broken pieces

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"I never desire to wake from my dreams, for I know that in the morning, when I awake, I will no longer be with you. I was never the girl you wanted, right? That.. no matter how much I tried to get you to love me, you can never love me like you love her"

He said nothing.

She chuckled bitterly.

" I was never one to patiently pick up broken fragments and glue them together again and tell myself that the mended whole was as good as new. What is broken is broken... and I'd rather remember it as it was at it's best than mend it and see the broken places as long as I lived." She paued. Gathered herself to speak. and forced a smile.

" Ji,  I want you to close your eyes and count by two...when you get to ten, I will stop Loving you."

Slowly, he closed his eyes as he counts.

'This is for the best.' She reminded herself.

She tiptoed and kissed him on the cheeks."Goodbye, Kwon Jiyong. You're free.."

She looked at him for the very last time before turning around, leaving him.

"8,9, 10.." He counted in his mind. He opened his eyes slowly. Silence and darkness enveloped him.. He sighed. "I'm sorry,"

Foreword

Quotes inspired by ; Margaret Mitchell

mrsbacon
Chapter 1 posted. Tell whatcha think! It , isn't it?

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pinkandblue #1
I hope you update soon. You have a talent in writing. The story is really good. I hope you write again. pls. update soon. :)
EerieKim #2
please do update soon>>>>>>>>>
pinkandblue #3
Is there a guy for Dara here? I want to see what will be Jiyong's reaction about it. I don't know if he is really not in love with Dara or he is just doesn't know it yet. Pls. update soon. :)
momiji
#4
Hahaha! Lol! Bingu jiyong! Dara.. You should make jiyong suffer a bit more
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EerieKim #5
yeah right!!why is he telling it to dara?he is so insensitive..

thanks for the update<3..but do please do update soon...
EerieKim #6
It's Jiyong!!!Dara recognizes his voice..but i do hope that Dara already moved on..if not she's not that head over heels to Jiyong in order for him to realize the importance of Dara in his life..Update soon...
pinkandblue #7
Thanks for the update. It's Jiyong right??? All the years they've not see each other, what will be his reaction??? Is he with Yoona now??? I hope Dara will show him that she somewhat move on even though she is breaking inside. She move out of his way to look for herself and let Jiyong love freely Yoona. But I'm hoping that Dara will shine more in here and let others see what changes happen when she was out in their lives in years. I hope in those past years that Dara was out of his sight, he realize something and that letting her go is like loosing his own self and love. I hope he realize his mistake. Make Dara have dignity to herself, make her see other people not only Jiyong. Make her at lease happy when he is not around. I hope everything will run smoothly in the end. :)
caliee #8
that was jiyong, right? what was he doing in dara's old house?
hmmm.. what happens next?
erm.. that was really awful of jiyong to date dara and be obviously in love with someone else.. he rubs it in dara's face too while he's at it.. tsk..
momiji
#9
I miss your updates! Pls update more frequently when you free! :p
pinkandblue #10
This is good. What will happen next. I want to know what will happen after all the years had past. Your an angel. I hope your going to update soon. :)