Chapter 7: ohh noo, I cried T-T saaad, but I loved it anyway <3

Chapter 8: aww it was a sad yet happy way to end this story, i loved it:)

Chapter 7: aww thanks for giving him that <3 <3

Chapter 7: I really liked this. I feel bad for Hae abd Kyu because they didn't get to be together for long but I'm glad Hae has Kuixian (who is also a warlock?)

Chapter 7: Okay. Off with the gramps, then hitting off with his grandson. Creative and sort of romantic(?) well the way Donghae is now loving no other than a part of his deceased past lover haha

And I feel the story is a but too fast, but I can still grasp in the emotion anyways ^^ ^^

Chapter 8: I feel like this was a little rushed but all the main elements were in the story anyway. I still liked it and I got the same feelings as I always did reading your ffs. You're really good at this ^_^

Chapter 8: Aw... Kyuhyun... He dies but there's Kuixian... What happens when HE dies? Poor Donghae will have to find immortal version of Kyuhyun, I guess... Anyway, I really liked this story!





BTW, do you mind me pointing out the mistakes? I don't do that often (I usually ignore grammar mistakes and typos, just when I feel like it I point out some minor logical mistakes) but I still feel like a very picky person. :/

Chapter 3: "He was casually sitting on Donghae's window sill." <-- Donghae's?

Sad that Kyuhyun died, but there is Kuixian! I like this story.