Minho The Target

The Mansion of Love and Murder

Minho was reading books about the mansion to continue his search. And he heard something. The luster was falling. He dodged it. Everyone heard it.

"What is happening here?" Tiffany asked

Everyone saw the broken luster.

"I think that someone is trying to kill me." Minho said

"What!? Who can it be?" Jonghyun (SHINee) asked

"I think it's the owner" Minho replied

"But, are you alright?" Nicole asked

"Yes." Minho replied

Somebody's POV:

"Grr... I almost killed him!" I thought

Then somebody saw me angry

"Are you alright?" Hyoyeon asked to me

"Yes, just a little angry that somebody tried to kill Minho." I replied

"Oh,okay." she said

"Pheww, I almost get caught." I thought

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Nobody's POV:

The next day, Onew and Taeyeon were missing. Everyone was worried for them.

"Oh no, our leader is missing!" Tiffany said

"Our leader has been kidnapped!" Taemin said

And a letter fell

Dear Kpop Groups,

You will have a challenge today. You will have to bear the heat. Yo will have to stay in a really hot room. The first one to exit this room will DIE. The location of this challenge is the living room.

From The Mansion's Owner

"Oh no, first we had to bear a cold room and now an hot room!" Jessica said

"You're right, unnie! And I really hate when it's too hot." Krystal said

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Onew and Taeyeon woke up in the top secret room. They had a bad feeling.

"Where are we?" Taeyeon asked

"I don't know, I never saw this room." Onew replied

They saw a letter.

Dear Taeyeon and Onew,

You're in the top secret place. You will have to do a challenge to exit the room. You have to stay in this space for 1 hour. And to make this challenge hard, we will warm up this space. It will be very hot. If you can't stay in this room, you can open the door, but you will DIE!

From The Mansion's Owner

"What!? The room will warm up!" Taeyeon said

"Yes, we have to stay one hour in this room." Onew said

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The others went to the living room. It was hot, very hot.

"It's so hot here!" Seungyeon said

"What!? I'm already sweating!" Leeteuk said

Ten minutes later, the room was more hot. The thermometer said 42 Degrees Celsius.

"So hot here! I need water!" Siwon said

"Yes, me too!"Donghae said

20 minutes later, the room became warmer. The thermomether said 67 Degrees Celsius.

"Oh no! I'm hallucinating!" Shindong said

"What do you see?" Eunhyuk asked

"A big fountain!" Shindong replied

And Shindong who couldn't bear the heat opened the door and exited the living room. Everyone heard a scream.

"Shindong? Oh no! I think he's dead!" Hara said

The heat disappeared and the door opened. And they saw... Shindong's corpse! He was shot!

"Oh no! Hyung is dead!" Ryeowook said

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Taeyeon and Onew bore the heat for 40 minutes. The room became warmer.

"Just 20 minutes and we can exited the room!" Taeyeon said

"Yes, but the room is warmer than before." Onew said

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Yoona, Taecyeon, Seohyun, Yonghwa, Sooyoung, Kyuhyun, Sunny and Jonghyun (CN Blue) were walking.

"What do you want to do?" Sunny asked

"I dont know, but not the arcade room." Yoona replied

"Why not?" Sooyoung asked

"We already went yesterday." Seohyun replied

"Okay, but what do you want to do?" Kyuhyun asked

"I don't know, no idea come to my head." Jonghyun replied

"Me too, no idea in my head." Yonghwa said

"Okay, we can go to the living room." Taecyeon said

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Sulli and Junsu were at the living room.

"Sulli, what do you want to do?" Junsu asked

"I don't know, for the moment i read books." Sulli replied

"Okay." Junsu said

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"Yes, we finished the challenge!" Taeyeon said

"Yes, now I need cold water!" Onew said

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Gyuri, Minhyuk, Luna and Amber were eating.

"So, what do you want to do after?" Amber asked

"I don't know, no idea in my head." Luna replied

"Me too, no idea in my head." Minhyuk said

"We have to go to the corridor." Gyuri said

"Why?" Minhyuk asked

"Because, a murder will occure there." Gyuri replied

"What!?" Amber said

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Minho and Jiyoung were walking in the corridor.

"What do you want to do?" Jiyoung asked

"I don't know, but I have to continue my search." Minho replied

"What search?" Jiyoung asked

"I hhave to found who is the owner of this mansion." Minho replied

"Oh, okay." Jiyoung said

And then a luster trembled. And fell on Jiyoung.

"Jiyoung!" Minho said

She was dead. Everyone heard the luster broke. They went at the corridor and saw Jiyoung's corpse.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Author's Note:

Hope you liked this chapter! Too long? Too short? Too boring? Sorry if it's too boring, I lacked in ideas, but I found one. Sorry for Shindong's and Jiyoung's fans, they died in this chapter. Back to the topic: Who tried to kill again Minho? Will Minho succeed to found the owner's identity before he will die? Who will be the next to die? See that by reading the next chapter of The Mansion of Love and Murder!

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Jiolye
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chesmine #1
Chapter 31: can you make for CNBLUE................please.............
please.please.........please.............i wish you will make a great story for them.......
BoiceKings #2
Why late YoY
I want cnblue
Jiolye
#3
Here's the sequel! A Bite In The Dark!
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/262318
HelloPinkPlanet
#4
hurray! :3
kamsa hamnida!
Jiolye
#5
So, here's the results of the votes:
I will make a sequel! And the characters will be...Super Junior, SHINee, 2PM, EXO, f(x), SNSD, KARA and After School!
yoongyoon #6
Yes please make the sequel!
Boys: 2PM, EXO, Super Junior, SHINee
Girls: SNSD, f(x), SISTAR, KARA

Oh and please can you put taecyoon as a couple again? Or 9PM (snsd&2pm) but with taecyoon?
lyre07
#7
What the!It's just a dream!But I love it>.<
Boys:CNBlue,SuperJunior,Exo,Bigabng
Girls:SNSD,After School,f(x),2NE1
Snsdcnblue14
#8
Girls : SNSD , f(x) , after school ,sistar
Boys : CNBLUE , 2pm , big bang , super junior

Pleaseee! The most importnant is SNSD & CNBLUE
By the way your story is great!!!
bimriean
#9
girls:kara,snsd,sistar,4 minute
boys:shinee,suju,2pm,tvxq,bigbang
chocolue #10
Girls: f(x), SNSD, After School (or 4Minute) & Miss A (or SISTAR)
Boys: EXO, Super Junior, SHINee & 2PM

Please have f(x) ~ ^^
Yes make a sequel please!