The Killer's Target

The Mansion of Love and Murder

Minho and Jiyoung were walking in the corridor. And a luster trembled and fell on Jiyoung.

"Jiyoung!" Minho said

She was dead. Everyone heard the luster broke. They went at the corridor and saw Jiyoung's corpse.

"Oh no! Jiyoung! No!" Nicole yelled

"What happened here?" Seungyeon asked

"I don't know, we were talking and suddenly the luster fell on her." Minho replied

"So, it's an accident?" Hyoyeon asked

"No, I don't think so." Minho replied

"So, you're trying to say that someone wanted to kill Jiyoung?" Luna asked

"No, the killer didn't try to kill Jiyoung, he tried to kill me." Minho said

"What!? Why do you think that?" Leeteuk asked

"Because, I'm sure that the killer don't want to me to found who is the owner." Minho said

Somebody's POV:

"Almost! Why Minho isn't dead! I have to think of a greater plan." I thought

"Hey, are you alright?" Siwon asked me

"Yes, yes. Just a little sad for Jiyoung." I replied

"Okay...?" he said

"Pheww, almost get caught." I thought

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Nobody's POV

The next day, was a rainy day. And Hyoyeon and Sulli were missing. All the person were worried fot them.

"Unnie, is missing! I hope she's alright!" Tiffany said

"Unnie, where are you?" Amber said

And a letter fell.

Dear Kpop Groups,

Since it's a rainy day, I had an idea. Your challenge is to go to your room, without seeing anything. There will be a power outage. The last one to enter his room will DIE. If you go to a wrong roon, you will have to do the challenge again.

From The Mansion's Owner

And the light was missing. Everyone was scared.

"No, dark. It's too dark." Krystal yelled

"Calm down, unnie! I know that we don't see anything, but you have to calm down" Jessica said

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Hyoyeon and Sulli woke up. They felt weird.

"Oww... My head." Hyoyeon said

"Where are we?" Sulli asked

"I don't know, but I see a letter" Hyoyeon replied

Dear Hyoyeon and Sulli,

You're in the top secret room. To escape from here you will have to do a challenge. You will have to find the key, in the dark. When the light will turn on, you must not move or you will DIE.

From The Mansion's Owner

"What!? The light will turned off." Sulli said

And the light disappeared. The girls were surprised.

"Okay, let's find the key." Hyoyeon said

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The others were trying to find their room. Some were working in teams, some not.

"Taecyeon oppa, where we are going?" Yoona asked to Taecyeon

"I will try to find your room first and mine after." Taecyeon replied

"Are you sure?" Yoona asked

"Yes, I don't want that you to get hurt." Taecyeon replied

Yoona smiled.

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"In which direction, I should go?" Taeyeon asked

 She went to the right and she met Taemin and Onew.

"Hey, did you find your room?" Onew asked to Taeyeon

"No, really not. This challenge is so hard. And you?." Taeyeon replied

"No, but we can help you?" Taemin said

"Okay." Taeyeon said

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Donghae, Eunhyuk and Ryeowook were searching their room.

"We should split up to find our room." Eunhyuk said

"Okay, but what do we do if someone finds his room?" Donghae asked

"He can scream "Super Junior's room is here." " Ryeowook suggested

"Okay." Donghae said

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Hyoyeon and Sulli were doing their challenge. When the light was on, Hyoyeon did a movement... she lost balance and collapsed.

"Oww." Hyoyeon said

A knife appeared of nowhere and stabbed Hyoyeon.

"Hyoyeon!" Sulli screamed

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Seohyun, Yonghwa, Jonghyun (CN Blue), Sunny, Kyuhyun and Sooyoung were working in teams.

"So, where do you think you're room is?" Yonghwa asked to Seohyun

"I don't know, I think at the right." Seohyun replied

"Oh, is it your room?" Jonghyun asked to Sunny

"Yes, it is! Thanks." Sunny replied

"Where your room could be?" Kyuhyun asked to Sooyoung

"I don't know, it might be on the left." Sooyoung replied

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Hara, Junsu and Jonghyun (SHINee) were working in a team.

"Where should we go?" Junsu asked

"I don't know, I think that my room is at the right." Hara replied

"And I think mine is at the left." Jonghyun said

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Sulli finished her challenge and was back to her room.

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Minhyuk was walking alone and met Gyuriand Minho.

"Hi, Gyuri. Do you know where's your room?" Mihyuk asked

"I don't know, but I have a bad feeling." Gyuri said

"Why?" Minho asked

"I think that's someone really wants to kill you and it's one of the person who were invited." Gyuri replied

"What!?" Minho said

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Everyone was in his room, except for one person. This person died, he was stabbed. When everyone left their room to see who screamed, the lights and they saw... Jonghyun's (SHINee) corpse.

"Oh no, hyung!" Taemin said

Later, another power outage came. Minho was in his room alone. He was scared. Then, a person came in his room. The person had a gun.

"Put your hands up!" he said

"Who-who are you?" Minho asked

"I'm the one who wants to kill you." he replied

"Wh-what? Oh no!" Minho said

"And now, it's time to die!" the person said

He shot. But, the ball touched only Minho's arm. The murderer ran away. Everyone heard the gunshot. They came.

"Minho, are you alright?" Onew asked

"Yes..." Minho said

TO BE CONTINUED...

Author's Note:

Hope you liked this chapter! Tell me if there's something wrong! ^^ Sorry for Hyoyeon's and Jonghyun's (SHInee) fans, they died in this chapter. Back to the topic: Who tried to kill Minho again? Will Minho survive to these attacks? Who will be the next to die? See that by reading the next chapter of The Mansion of Love and Murder!

 

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chesmine #1
Chapter 31: can you make for CNBLUE................please.............
please.please.........please.............i wish you will make a great story for them.......
BoiceKings #2
Why late YoY
I want cnblue
Jiolye
#3
Here's the sequel! A Bite In The Dark!
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/262318
HelloPinkPlanet
#4
hurray! :3
kamsa hamnida!
Jiolye
#5
So, here's the results of the votes:
I will make a sequel! And the characters will be...Super Junior, SHINee, 2PM, EXO, f(x), SNSD, KARA and After School!
yoongyoon #6
Yes please make the sequel!
Boys: 2PM, EXO, Super Junior, SHINee
Girls: SNSD, f(x), SISTAR, KARA

Oh and please can you put taecyoon as a couple again? Or 9PM (snsd&2pm) but with taecyoon?
lyre07
#7
What the!It's just a dream!But I love it>.<
Boys:CNBlue,SuperJunior,Exo,Bigabng
Girls:SNSD,After School,f(x),2NE1
Snsdcnblue14
#8
Girls : SNSD , f(x) , after school ,sistar
Boys : CNBLUE , 2pm , big bang , super junior

Pleaseee! The most importnant is SNSD & CNBLUE
By the way your story is great!!!
bimriean
#9
girls:kara,snsd,sistar,4 minute
boys:shinee,suju,2pm,tvxq,bigbang
chocolue #10
Girls: f(x), SNSD, After School (or 4Minute) & Miss A (or SISTAR)
Boys: EXO, Super Junior, SHINee & 2PM

Please have f(x) ~ ^^
Yes make a sequel please!