Can I trust this person?

The Mansion of Love and Murder

Everyone was wondering where Changsun was. So, they were asking Min to know.

 

"Min, where's Changsun?..." Taecyeon asked

"He's...he's..." Min said

"He's what?" Tiffany asked

"He's... He's..." Min said

"What do you want to say?" Jonghyun (SHINee) asked

"He's dead..." Min said

Everyone was shocked.

"How he died?" Nichkhun asked

"..." Min said

Tears began to drop from Min's face.

"He saved my life..." Min said

"What!?" Luna said

"When we were trapped, we had to dodge some fire balls."Min said

*Flashback*

"At a moment, I was tired from running. An, then, a fire ball was thrown to me. I was about to lose. I said it was the end. After I heard an explosion. Changsun blocked the fire ball for me..." Min said

"I won't let you diii..." Changsun said and collapsed

"What is happening?" Min asked

And then a door opened

"You... have to.... go..." Changsun said

"No, you saved my life. I won't let you die!" Min said

A big fire began. The room was burning.

"Go!" Changsun said

"No!" Min said

So, Changsun pushed Min out of the door.

"Bye, Min." Changsun said

"Noo!!! Changsun!" Min yelled

The door closed and Changsun was burning to death.

*Flashback end*

"This.. is how he died..." Min said

Everyone was shocked.

*The same night*

"Do you believe Min's story?" Nichkhun asked to Wooyoung

"Totally not!" Wooyoung replied

"Me too, I think she purposely let Changsun died." Nichkhun said

"Me too." Wooyoung said

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The next day...

"Sooyoung unnie, where are you?" Yoona asked

"Stop playing hide & seek, we're not child now!" Taeyeon said

"Unnie, I think Sooyoung have been kidnapped." Sunny said

"What!?" SNSD said

"Yuri's dead and now Sooyoung is missing." Tiffany said

*In another room*

"Kyuhyun, where are you?" Eunhyuk asked

"Yes, it's not funny!" Leeteuk said

"I think Kyuhyun have been kidnapped." Shindong said

"What!?" Super Junior said

So, they explain to everyone that Sooyoung and Kyuhyun disappeared. And a letter fell.

Dear Kpop Groups,

Sooyoung and Kyuhyun are now kidnapped. So, they will try to escape from their top secret room. From now, you will do another challenge. Do you trust your other members? Now, it's time to proof it. Choose someone from your group to do the race. The member will not see the race, because we will blindfold him/her. The team who will be last, will lost a member. Yes, this member will DIE! A computer will choose by hazard. Now, I let you practice.

From The Mansion's Owner

"Wow!" Donghae said sarcastically

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Sooyoung and Kyuhyun woke up.

"Where are we?" Sooyoung asked

"I think we are in the room where the others were kidnapped." Kyuhyun replied

"Yes, I think you're right." Sooyoung

"Is it the good moment?..." Kyuhyun thought

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*In SNSD's Room*

"So, who will be the one who will race?" Tayeon asked

"The one who trust a little bit too everyone, Tiffany." Jessica replied, joking

"Hey! I'm not naive!" Tiffany yelled

"Okay, but we have to choose someone." Sunny said

Everyone smirked and observed Seohyun

"Why are watching me like this?" Seohyun asked

"You know the answer." Hyoyeon replied

"Oh no! No! No!" Seohyun yelled

"You're the second who trust us the most!" Yoona said

"Okay..." Seohyun said

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*In CN Blue's Room*

"Who will be the one who will do the race?" Yonghwa asked

"I don't want to do it!" Jungshin replied

"I will do it!" Jonghyun said

"Seriously!? You will do it?" Minhyuk asked

"Yes!" Jonghyun replied

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*In KARA's Room*

"Who will do the race?" Nicole asked

"I love you, but I don't really trust you." Gyuri replied

"I want to do it!" Hara said

"Seriously!? Are you joking?" Seungyeon asked

"Yes!" Hara said

"Okay, so, we have the one who will do it." Jiyoung said

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*In f(x)'s Room*

"So, who wants to do the race?" Victoria asked

Nobody replied

"Hey, why it's not the oldest who will do the race?" Amber said

"But, why it's not the maknae who will do it?" Victoria replied

"No, I don't want to do it!" Krystal said

"No, I'm sure you want to do it!" Sulli said

"Okay, I will do it!" Krystal said

"Yes, now let's practice!" Luna said

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"Sooyoung, there's something I wanted to say sice we arrived at the mansion." Kyuhyun said

"What..." Sooyoung said, hesitating.

"I really love you..." Kyuhyun said

"Do you mean..." Sooyoung said

"Yes, I want to be your boyfriend." Kyuhyun said

"Uuuh..." Sooyoung said

Kyuhyun come closer to Sooyoung.

"I have to kiss her." he thought

"He's going to kiss me." she thought

Their lips came closer and closer. Then,

"Hey, lovebirds! Stop it!" A voice said

They were surprised. And embarrassed. A letter fell.

Dear Sooyoung and Kyuhyun,

You will have a challenge. Do you trust each other? I will see that in the challenge. You will have to do a race. One of you will not see the race, because he/she will be blindfolded. The other member will have to shout the directions to the member who does the race. You have to finish the race within 5 minutes.

From The Mansion's Owner 

"Okay, who will do the race?"Sooyoung asked

"Me!" Kyuhyun replied

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*In Super Junior's Room*

"Okay, Leeteuk we will see if you can trust us." Siwon said

"Okay, I'm ready." Leeteuk said

"Move to the right!" Shindong said

Leeteuk moved to the right

"Okay, move 4 steps forward." Eunhyuk said

Leeteuk moved 4 steps forward

"Now, turn around." Kangin said

"I turn around at left or at right?" Leeteuk asked

"Turn around at right!" Ryeowook said

"Okay." Leeteuk said and he turned around at right.

