A Simple Mistake

Description

When a sweet, innocent physcomatrix girl had fallen for a gangster boy who died because of a fight.

Foreword

Hello, I’m Minji~

I’m quite new at writing fanfics, so please help me on writing! ^^
Please kindly give me some critics for my mistakes, I’ll try to improve. :)

And now, I’m writing a fic, starring…

You, the readers!

And,

Teen Top’s Rascal Rapper, L.Joe!

Oh, for those who don’t know what physcomatrix is, it is kind of gift or talent or anything you want to call it. Maybe not so much people got this sickness or anything. So when a physcomatrix touched something or being touched by someone, they’ll know the memory of the thing/person. They will easily know what the thing/person they touched did before. To be honest, I’m not a physcomatrix. It’s just I had watched some dramas with physcomatrix thingy in there. And I have a cousin with that sickness.

I know I’m not a really good writer, but, please don’t plagiarize or copy the main idea of my story! ^^ I would really appreciate it if you do, so much.

Enjoy~ Subscribe~ Comment~ So that I know you like my story! :D

 

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Characters:

(*Please put your name anytime you see ~~~~~~~~~~. Thanks, hehe >:3

 

You: 20 years old. Physcomatrix. Friendly. Understanding. Calm. Protective. Diligent. Brilliant. A daughter of a mute woman. Beautiful on the outside and the inside. Nice talker. Loves book. A librarian. Do aegyo, but only showing it to close peoples. Got a pair of pretty dimples. Naïve, never experienced love.

L.Joe: 19 years old. Quiet. Lazy. Good fighter. Always change his hair color so that his enemies got problems to find him. Hard to smile. Only finished his education by junior high school. Never lived in a same place for a long time. Got a pair of beautiful eyesmile. Never experienced love.

Jinyoung: 21 years old. Calm. Cool. Diligent. Dicipline. An orphan. Having a bad past. Mature. Understanding. Smart. Silent. Close to you. Eyesmile.

TeenTop: A gang L.Joe was in. Full of 6 gorgeous boys.

-          CAP: Leader. Strong. Soft but looked scary. Good fighter.

-          Chunji: The flirt. Good at flirting with girls. Bad fighter but good at making strategies.

-          Niel: Like to smile. Good when fighting because he’s fast.

-          Ricky: Cute. Didn’t looked like a gangster. Innocent. Despite his looks, he is a good fighter.

-          Changjo: The maknae. Studious. 4D type person. Fastest amongst the others. Good fighter.

B1A4: A group of 5 gorgeous boys. Including Jinyoung.

-         CNU: The oldest. Charismatic.

-         Sandeul: Cute. Like to laugh.

-         Baro: Loves cap. Clumsiest.

-         Gongchan: Youngest. Innocent.

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Plot:

Your mother, books, flowers.

That’s all you need to be happy.

At first, you thought you didn’t need love.

But then you met someone who changed it.

Some one who made you go head over heels to him.

But you made a simple mistake.

By chose to get closer to him.

You were deeply in love with him.

He was feeling the same, and tried to protect you because of his job as a gangster.

But there was a time when he got into a fight, and never come back for you.

You tried to find him.

You did all ways, but no results.

Then you used your talent as a physcomatrix.

You touched his abandoned cap.

From that time, you knew that he was died.

You knew he was not going back.

You knew he could not protect you again.

You knew that you won’t see his last smile anymore.

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Bananavhel #1
Chapter 2: update!!!!
--minyoungiie #2
please please update!~
frustratedbacon
#3
Ohh what's on that note\letter whatever :))