Risky Business

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Jonghyun is blissfully in love with Key but there's one little problem: he's still officially in a relationship with Onew, whom he still genuinely cares about. Key's getting fed up of the situation and wants Jong to make a decision ASAP. Who will Jong choose?

Foreword

Inspired by this fanvid.

 

This was originally posted in my LJ a year ago, I'm just moving it over here now. There won't be any extensions or sequels because, like I said, I wrote this a year ago but I hope you enjoy it nonetheless so... Enjoy!

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luci1995 #1
Chapter 9: It's a good story, really well written, and even a bit realistic. I just wish I'd seen Jonghyun at least apologize to Onew for hurting him. I get that Key was his 1st priority but it was really sad to him him give so much and not even get a "sorry" in the end. At least he has Taemin
mangafrick #2
Chapter 9: Love like i always said love your story more
Yolandi #3
Chapter 9: First story I've ever read by you and certainly not the last. You write angst so well I'm pretty sure you're going to be one of my favorite authors
mzjonghyun #4
Chapter 9: I liked it but I kinda wanted key and minho together but still like the story
Ichijuri1314 #5
Chapter 9: eh...I don't really like jongkey since I think Minho would be the better choice but ehh,Guess jonghyun isn't so bad and actually loves key. I feel so sad for minho though..He's been with him the whole time and loved him so much :(
Wished the epilogue chad included at least a bit of minho , onew , and taemin's life.

one more thing...Is it ontae or onho??!! or none? Taemin loves onew so it seemed like a given that they'll be a couple but then onew seems to have good feelings towad minho since he suddennly offered to live with minho....am I reading things too much?LOL
Nice story btw :)
ixButterfly #6
Chapter 9: Ohh. This fanfic tugged at my heart :c
So sad QnQ
sunheeminhee #7
Loved the story! :D
but not the end.. i dont really like jongkey :p
HeartttOnTae #8
can you write a sequel ? D: jongkey got their happy ending but what about onew , taemin and minho ? D:
dots0303 #9
, I cried when I read the summary. I've been crying the whole time I read this. I recently went through a situation very similar to this, I was in Key's postion, my lover was cheating on her lover with me and during the time I couldn't cry I couldn't let my emotions out but after reading this all my emotions are just coming forward and it hurts so much. But I want to thank you for writing this story it was very good and without it I probably would've never let my emotions out. Thank you.
WhenJonghyunsings #10
Normally I would be thrilled for Jonghyun, but I don't think he deserves Key. I was actually hoping that Key would realize he was really in love with Minho, who soo deserves to be loved. I'm hoping you decide to do a sequel. I want to know who Onew ends up with, and how things turn out for everyone. I really enjoyed this story and that you had me rooting for someone other than my bias is a compliment to your writing :)
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