"I think we've finished." Donghae said

"Yes, we're good!" Sungmin said

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*In miss A's Room*

"You're sure you want to do it?" Fei asked

"Sure, I'm sure to win!" Suzy replied

"Okay, now, we have to practice." Min said

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*In SHINee's Room*

"Okay, we have to practice." Taemin said

"Are you ready, Jonghyun?" Onew asked

"Yes, I can do it! Fighting!" Jonghyun replied

"Okay, let's start!" Key said

"Yeah, we have to be good." Minho said

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*In 2PM's Room*

"Taecyeon, you're ready?" Junsu asked

"Yes. I will be good!" Taecyeon replied

"Okay, now, we begin!" Nichkhun said

"Yeah, let's be good!" Wooyoung said

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*Meanwhile with Sooyoung and Kyuhyun*

A computer made a loud sound and Sooyoung and Kyuhyun knew they have to begin. In the race, they were many walls and holes.

"Okay, Kyuhyun walk forward!" Sooyoung said

"Okay" Kyuhyun walk forward.

"Stop! There's a hole in front of you!" Sooyoung exclaimed 

Kyuhyun stopped "Where I should go?" he asked

"Make two steps at right and turn around at left and walk forward." Sooyoung said

"Okay." Kyuhyun said.He walked with hesitation. He walked at the wrong direction.

"No, this is the left." Sooyoung said

Kyuhyun bumped into a wall.

"Owww..." he said

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The others already started their challenge.

"No, the other right!" Sunny yelled at Seohyun

"Yes, this direction!" Nicole yelled

"No, you don't understand! It's at right!" Jungshin yelled

"Krystal, don't go forward anymore, there's a wall." Luna yelled

"Good, Leeteuk. Now, go to the right!" Donghae yelled

"Suzy, go to the left!" Fei yelled

"Jonghyun, to the right!" Key yelled

"Nice, now go to the right!" Nichkhun yelled

After 10 minutes, the first one to finish were... Super Junior!

After... miss A!

Then, SHINee and SNSD arrived at the same time

And... 2PM arrived

Then, f(x) finally arrived.

It was between KARA and CN Blue. And Hara arrived. It was KARA who was the last to be safe.

A letter fell

Dear CN Blue,

You in the last position. So, one of you will DIE. Go to the Arcade Room at 5:00 PM.

From the Mansion's Owner

"I'm sorry for you." Seohyun said

Yonghwa made an angry face at Seohyun and go.

"Why I let him fighting Key? If I was not here this fight would never happened." Seohyun thought

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"Yes, we finished the race!" Sooyoung said

"Yes!" Kyuhyun said

They hugged each other. And... they came closer and closer...

"He's about to kiss me..." Sooyoung thought

"I have to do it..." Kyuhyun thought

And they kissed

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*In the Arcade Room*

CN Blue group was worried.

A computer begin to choose a name... And a name was showed...

"What!?" Jonghyun said

"Oh no!" Jungshin said

"Not it can't be!" Minhyuk said

"Wha-t?" Yonghwa said

The name written was.... Jungshin's

Then everyone heard a gunshot.

"Jungshin are you alright?" Minhyuk asked

Jungshin didn't replied. He collapsed.

"No!" Jonghyun said

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*In the kitchen*

CN Blue returned and they saw that Sooyoung and Kyuhyun returned.

Everyone knew that Jungshin is the one who died.

And Yonghwa saw Seohyun and Key together. He was more angry and go to his room. Seohyun saw him and Key too. Seohyun pities for him. And Key was smiling.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Author's Note:

Is it too short or too long? I hope you like it. I was not sure about making the chapter like this. Oh, and KyuSoo is not a real couple, but I saw a demand. So, I decided to do it! :) Sorry for Jungshin's fan, he died in this chapter. Back to the topic: Is Min's story right? What Yonghwa will do with his anger? Who will die next? See that in the next chapter of Mansion of Love and Murder!

 

 

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chesmine #1
Chapter 31: can you make for CNBLUE................please.............
please.please.........please.............i wish you will make a great story for them.......
BoiceKings #2
Why late YoY
I want cnblue
Jiolye
#3
Here's the sequel! A Bite In The Dark!
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/262318
HelloPinkPlanet
#4
hurray! :3
kamsa hamnida!
Jiolye
#5
So, here's the results of the votes:
I will make a sequel! And the characters will be...Super Junior, SHINee, 2PM, EXO, f(x), SNSD, KARA and After School!
yoongyoon #6
Yes please make the sequel!
Boys: 2PM, EXO, Super Junior, SHINee
Girls: SNSD, f(x), SISTAR, KARA

Oh and please can you put taecyoon as a couple again? Or 9PM (snsd&2pm) but with taecyoon?
lyre07
#7
What the!It's just a dream!But I love it>.<
Boys:CNBlue,SuperJunior,Exo,Bigabng
Girls:SNSD,After School,f(x),2NE1
Snsdcnblue14
#8
Girls : SNSD , f(x) , after school ,sistar
Boys : CNBLUE , 2pm , big bang , super junior

Pleaseee! The most importnant is SNSD & CNBLUE
By the way your story is great!!!
bimriean
#9
girls:kara,snsd,sistar,4 minute
boys:shinee,suju,2pm,tvxq,bigbang
chocolue #10
Girls: f(x), SNSD, After School (or 4Minute) & Miss A (or SISTAR)
Boys: EXO, Super Junior, SHINee & 2PM

Please have f(x) ~ ^^
Yes make a sequel please!