The Present

NOELLE (Sehun x Irene)
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“Hey sis,” A self-assured voice echoed from the end of the line as I’m busy fiddling with my speakerphone in the car to go hands-free.

“I’m driving.”

“This will be quick. Code Red.”

I quietly face-palmed myself and heaved a long sigh. Us, sisters, have learned how to code our problems so that when we ask for help in times like this we’ll get the firsthand idea of its intensity, without talking much.

Code Red problems mean she couldn’t ask for help from anyone other than the one she called.

Yeah, that poor girl is me.

We have another sister who’s in med school but the call itself already means the other one can’t be disturbed. She also lives with our parents.

“We’re not yet done with the year-end inventory so we’re doing some overtime work,” She started explaining. “Eric’s flight back home from the business trip was delayed and the nannies already requested for vacation, so I sent them off. Would you spend Christmas with us?”

I sighed for the nth time now, “Fine.”

On the other side, I can feel Jessica’s relieved smile, “Thanks so much. I owe you one.”

“Correction,” I immediately cut in, “you owe me a lot.”

She laughed in resignation, “Okay, okay. I know what you want.”

I just grinned, checking out the side mirrors.

“I left my credit card inside my dresser. The keys are under my pillow in the master bedroom. You can go shopping all you w

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seominjoo
Whew. That was a grueling ten months. Sorry for the long wait! Hope every reader's still here, and welcome to the new ones. :))
Here's a treat for everyone: Chapter 5 - The Past.
Merry Christmas! <3

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QueenFlora
#1
Chapter 5: Sehun didn't cheat right?.. or maybe he broke up with her for some stupid reason... but broke her heart in the process
Chricea #2
Chapter 5: Now I am curious what happened between them. ^^
KarraAriana
#3
Chapter 5: I'm in a mess too... hahahhaha welcome back author ! Thank you for this chapter.. i wonder what really happen to both of them.... i'm looking forward to more updates XD
barbieken #4
Chapter 4: hungg really liking thiss ??? please updatee
taelovesme
#5
the ship is sailing! #HunRene
yeollchan
#6
Chapter 4: Heyhey~
Quick things about what I liked a lot: I'm not that big of a fan of "I" fics but this one was enjoyable! The interaction with the sweet triplets are always so cute and heart warming~The gif thing you put in to help readers visualize is sweet ^^ The Song triplets are soooooooo cute ;-; I LOLed so hard at the "my sister is not that beautiful. I am prettier than her." comment HAHAHAHA SAVAGEEE!

I would also offer some suggestions: Really like the "I" character though I feel like she can be better fleshed out as a character. You do lightly touch upon the fact that she has an acetic personality but not really why: was she always like this? Or did she go through a traumatic past? etc. Also, I was initially taken by surprise when Sehun immediately started touching her and acting like he knew exactly who she was, what her thoughts were, etc. and even confessed to her! It was a little bit cringey for me haha~ Maybe it's because you haven't fully fleshed out the story yet, I fully look forward to the characters being developed, I would imagine they are super interesting people.
Good luck <3
margenificent
#7
Chapter 2: omooo cute babies!!!
ExoticRiceOpener #8
Yaaas HunRene ❤️❤️