beginning and/or end, I end up here. If at the beginning I was here only the the pairing group I know the better (SHINee) I like EXO too, I know NUES'T, I don't MBLAQ but I know Rain... I felt it was woth to read, and I wasn't desapointed. First, 2MIN and JongKey (love them even if nowadays I worship OnTae) and the must of the must, the couple and search like everywhere but don't find much, XiuTao Awwwww..... /DEAD/ (OMG I just tell my life... *ashamed of being so annoying*)
Just a little thing surprised me. You mentionned Kyuhyun (Super Junior Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!!!) but he's not in the foreword and he don't appear... I don't want to point out, but it's disrupt me somehow... Hum, so... your stories are great, love the two I'm reading know and fighting !
ClaudineB
#10
Chapter 11: I loved this chapter! Anything that has Mir in it and leading to angst draws me in LOL!
Hope you will continue with this story soon, when you feel inspired and have the time.