Minho Holmes

The Mansion of Love and Murder

Everyone saw Fei's corpse. Everyone was worried. When Min said "Poor her", Minho felt something weird. He thought that Min was the murderer.

The next day, everyone noticed that Taemin and Junsu were missing. They worried for them, but more for themselves. They were maybe with the murderer. A letter fell

Dear Kpop Groups,

As you have seen, Fei died in weird circumstance too. And I didn't kill her. Anyway, you will have a challenge. Your challenge is to don't fall. The floor will rise up and more and more the floor will destruct. If you fall you will DIE. The challenge will stopped when someone will DIE. The challenge will be done at the living room.

From The Mansion's Owner

"I don't understand the challenge." Kangin said

"Yes, me too. But, we have to go to the living room." Shindong said

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Taemin and Junsu woke up in a weird room. They was confused

"Where are we?" Junsu asked

"I don't know, but I see a letter." Taemin replied pointing the letter

Dear Taemin and Junsu,

You're trapped in the top secret space. To escape from this room, you will have to do a challenge. It's not dangerous, but it's tiring. You will have to stay one hour, with a leg up. If someone fail during the challenge, the two will DIE. If nobody fail, you will live more.

From The Mansion's Owner

"This challenge will be very tiring." Taemin said

"Yes, I know." Junsu said

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The others arrived at the living room. The ceiling disappeared and the floor rise to the sky. So was scared, because of the vertigo, and some not, just surprised and worried. And a piece of the floor fell. Everyone was surprised and everyone understood the challenge.And more pieces of the floor fell. Without knowing, the piece of floor ,where Victoria was, fell. She fell.

"Oh no!!!!!!!" Victoria yelled.

Everyone was scared for Victoria.

Victoria hit the floor and died.

The floor lowered and the room was like as usual. The ceiling was reappeared. And everyone was watching Victoria's corpse.

"Victoria, why you?" Sulli said, crying

"I can't believe it." Amber said

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Taemin and Junsu were doing the challenge. They were determinated to win. Just 20 minutes and they can win.

"We can do it!" Junsu said

"Yes!" Taemin said

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Gyuri was at her room and she recieved a letter.

Dear Gyuri,

I need to talk to you. Go to the kitchen.

From Min

Gyuri was not worried and decided to go to the kitchen.

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Siwon, Donghae, Onew and Jonghyun (SHINee) went to the living room and saw Minho.

"Hi, Minho. What are you doing?" Jonghyun asked

"I'm reading a book." Minho replied

"Hey, the photo! It's not a book about this mansion?" Siwon asked

"I think yes." Minho replied

"Anyway, I never saw you reading." Onew said

"I had nothing to do." Minho said

"Okay, is there the name of the owner?" Donghae asked

"Yes, Jung Francis (Fake Name :p) was the owner of this mansion, but he died." Minho replied

"I will go to the kitchen." Minho said

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Yoona, Taecyeon, Sunny, Jonghyun (CN Blue), Seohyun and Yonghwa were heading to the Arcade Room and saw Gyuri.

"Gyuri, what are you doing here?" Yoona asked

"Oh, I will see Min." Gyuri answered

"Okay, but what is the piece of paper you're holding?" Sunny asked

"Yes, I was demanding what it could be." Taecyeon said

"Oh, Min send me this, to go to the kitchen." Gyuri replied

"Okay, go have a good talk." Seohyun said

"Okay, bye." Gyuri said

"Yes, bye Gyuri." Yonghwa said

Gyuri left.

"So, what do you want to play?" Jonghyun asked

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Jessica, Krystal, Luna, Tiffany, Seungyeon and Taeyeon were at the Arcade Room.

"Hey, unnie what are you doing?" Krystal asked to Jessica

"I'm playing a fighting game with Luna." Jessica replied

"Yes, and I'm so winning." Luna said

"Unnie, what do you want to do?" Tiffany asked to Taeyeon

"I don't know, Seungyeon do you have an idea." Taeyeon replied

"Maybe pool...?" Seungyeon said

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"Yes, the challenge is finished." Taemin said

"Yes, I'm relieved." Junsu said

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Leeteuk, Suzy, Sooyoung, Kyuhyun, Jiyoung and Ryeowook were at the living room.

"What should we do?" Leeteuk asked

"I don't someone has an idea?" Jiyoung said

"We can go to the Arcade Room." Ryeowook suggested

"No, the room is completed." Suzy said

"Okay, so, what do we can do?" Sooyoung asked

"I really don't know." Kyuhyun replied

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Nicole, Hara, Eunhyuk, Hyoyeon and Minhyuk were going to the kitchen.

