Heartbroken...

The Mansion of Love and Murder

Gyuri went to the washroom. When she opened the door, she saw something horrible. She screamed. In the room, there was blood everywhere. One of Jonghyun's hand was in a bath full of bloody water. Everyone heard the scream and went to where Gyuri was. When they arrived, they saw...Jonghyun's corpse! They screamed.

"Oh no! Why would Jonghyun commit suicide!?" Minhyuk asked

"I don'T know, but it's really horrible to watch!" Amber replied

Minho entered. He saw a letter.

"Hey, it's a letter." Minho said, taking the letter.

Dear everyone,

If you read this letter, that means that I'm dead. If you want to know why I commit suicide, read this letter. I couldn't live without Sunny. So, I decided to rejoin her. I'm sorry everyone

From Jonghyun

"What!? He commited suicide for Sunny?" Yonghwa asked

"Yeah..." Minho replied

"It's so sad..." Hara said

"Poor Jonghyun. Love make us blind. He didn't see what he done..." Nicole said

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The next day...

Nobody was missing. Everyone was relieved that nobody was missing. And a letter fell.

Dear Kpop Groups,

Today will occur the second chance challenge. The location of this challenge will be the living room. When you will go there, you will see 16 ropes and 16 knives. You will take a knife and choose a rope to cut. But, one of the rope is tricked. If you get this rope, you will DIE!

From The Mansion's Owner

"Oh no, hazard again." Luna said

"Yeah, I hate hazard. I hope I will get luck."  Tiffany said

Everyone went to the living room and saw the 16 ropes and the 16 knives. Everyone took a knife and a rope to cut. Everyone was worried.

"Okay, it's time to cut." Minho said

Everybody cut their rope at the same time. But, just one person couldn't cut his rope. Everyone couldn't that it was this person that would die. It was Taecyeon. And then, everybody heard a gunshot. Taecyeon collapsed.

"Taecyeon!!!" Yoona yelled, running to Taecyeon

"Sorry, I couldn't stay with you forever..." Taecyeon said

Taecyeon closed his eyes and died. Yoona cried and ran to go to her room. Seohyun, Tiffany and Sooyoung followed Yoona. Minho, Gyuri and Yonghwa followed them.

"Yoona, it's okay. We know that---" Sooyoung said to Yoona, but Yoona interrupt her

"How could this be okay?! The one I love died." Yoona yelled

"We should go to our room." Seohyun said

Yoona nodded. Yoona, Seohyun, Tiffany and Sooyoung were about to go to their room, but Minho said something before they could go.

"Excuse me, but can I talk to you, Seohyun and Tiffany?" Minho asked

"Sure. Sooyoung, go to the room with Yoona." Tiffany replied

"Okay." Sooyoung said, helping Yoona to go to their room

"Yes, what do you want to talk about?" Seohyun asked

"About Team Mysteria." Minho replied

"Oh, that... I don't think that I can do it. We have an heartbroken member to comfort." Tiffany said

"Yeah, we know." Gyuri said

"So, why do you want to talk to us?" Seohyun asked

"We want you to don't let Yoona do the same thing as Jonghyun did." Yonghwa replied

"Okay." Seohyun and Tiffany said

Seohyun and Tiffany went to their room.

"Now, let's search the 5th question." Minho said

"Yeah!" Gyuri and Yonghwa said

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After a while...

Minhyuk, Kyuhyun and Eunhyuk were in the living room.

"So, what should we do for Yoona?" Eunhyuk asked

"We should just comfort her." Minhyuk replied

"Yeah, let's go. We should go comfort her. If not, she might commit suicide." Kyuhyun said

"Yeah!" Minhyuk and Eunhyuk said

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Amber, Luna, Nicole, Hara and Sulli were walking in the principal corridor.

"We should comfort Yoona." Hara said

"Yes, it's so sad what happened to her." Sulli said

"We should go now. I don't want the same thing that Jonghyun did happen to Yoona." Luna said

"Yeah, me too. I don't want that to happen." Nicole said

"Okay, we go now." Amber said

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Tiffany, Seohyun and Sooyoung were trying to comfort Yoona. Yoona was crying a lot.

"Yoona, stop crying! We know that you miss Taecyeon. But, stop!" Tiffany said, a little bit angrily

"Taecyeon!!!!" Yoona said, loudly and cried again

"Tiffany, we're here to comfort her, not to make her more sad." Sooyoung whispered to Tiffany, angrily

"I'm sorry." Tiffany whispered

"Yoona, what do you want? We will bring it!" Seohyun asked

"I want TAECYEON!!!" Yoona replied loudly, and cried more

"Seohyun, you too. We're here to comfort her, not to demoralize her!" Sooyoung whispered to Seohyun, angrily

"I'm sorry." Seohyun said

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Minho, Yonghwa and Gyuri were at the kitchen, trying to get idea where the 5th question could be hiding. Gyuri remembered something.

"Oh, did the question says that it was between 'S's that the 5th question is hiding?" Gyuri asked

"Yes, why?" Minho replied

"So, I know, where the 5th question is hiding." Gyuri said

"You're serious!? Where!?" Yonghwa asked

"Just between SNSD's room and SHINee's room." Gyuri said, smiling

Minho and Yonghwa looked at each other and looked at Gyuri with a not understanding face.

"Just follow me." Gyuri said

Gyuri left the kitchen. Yonghwa and Minho followed Gyuri. They arrived between SNSD's room and SHINee's room.

"Here's the 5th question!" Gyuri said

"What!?" Minho and Yonghwa said

Gyuri pulled off the wallpaper. Gyuri, Minho and Yonghwa saw something...

TO BE CONTINUED...

Author's Note:

Hope you liked this chapter! I rewrote it. Now, I'm very tired... Sorry for Jonghyun's and Taecyeon's fans, they died in this chapter... Continue to read The Mansion of Love and Murder!

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Jiolye
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chesmine #1
Chapter 31: can you make for CNBLUE................please.............
please.please.........please.............i wish you will make a great story for them.......
BoiceKings #2
Why late YoY
I want cnblue
Jiolye
#3
Here's the sequel! A Bite In The Dark!
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/262318
HelloPinkPlanet
#4
hurray! :3
kamsa hamnida!
Jiolye
#5
So, here's the results of the votes:
I will make a sequel! And the characters will be...Super Junior, SHINee, 2PM, EXO, f(x), SNSD, KARA and After School!
yoongyoon #6
Yes please make the sequel!
Boys: 2PM, EXO, Super Junior, SHINee
Girls: SNSD, f(x), SISTAR, KARA

Oh and please can you put taecyoon as a couple again? Or 9PM (snsd&2pm) but with taecyoon?
lyre07
#7
What the!It's just a dream!But I love it>.<
Boys:CNBlue,SuperJunior,Exo,Bigabng
Girls:SNSD,After School,f(x),2NE1
Snsdcnblue14
#8
Girls : SNSD , f(x) , after school ,sistar
Boys : CNBLUE , 2pm , big bang , super junior

Pleaseee! The most importnant is SNSD & CNBLUE
By the way your story is great!!!
bimriean
#9
girls:kara,snsd,sistar,4 minute
boys:shinee,suju,2pm,tvxq,bigbang
chocolue #10
Girls: f(x), SNSD, After School (or 4Minute) & Miss A (or SISTAR)
Boys: EXO, Super Junior, SHINee & 2PM

Please have f(x) ~ ^^
Yes make a sequel please!