CHOSEN CHARACTERS

the ones that ran away

Pyo minah

minah was a loving, bubbly, bright girl all her life even after she had lost contact with her childhood friends, she always moved forward with an optimistic mind. that was until she had her heart shattered into one million tiny pieces and had lost all her trust for (almost) anyone. she became cold and distant from her friends and family and nothing like the bubbly girl she was before.

kwak inna

ever since the revelation that kwak inna is indeed a genius surfaced, her once loving, supportive parents turned into strict, unrelenting parents who only wanted to knoe of her result tests and the new medals that she'd won for the track team. her health no longer matters and inna is nothing more than a puppet that they could show off to everyone and brag about. long lost was inna's beautiful, genuine smile and her likeable playful nature. she's now replaced with a replica of the old kwak inna, with poise and etiquette rivalling a princess but hundered thousands of protests and turmoils going on inside her.

yoo junseo

there was a time when junseo was a bright kid with his head in the clouds, running arounf with his friends trying to keep them from making too much trouble. those days are long gone. years of emotional and physical abuse have left juneso a broken shell of who he once was. he hid the bruises, stayed quiet, and hoped everyone would just forget about him. acknowleding his abuse and packing his bags was the first small step on the road of recovery, but that road is long and hard and it will take a lot more than that to mend him.

ga nabi

ever since her brother's death she hasn't been the same. smiles turned into cracked carvings that decorated her face and tears turned nonexistent. the murder of her brother turned her parents sick. their daughter would not be harmed in any way. nabi was dragged away from her friends in a sea of screams and tears. "the outside is dangerous" they said. but the ones that were supposed to protect her were the ones to break her in the end. like her name that means butterfly, she will fly away. even though a butterfly only lives a month or two at the most.

tak haejin

haejin is an artist. who has suffered a bout of loneliness after middleschool. leading him to want to express himself wherever he can. resulting in the loss of his parental home. this however does lead him to be what he wants to be and even reconnect with old friends. however while he hasn't changed much from who he was. he will find that time and circumstances changes people.

jo woori

woori was always certain about one thing: the bible is the word of god, and it musn't ever be broken. her strength and her beliefs about who she should be all stemmed from this one core belief. a belief that was shattered when her parents divorced. lost as to what to believe, woori found herself sliding down a slippery slope, trapped between wanting to cling to her faith, and knowing that if she does accept the bible as law, she's writing herself a one-way ticket to hell

Choco's Note — hello and congratulation to everyone who became the chosen ones. to the people that didn't make it... please don't be mad or sad. i will promise you that your efforts will not go to into the dumpster and your character will appear somewhere in the story, you're not one of the mains that's all ♥ i will only use them if you let me. to the lucky people that were chosen, i hope that you are ready to leave over your precious characters in my care, and i will try as hard as i can to make these characters justice and try to write them as they are. if you aren't already why not send me a friend request? -flirty wink- once again thank you for taking your time to write such lovely characters ♥ you often meet your fate on the road you take to avoid it Credit

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UrangUtang #1 Apr 20, 2016 06:52:42

It's totally fine just write when you're able, I can wait <3

AeonEdition #2 Apr 7, 2016 08:53:34

Chapter 7: This was pretty good! It's great to see more development of Nabi's character through her personal struggle. As well as showing the effect of the exposure to her parent's environment and how much that's taken a toll on her as a person. You see just feel like life is hell. Even so far as to assume she's dead when she wakes up. It was an overall great chapter and the plot is obviously there. I can't wait to see the group dynamics especially after so much time has passed. But I also can't wait to see more character development not only individually but as a group. I also what to see the overall evolution they have as friends. To actually be happy past the bitterness and sadness that is life. To actually find something to live for and bind them together forever as friends. It was also great to see Tak appear. Tbh I didn't expect to see him as the first character introduced but it was a pleasant surprise.

Anyway I apologize for not commenting/reviewing earlier it's just I ended up going overseas for my birthday for quite awhile. But anyway you did great on this chapter. I honestly can't wait to see more. Whether it be introductions, development or plot because you got something in your writing and it's great.

WeSetOff #3 Mar 11, 2016 23:39:19

Chapter 7: Nabi! Poor girl, I just want to give her a huge hug. I really loved the chapter and the ending. I can't wait to read the next ones!

