The Murders Begin...

The Mansion of Love and Murder

The next day, everyone did like they do at home while the maids were gossiping

"Why did the owner invited these KPop Groups? I thought the owner hates KPop Groups and Idols!" a maid asked

"I really don't know, but there's certainly a reason." another maid replied

"Maybe, he (it can be a she) wants to kill them." another maid said

"It can be a reason" another maid said.

Suddenly, the owner who heard all the conversation came with a big knife and kill all the maids. Nobody heard the maids screaming.

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"Hey, Seohyun long time no see." Yonghwa said

"Yeah, we see each other just in concerts." Seohyun said

"Do you want to go out with me?" Yonghwa asked

"Ummm... Surely" Seohyun replied with hesitation

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"Unnie, do you want to do something together" Krystal asked

"Sure. Why not?" Jessica replied

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Taecyeon went to see Yoona, but she was talking with Suzy. He was to shy to ask her to go out with him.

"Oh, Taecyeon oppa, what are you doing" Nicole asked

"You suprised me! Nothing, I'm doing nothing" Taecyeon replied

"Do you want to invite Yoona to go out?" Nicole asked

"Uuuhh...  No,no,no!" Taecyeon replied

"Okay!" Nicole said and went to the living room.

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"Minho oppa, what are you doing here?" Yuri asked

"Oh, I have nothing to do. So, I decide to read this book." Minho replied

"Sherlock Holmes?" Yuri said

"Yes, they were just Shelock Holmes' books here." Minho said

"You can go with me. I will go play Ping-Pong with Gyuri." Yuri said

"Okay. It will be a pleasure" Minho said

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"Yoona! I think that Taecyeon wants to invite you for a date." Nicole said

"Seriously?! So wonderful!" Yoona said

"Yes, but don't say to Teacyeon that I said that" Nicole said

"Okay. Promise." Yoona said

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"Sooyoung, do you want to go out with me?" Kyuhyun asked

"Go out? Where?" Sooyoung replied

"Mmmm... Outside to walk" Kyuhyun replied

"Okay, if you want." Sooyoung said

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"Leeteuk oppa, do you have food with you? I'm starving..." Hyoyeon said

"No, but, we can see in the kitchen." Leeteuk said

"Okay." Hyoyeon said

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"Jia-ah, do you want to play tennis with me? I need a partner." Hara asked

"Sure! I like tennis" Jia replied

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"Sunny, do you want to see a movie with me?" Jonghyun (CN Blue) asked

"... Okay..." Sunny replied with hesitation

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Key tried to find Seohyun. But, he saw her with Yonghwa...

"You want to invite her to go out?" Onew asked while teasing him

"N-n-nno." Key replied

"You're sure..." Onew said while teasing him

"NO, I'M NOT HERE TO INVITE HER!" Key yelled

Yonghwa and Seohyun heard Key. Key was really embarassed and go inside the mansion. Onew bit his lips to not laugh.

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Hyoyeon and Leeteuk finally entered the kitchen and saw all the maids' corpse. They screamed loudly. Everybody went to the location of the scream. And when they saw the maids' corpse, they all scream.

"What!? The maids are dead. No, why are they dead?"  Taeyeon asked

"I don't know. Now, I'm so scared" Victoria said

"I hope it's just a prank" Jungshin said

"I hope it too" Tiffany said

"No they're all dead." Donghae said

"How can you know that?" Nichkhun asked

"He saw if they were breathing by checking the pulses." Minho replied

"How do you know that?" Donghae asked

"He read a Sherlock Holmes' book." Yuri replied

"Okay, but it doesn't help us to know who kill the maids." Taemin said

They saw a letter fall from the oven. They were all shocked by the letter contents

Dear KPop Idols Group,

I hate you! Everyone! I want to be a superstar! The only one in Korea! So I begin by killing all of you! Slowly, many will die. No one can survive! All of you will die.

From the owner of the mansion

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"Oh no, the mansion's owner wants to kill us!" Fei said

"I don't want to die!!!" Seungyeon said

"We have to escape! Everyone, go to the entrance!" Minhyuk said

"Yeah" everyone except Minhyuk said

They all went to the entrance, but the door was locked. They tried by all the ways to go out, but they failed.

"Oh no, we can't go out!!!!" Suzy yelled

Many of the girls began to cry.

"Don't worry, I will protect you." Yonghwa whispered to Seohyun

"I feel more safe" Seohyun thought

"But, what we have to do, now?" Ryeowook asked

"I really don't know, but we have to stay in group to be more safety!" Jonghyun (SHINee) said

"Yeah, you're right. We have to go a safety place" Shindong said

"Should, we go to the living room?" Amber asked

"No, the living is a little bit too tiny to comport all of us." Yesung replied

"I have an idea. 24 of us will go to the living room and the 24 others will go to the arcade room." Wooyoung said

"Okay, we have no choice." Siwon said

"So, who goes where?" Kangin asked

So, they made a plan.

