When this summer ends

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Sometimes, one does not feel weak for he does not have a shoulder to lean on but for he has no one who is willing to depend on him. Just like how one is not lost because he has no map but because he has no destination.

Myungsoo is a seventeen year-old boy without troubles and motivation. His indifference towards just about everything and everyone and blatant laziness is tempered with a longing to escape from the boredom of hazy summer. Ever since he was 12, life has become such a blur to him that he eventually forgot how it turned out this way. But when that one kid from his forgotten childhood, all of a sudden, appears in front of his eyes in one lazy morning of his seventeenth summer, Myungsoo starts to remember that he too used to have exuberant summers. And maybe a first love.

Foreword

Myungsoo dreads summer.

 

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I do NOT own any of the characters but only the story itself. This is my own work so please do not pliagarise it in anyway or worse, distribute it anywhere. 

I am rather a troublesome author, as in my updating pace is somewhat unpredictable. I can be either update a lot or not at all in a while so please bear with me in the future. But to prevent that sort of thing to happen, I made a promise to myself that I would update on a weekly basis. Let's all hope that I can stick to that til the end of this fic.

Last but not least, like every other writer out there, I need motivation to continue writing too so I would really appreciate it if you can leave some comments, short or long, I don't mind. And I would love to hear your criticism too. After all, this is my first fic written in English, a language which I have found impossible to master in any way. 

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xkeeki #1
Myungsoo's head's so ed up that i don't even know what to say about it *A*. i mean, come on, kid, pull yourself together because you're kinda making everything worse. not that i blame him though, he just seems so lost and you expressed it so well and fdkagaga;gg'oag;hdf i just guess this guy doean't know how to make things work again, right? he's a poor baby also, not only Sungyeol! but i hope it eventually gets better, doesn't it? it can't be otherwise (is my grammar gone here .___.?), not when they have the awesome Sunggyu and Dongwoo the-most-precious-dino to help them, even if they don't know about/don't want it. Sungjong's so witty that he'd also have his part in this mess, riiight ♥?
the more the merrier, okay, which means, WOOHYUN YOU FOREVER GREASY TREE. dear author, don't you dare to make me crave for some WooYeol or 2Woo here, okay? 'cause i tend to change my otps in fanfiction, and this Woohyun here and his sticky hands seem pretty dangerous ♥
on another not, i like it how you start dialogues with a dash, not quotation marks, that's how books are written here where i live ^^~
and take care of yourself now that you have a fever!
gyueyez #2
namuuu hahahaha what a memorable first impression, cheeeesssyyyy bwahahahaha..
gawd, myunggyu's scene was so intens i think, myungsoo's world has crashed down
xkeeki #3
NO CREATIVE COMMENTS TODAY OKAY BECAUSE I'M GONNA GO TO YOUR COUNTRY WHEREVER YOU LIVE AND HUG YOU TO DEATH BECAUSE OF THE LOVELY DONGWOO HERE SDFJFHASHASDGHASDJHGKAJFDGHA;KSL ♥
and no problem, i'm gonna wait for maknae and all and sfdkjshjgkg thank god your chapter wasn't saved then because Dongwoo ;~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~;
gyueyez #4
dongyeol hohoho dongwoo, sucha a caring brother <3
and what's with your head myungsoo??, the girlfriend part is still pissing me off -,- dongwoo will make u regret that myungsoo keke the power of dinozing dino
xkeeki #5
and now, the best question would be - who's in bigger ? Myungsoo, Sungyeol, or Sungjong? because, you know, 'you need to find me a girlfriend' doesn't sound too appealing to me XD"
but WHAT IN THE BLUE JESUS has gotten into Myungsoo's head. i mean, it's usually easy for the reader to tell what the character feels - even when it's difficult for characters themselves - but he's, honestly, so bipolar i have no idea what is going on on his mind. i blame your writing for that, but that's definitely a good thing :D~ it's just lovely to find a fic that is not predictable ♥.
and guuuuuuuuuuurl, you should totally be proud of your creation of Gyu! he's such an awesome creature here, even when he's drunk and all ;~;. Dongwoo will ALWAYS be love, and seeing the end of this chapter i hope for more of him in the near future, along with Sungjong like you said, ohohohoho!
midnightBee #6
This broke my heart. I couldn't stand sungyeol cry, I don't know why.. Of all people, I can never stand sungyeol cry. I really like the way you describe everything... And how you take all the characters. I was a bit surprise of sunggyu's character, it was very different to what I usually think of him, but then, you came up with 'call your brother and come to fix mine.' That is just beautifully thought of. Really looking forward for more, but I really hope Myungsoo won't break my heart more than he has now. Sungyeol's heart is equivalent to mine. XD
gyueyez #7
sunggyu the charismatic leader *0*..i was thinking, ah myungsoo will comeback soon and telling sungyeol his feeling, then i read the girlfriend part.. omg! poor yeol,, aaand then u said, not so soon T0T DANG~!!! be patient yeol hahahahahaha *why am i laughing?* kekeke
morninginmarch #8
Oh my gawd awesome story!!! Myungsoo accept yeol's confession!!! accept it!!! or else!!!
jaimeonew #9
this is good!!! please update soon! will myungsoo accept yeollie's confession???
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