The One We Have to Save! (Part 1)

The Mansion of Love and Murder

*The Night*

Minho was sleeping. And then, a shadow appeared.
 
"Hello. Minho." the shadow said
 
Minho woke up and was scared.
 
"W-who are you?" Minho asked
 
"I'm Jung Yul." the shadow replied
 
"B-But Jung Yul is a little girl..." Minho said
 
"Yes, you're right, but I'm the older one." the shadow said
 
"The older one?" Minho asked
 
"Yes... and you already seen me somewhere..." the shadow replied and disapeared
 
"Okay, that was weird..." Minho said
 
He found something on his bed. A lemon and dishwashing liquid.
 
"Why these are on my bed?" Minho asked to himself
 
He thought and thought....Finally, he found something.
 
"I know where the 4th question is hiding!" Minho said
 
And someone entered Minho's Room. It was Minhyuk
 
"Can you tone it down?" Minhyuk asked
 
"Yes, sorrry..." Minho replied
 
"Okay." Minhyuk said and left the room.
 
"I have to learn to speak more softly." Minho whispered to himself.
 
He put the lemon and the dishwashing liquid in a drawer and slept again.
 
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The next day, Gyuri was missing. They were worried for Gyuri, especially team Mysteria. And everyone was wondering why only one person was missing, usually it's 2. They noticed something.
 
"All of us went to the secret room except Gyuri!" Jonghyun said
 
"Yeah, you're right! But, what will happen after?" Sulli said
 
And a letter fell.
 
Dear Kpop Groups,
 
You will have the last challenge before the chance challenges. You will have to save Gyuri. When you will try to enter the secret room, a lot of traps will block you. Some may KILL YOU. You have 1 hour to save Gyuri from explosion. The entrance of the top secret room is the oven.
 
From The Mansion's Owner
 
"What Gyuri is in danger!?" Tiffany said, with a worried tone
 
"But, what does the oven has to do with the entrance of the top secret room?"  Kyuhyun asked
 
"Don't know, but we have to see it." Sooyoung replied
 
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Gyuri woke up. She was tied on a chair. She noticed that there was bombs around her.
 
"Bombs! I don't want to die!!!!" Gyuri yelled
 
And she saw a message.
 
Dear Gyuri,
 
You're in the top secret room. You will maybe not able to go out from this room. The only way to escape from this place is to wait that your friends deliver you. So, maybe you will DIE!
 
From The Mansion's Owner
 
"What!? But, that's crazy!" Gyuri yelled
 
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The others went to the kitchen. And they opened the oven.
 
"It's just a normal oven." Eunhyuk said
 
"I think that there's something that can open the entrance." Minhyuk said
 
So, they searched for something that could open th entrance.
 
"Oh, I think I found a button." Nicole said, pushing it
 
The interoir of the oven transformed into a door for the entrance.
 
"So, who wants to enter first?" Sunny asked
 
"I will go first." Minho said
 
Everyone entered in the oven.
 
"This entrance is so small!" Hara said
 
"I really agree with you." Yoona said
 
Minho stopped and everyone stopped
 
"Now, we have to be careful." Minho said
 
"Why do we need to be careful?" Siwon asked
 
"Because, there's quicksand there." Minho replied
 
"So, what do we do?" Seungyeon asked
 
"I see a button written (Remove the Quicksand)." Minho said, pointing the button
 
"But, how we will reach it?" Luna asked
 
"I don't know." Minho said
 
"Oh, do someone has something to throw?" Seohyun asked
 
"No, I have nothing." Amber replied
 
"I have a ball in my pocket." Taecyeon said
 
"You have a ball in your pocket?" Yonghwa asked
 
"Yeah, what's the problem?" Taecyeon replied
 
"Nothing." Yonghwa said
 
"Taecyeon, give the ball to Minho." Seohyun said
 
"Okay." Taecyeon said
 
Taecyeon gave the ball to Minho. And Minho threw the ball on the button. The quicksand disappeared.
 
"Yeah, we can pass!" Luna said
 
Everyone pass the entrance. They finished to pass the entrance.
 
"Finally, my back was hurting!" Yoona said
 
"Do want me to piggyback you?" Taecyeon asked
 
"No thanks." Yoona replied and kissed Taecyeon's cheek
 
"Okay, guys. We have more to do." Minho said
 
"Okay." the others said
 
They were walking and they saw many chainsaws.
 
"How do we will pass that!?" Hara asked
 
"Don't know, but we have to pass to save Gyuri." Eunhyuk replied
 
"I think we have to pass one by one." Seohyun said
 
"Okay, since we have nothing except that to do." Seungyeon said
 
"Okay, who wants to go first?" Kyuhyun asked
 
"I will do it." Minho replied
 
"Minho, you're really courageous." Nicole said
 
Minho was passing the corridor filled of chainsaws. He succeed.
 
"Okay, now who wants to do it?" Yonghwa asked
 
"I'll do it." Seungyeon said
 
"Good luck." Hara said
 
Seungyeon tried to pass. But, failed.. Everyone covered they eyes to don't see this blood bath. The chainsaws disappeared.
 
"Seungyeon!" Jonghyun yelled
 
"Oh no, she's dead!" Sunny said
 
"We have to save Gyuri." Minho said
 
"Okay..." Tiffany said
 
Everyone passed and they were worried.
 
TO BE CONTINUED...
 
Author's Note:
 
Hope you liked this chapter! Sorry if it was too short. My computer has problems. I was writing this chapter, but when I wanted to save my updates of this chapter, the updates disappeared. And I didn't want that happens another time. So, I shrunk this chapter. Sorry... Ans sorry for Seungyeon's fans, she died in this chapter... Back to the topic: Will Gyuri be save or will she die? Where do the 4th question is hiding? What is the chance challenges? Who will be the next to die? See that by reading The Mansion of Love and Murder!
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Jiolye
Everyone, I won't update today, cause I'm not feeling well. I'm tired because of my vacation

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chesmine #1
Chapter 31: can you make for CNBLUE................please.............
please.please.........please.............i wish you will make a great story for them.......
BoiceKings #2
Why late YoY
I want cnblue
Jiolye
#3
Here's the sequel! A Bite In The Dark!
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/262318
HelloPinkPlanet
#4
hurray! :3
kamsa hamnida!
Jiolye
#5
So, here's the results of the votes:
I will make a sequel! And the characters will be...Super Junior, SHINee, 2PM, EXO, f(x), SNSD, KARA and After School!
yoongyoon #6
Yes please make the sequel!
Boys: 2PM, EXO, Super Junior, SHINee
Girls: SNSD, f(x), SISTAR, KARA

Oh and please can you put taecyoon as a couple again? Or 9PM (snsd&2pm) but with taecyoon?
lyre07
#7
What the!It's just a dream!But I love it>.<
Boys:CNBlue,SuperJunior,Exo,Bigabng
Girls:SNSD,After School,f(x),2NE1
Snsdcnblue14
#8
Girls : SNSD , f(x) , after school ,sistar
Boys : CNBLUE , 2pm , big bang , super junior

Pleaseee! The most importnant is SNSD & CNBLUE
By the way your story is great!!!
bimriean
#9
girls:kara,snsd,sistar,4 minute
boys:shinee,suju,2pm,tvxq,bigbang
chocolue #10
Girls: f(x), SNSD, After School (or 4Minute) & Miss A (or SISTAR)
Boys: EXO, Super Junior, SHINee & 2PM

Please have f(x) ~ ^^
Yes make a sequel please!