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Description

im so new here in AFF :D

before you read this, i warned you that my english is bad! soo bad! lol

but if you keep click next button there here we go~!XD

 

ps:it's one chot, but the story ahs the continuation of the chapter before, but you can read it separately, enjoy! please comment if you mind kekeke

 

title:#red

pairing:KhunYoung Khun to the Young! of course!

rate:save~PG

 

title:#the Mom

pairing:KhunYoung, Mention:Taec

Character(s):Nichkhun, Wooyoung, Taecyeon.

rate:PG-13

Foreword

Summary:they're shopping in the mall Wooyoung was being hyper but..oh well just read it! making summry is so hard! *O*

 

click here to see the video ---> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=esIVP9keSEI

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MustMakeIt
#1
it is okay, your English is fine!
ilabya2 #2
interesting
jangkhunyounghunny
#3
awwwwww~~~such cute khunyoung~simple english and understanding^^ update soon~^^
paint1982 #4
ohhh.. how Khun's such a big baby asking for Woo's love&attention is so cute! I hope their relationship will progress a little faster..hehehe.. seems like everyone can tell that Khun loves Woo already, so they should be fine going out coz everyone is ok with it too. :) Thanks for sharing this.
1001promises #5
@muciwoo: couldn't agree more<br />
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1001promises
muciwoo
#6
khunyoung~cute as always =]
1001promises #7
I wrote my previous comment before read the 1st chapter.<br />
And after read that, here's my saying:<br />
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Your simple English made the story is easier and understable to be read.<br />
Nice plot, anyway.<br />
Update soon, OK!<br />
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1001promises
1001promises #8
Nah, just write it down, OK!<br />
Khunyoung love is a universal language.<br />
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1001promises