Those Words Were Mine

Anatomy of a Broken Heart ஐ

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Completed! Aish, it didn't turn out as good as I hoped. Certainly not one of my better works :P

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magikarp
#1
Chapter 15: SONG JOONG KI IS MY BOO ♥
Angelic_x3
#2
Chapter 15: I was willing to change the poster but the shop i requested from is taking a bit too long, I will try to improve it and fix those mistakes. And the foreword was too long because I didn't plan for Sooyoung to talk about her life and explain some point in it in the upcoming chapters, So I made it there. But i totally understand and thank you for the review :3
Angelic_x3
#3
Chapter 2: P.S Love the design <33333333333

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Summary/Short Description (Suggestion: make it sound as short and sweet as possible!): A Blind girl who has never peeked on life, has never fell in love, even though she's from the most richest family but she still wish to have the other's life. What will happen if her childhood friend could set her up with her player brother for ONLY one date? All he thinks of was money and girls he'd get through his fake-relationship with her, and all she thinks of her very first truly-love with him.

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kyouyas
#4
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magikarp
#5
HEY HEY HEY YOU CHANGED IT :D LOOKS NICE
magikarp
#6
Chp 12: ing amazing. Thumbs up~ b^.^d
ImWickedBaby
#7
Hi!
First of all, I really like the poster. The color and the fading out of the faces really contribute to the mood of the story, and it was just what I was looking for!
But (oooh I really hate to say this, sorry in advance) my OC is not a girl, and the picture at the bottom is Haneul, the main character. I should have cleared this up before but this was my first time requesting!
I am sorry to ask this, but is it possible for you to take the girl out?
elf_verl
#8
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m0zarts0nata-- #9
Would you like to be affies? ^^

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