If you were to ask Minah who her favourite fairytale character used to be, Minah would have said Wendy. She dosen't fully remeber the story if Peter Pan but she always wanted someone who could show her a beautiful life , someone who could take her away and make her forget all the hassles of life and make her feel extremely happy. But if you were to ask her now, she would probably just ignore you and say something about how fairytale are meant for little kids so why would she like them?

As for my favourite fairytale character... it's too hard to pick one. I always really loved Beauty and the Beast growing up so probably Chip!

sikbbang #4 Mar 11, 2016 20:11:02

Chapter 7: all while reading this chapter, i kept praying for nabi. she seemed so weak and frail, and it's very dangerous to be in a big city like seoul on her own ㅠㅠ like, people are bound to take advantage on her.

I REALLY LIKE THE WHOLE PARAGRAPH ON WHERE NABI STARTED SHOUTING. ok, idk, she was wishing on her death but that part really gets to me. ;;; AND OMG HAHA KWAK INNA + COFFEE = TRUE. i laughed so hard and then felt like crying bc.. the current inna probably won't write that stuffs up again.

anyways!! this chapter is AWESOME as hell, and i really like the way you write and haejin, many thanks for finding our nabi. ;;

inna's favorite fairytale?? i think it would be the pied piper of hamelin???? the pied piper was betrayed, right?? of the villagers, so he ended up leading their kids somewhere else. in a way, he's like inna. she was betrayed, and so she leads everyone astray with their false impression of her.

mine? i like robin hood. i have 0 idea why i like fairytales with male as the lead, but hmm. robin hood is a cool guy -- he steals, but for a good reason. haha. aaa i guess that's that? ♡♡

this update was awesome ok rip

UrangUtang #5 Mar 11, 2016 15:45:04

Chapter 7: Oh no poor Nabi D: I really feel for her, man this fic is gonna hurt me so much why did I do this to myself? (because I'm a er for emotional hurt, that's why). It's a good thing she found Haejin, he should help. I feel like he's the one who's got his together the most out of all of them, and considering he's homeless that's really quite telling.

Oh no you're gonna make us think xD As he is right now I think Junseo's favourite fairytale would be the Little Mermaid because it has a sense of escaping, but also the original fairytale doesn't end happy either and Junseo is in such a bad place right now that he would identify with that as well.

As for me, when I was little I really used to love the princess and the pea, though for the life of me I don't remember why xD

sikbbang #6 Feb 26, 2016 06:43:46

Chapter 6: can you hear hysterical screaming noises??

that's me. oh my god, i'm so happy to see inna being on the charas' page! i spent a lot of time on her app and she's a portrayal of me, so i'm really.. protective over her. ♡ thank you for choosing her, really!

also, the other characters seemed really awesome too. especially woori, like, she's intriguing! her description it a+. also! oh, my god.

the prologue is so cool! first of all, your writing style really suits this genre. aaa and you wrote inna perfectly well, don't worry about that and also, don't worry about not updating. i'm pretty busy, too, exams are coming up. (also, i love inna's interactions i could tell that you really pay attention to the way i wrote the interactions in my app!!)

: conclusion? i love this. so, so much. ㅠㅠ this gives me a k-drama feel, you know.

iisMoMo #7 Feb 24, 2016 18:30:01

Chapter 4: aww congratulations to the chosen! dont worry about my character please focus on the chosen one! fighting!

WeSetOff #8 Feb 24, 2016 18:17:40

Chapter 6: I loved the way you wrote Minah and her reaction to Minhyun. I liked the way all of the characters seemed to bounce off each other like real friends ;; ;; I can't wait for the rest of the story! But please don't rush. School should come first! I wish you all the best with your school stuff!

UrangUtang #9 Feb 24, 2016 12:51:28

Chapter 6: Woah I didn't expect an update so soon what a wonderful surprise! Your writing style is really nice to read and you wrote Junseo perfectly. I feel so bad for all of them, they don't even know ;A; I'm so hype for the story, but also good luck on school stuff!!

lilshocker8 #10 Feb 24, 2016 11:16:25

Chapter 6: I love it! ;¬; Can't say much about how you portrayed Woori considering she wasn't there (;P) but I love how Nabi referred to it as a "stupid church camp", that's definitely how I figured most of the group would view her devotion~ I really like all the characters though, it's so sad they're not going to see each other again for such a long time ;; This has definitely got me even more hype for the story though, I love your writing voice!