"I'm so hungry." Hara said

"Me too. I have to eat." Hyoyeon said

"Okay, let's enter." Eunhyuk said

They tried to enter, but the door was locked.

"What? The door is locked." Minhyuk asked

"Yes, we should take the key." Nicole replied

So, they went search the key and Minho arrived. He noticed that the door ws locked. He wanted to hear what was going on. And he heard a conversation.

"Hi, Gyuri." Min said

"Hi, Min. Why did you want to have a talk to me?" Gyuri asked

"Because, I heard that you might have vision." Min replied

"What!?. No you're mistaking. It's just I feel death when I'm near it." Gyuri said

"Yes, ok." Min said, taking a gun

"What are you doing with this gun?" Gyuri asked, moving back

"I'm going to kill you." Min replied

"What!?. No! No!." Gyuri said

Minho had to do something and he talked.

"Hey, why do you want to kill Gyuri, Min. Or should I say Jung Francis!" Minho yelled

"What are you saying, Minho." Min yelled

"I know that you've killed Nichkhun and Fei nd maybe Changsun." Miho yelled

"No!" Min yelled

"Yes, I knew that it was you. When I remembered the thing you said when you pushed Sungmin in a trap." Minho yelled

*Flashback*

"Why did you pushed Sungmin?" Fei asked

"Yes, I thought you were gentle and all." Suzy said

"I don't know. I felt that I had to push him." Min replied

*End of Flashback*

"And..what?. Everyone can change!" Min said

"Yes, but Min was gentle and care about everyone." Minho said

"No! No!" Min said

"Stop acting, Jung Francis. I know that you put a hypnotiser on Min." Minho said

Min gasped

"Okay, you got me." Min said

"Okay, Gyuri! Take off the hypnotizer that's in Min's hairclip." Minho ordered

"Okay." Gyuri said

"Don't move!" Min said

But, Gyuri moved. Min shot everywhere and failed. Gyuri succeed to take Min's hairclip and crushed it. Min was back to normal.

"Why do I have this gun?" Min asked

"You've killed 3 person and maybe 4, because you've been hypnotized." Minho said

"What? I can't believe that I killed 3 person." Min said

Min took the gun and put it near her head.

"Min, what are you doing?!" Gyuri said

Min shot herself. She died.

"Oh no!" Gyuri said

Author's Note:

Hope you liked this chapter! And I hope you understood this chapter. And tell me if there's something wrong. Sorry for Victoria's and Min's fans, they died in this chapter. Back to the topic: What will be the others' reaction when they will know Min's secrets? Do "Jung Francis" will continue to hypnotize person? Who will be the next to die? See that by reading The Mansion of Love and Murder!

 

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chesmine #1
Chapter 31: can you make for CNBLUE................please.............
please.please.........please.............i wish you will make a great story for them.......
BoiceKings #2
Why late YoY
I want cnblue
Jiolye
#3
Here's the sequel! A Bite In The Dark!
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/262318
HelloPinkPlanet
#4
hurray! :3
kamsa hamnida!
Jiolye
#5
So, here's the results of the votes:
I will make a sequel! And the characters will be...Super Junior, SHINee, 2PM, EXO, f(x), SNSD, KARA and After School!
yoongyoon #6
Yes please make the sequel!
Boys: 2PM, EXO, Super Junior, SHINee
Girls: SNSD, f(x), SISTAR, KARA

Oh and please can you put taecyoon as a couple again? Or 9PM (snsd&2pm) but with taecyoon?
lyre07
#7
What the!It's just a dream!But I love it>.<
Boys:CNBlue,SuperJunior,Exo,Bigabng
Girls:SNSD,After School,f(x),2NE1
Snsdcnblue14
#8
Girls : SNSD , f(x) , after school ,sistar
Boys : CNBLUE , 2pm , big bang , super junior

Pleaseee! The most importnant is SNSD & CNBLUE
By the way your story is great!!!
bimriean
#9
girls:kara,snsd,sistar,4 minute
boys:shinee,suju,2pm,tvxq,bigbang
chocolue #10
Girls: f(x), SNSD, After School (or 4Minute) & Miss A (or SISTAR)
Boys: EXO, Super Junior, SHINee & 2PM

Please have f(x) ~ ^^
Yes make a sequel please!