Arcade Room:

Jessica, Tiffany, Yuri, Yoona, Jonghyun (CN Blue), Jungshin, Gyuri, Hara, Jiyoung, Leeteuk, Kangin, Sungmin, Donghae, Ryeowook, Shindong, Amber, Sulli, Krystal, Onew, Key, Taemin, Jia, Min and Taecyeon

Living Room:

Taeyeon, Sunny, Hyoyeon, Sooyoung, Seohyun, Yonghwa, Minhyuk, Seungyeon, Nicole, Yesung, Eunhyuk, Siwon, Kyuhyun, Victoria, Luna, Jonghyun (SHINee), Minho, Fei, Suzy, Wooyoung, Nichkhun, Changsun, Junsu and Junho

*In the Arcade Room*

"Oh, I'm so scared. I'm so stressed." Gyuri said

"Unnie, calm down. I know that it's scary, but you have to calm down." Jiyoung said

"Yes, she's right. Everyone is scared. You're not the only one" Sungmin said

"Thank you" Gyuri said

"Why we've been fooled! I was suspecting this mansion, but I let down my guard when I saw how beautiful this place was. Why?" Min asked

"Calm down, yes we've all've been fooled. But, you have to stay calm." Sulli replied

"Yes, I'm sure we can escape from this place" Jia said

*In the Living Room*

"I hate this place now. I don't want to die!" Eunhyuk said

"Me too, I hate this place!" Luna said

"Now, what do we do hyung?" Chansng asked

"I don't know. But, it's better to don't touch the things." Junsu replied

"Me too, I think that it's better to touch anything" Junho said

And then the light of the two rooms began to extinguish. Everyone screamed. And when the light came on. The persons in the arcade room saw... Yuri's corpse. Everyone screamed. 

"She has been stabbed" Shindong said

"Oh no! Why do she has to die first?!" Yoona said

*In the Living Room*

"I think there's missing person" Changsun said

"Yes, me too" Suzy said

So, they counted to see how they were. And they count 22 person in each times. So, they were searching to know who were missing.

"Oh no! Eunhyuk and Wooyoung disappearred!" Luna said

After, they heard screams from the Arcade Room. They went there and they saw Yuri's corpse. They all screamed. The persons who was in the Arcade Room said that Yuri was dead after the light extinguished. And the persons who was in the Living Room said that Eunhyuk and Wooyoung disappeared.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Author's Note:

I hope this was better than Chapter 1. I wanted to make fair, I wanted for everyone to speak at least one time.I'm sorry for Yuri's fan. She's the 1st dead in the story, because I pick her name in a box randomly. Back to the topic: Now, Yuri is the first one to die, what happens to Eunhyuk and Wooyoung? Will there be more deaths? Who will be the next to die if the deaths continue? See that by reading the next chapter of The Mansion of Love and Murder!

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Jiolye
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chesmine #1
Chapter 31: can you make for CNBLUE................please.............
please.please.........please.............i wish you will make a great story for them.......
BoiceKings #2
Why late YoY
I want cnblue
Jiolye
#3
Here's the sequel! A Bite In The Dark!
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/262318
HelloPinkPlanet
#4
hurray! :3
kamsa hamnida!
Jiolye
#5
So, here's the results of the votes:
I will make a sequel! And the characters will be...Super Junior, SHINee, 2PM, EXO, f(x), SNSD, KARA and After School!
yoongyoon #6
Yes please make the sequel!
Boys: 2PM, EXO, Super Junior, SHINee
Girls: SNSD, f(x), SISTAR, KARA

Oh and please can you put taecyoon as a couple again? Or 9PM (snsd&2pm) but with taecyoon?
lyre07
#7
What the!It's just a dream!But I love it>.<
Boys:CNBlue,SuperJunior,Exo,Bigabng
Girls:SNSD,After School,f(x),2NE1
Snsdcnblue14
#8
Girls : SNSD , f(x) , after school ,sistar
Boys : CNBLUE , 2pm , big bang , super junior

Pleaseee! The most importnant is SNSD & CNBLUE
By the way your story is great!!!
bimriean
#9
girls:kara,snsd,sistar,4 minute
boys:shinee,suju,2pm,tvxq,bigbang
chocolue #10
Girls: f(x), SNSD, After School (or 4Minute) & Miss A (or SISTAR)
Boys: EXO, Super Junior, SHINee & 2PM

Please have f(x) ~ ^^
Yes make a sequel please!