The Past

NOELLE (Sehun x Irene)
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Looking back, I was more like Daehan.

Moody.

Picky.

Aloof.

Although he's just a kid, when they said that you can see your past self in someone younger than you, it's true.

This nephew of mine is more like me than his mom.

First, he's handsome. My sister is not that beautiful. I am prettier than her.

Second, I'm just trying to cover up some ugly memory by paying attention to a child so I better stop.

Kidding aside, those traits only reminded me of someone in my past. Someone I've depended on a lot of times. Someone who was able to change those traits in me and made me a better person...

 

⇔ flashback ⇔

 

It was a rainy day. I forgot what month, year, or day it was but I stayed inside the class while everyone's practicing their own instruments in their respective rooms. The teacher was out and we had the whole time to ourselves. Instead of practicing, I enjoyed watching the rain while snuggling in my leather jacket with a faux fur hoodie. My hands are rested on the desk because it's a good time to relieve them from an almost carpal tunnel syndrome, while my thighs and legs tightly put together to avoid feeling cold though I was wearing thick undergarments and hosiery aside from my skirt.

Then suddenly, a guy came to occupy the seat next to me.

It was Sehun. The guy who was trying hard to fit in the classical genre. It wasn't really for him. Why would he waste his time dealing with the traditional way we play our instruments?

He was about to speak but then I looked away.

The raindrops outside looked so perfect. 

"Why do you like to watch the rain?" He asked.

I didn't speak.

I wasn't in the mood to talk.

And we're not even close.

Although we have been near each other sin

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seominjoo
Whew. That was a grueling ten months. Sorry for the long wait! Hope every reader's still here, and welcome to the new ones. :))
Here's a treat for everyone: Chapter 5 - The Past.
Merry Christmas! <3

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QueenFlora
#1
Chapter 5: Sehun didn't cheat right?.. or maybe he broke up with her for some stupid reason... but broke her heart in the process
Chricea #2
Chapter 5: Now I am curious what happened between them. ^^
KarraAriana
#3
Chapter 5: I'm in a mess too... hahahhaha welcome back author ! Thank you for this chapter.. i wonder what really happen to both of them.... i'm looking forward to more updates XD
barbieken #4
Chapter 4: hungg really liking thiss ??? please updatee
taelovesme
#5
the ship is sailing! #HunRene
yeollchan
#6
Chapter 4: Heyhey~
Quick things about what I liked a lot: I'm not that big of a fan of "I" fics but this one was enjoyable! The interaction with the sweet triplets are always so cute and heart warming~The gif thing you put in to help readers visualize is sweet ^^ The Song triplets are soooooooo cute ;-; I LOLed so hard at the "my sister is not that beautiful. I am prettier than her." comment HAHAHAHA SAVAGEEE!

I would also offer some suggestions: Really like the "I" character though I feel like she can be better fleshed out as a character. You do lightly touch upon the fact that she has an acetic personality but not really why: was she always like this? Or did she go through a traumatic past? etc. Also, I was initially taken by surprise when Sehun immediately started touching her and acting like he knew exactly who she was, what her thoughts were, etc. and even confessed to her! It was a little bit cringey for me haha~ Maybe it's because you haven't fully fleshed out the story yet, I fully look forward to the characters being developed, I would imagine they are super interesting people.
Good luck <3
margenificent
#7
Chapter 2: omooo cute babies!!!
ExoticRiceOpener #8
Yaaas HunRene ❤️❤️