Three – And Then ‘Poof!’

The Case
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“Oh my god, oh my god, Oh-My-God! This is amazing!”

Jongdae couldn’t contain his excitement while he read through the file, discussing the case’s specifics with his partner while they drove to the cemetery.

Minseok was the one behind the wheel, so he was depending on Jongdae to read him the information, but it was taking too long, since both detectives were getting excited at every minor detail they read.

“Okay, okay! Let’s pull ourselves together! We need to show the chief that we can be professional. We got to be serious when we get there, okay?”

Minseok talked as if he was trying to tone down their happiness, but he could barely follow his own instructions at the moment, since the smile wouldn’t disappear from his face.

“Okay, let me continue!”

Jongdae was the first to be able to relax his face and not smile anymore, assuming a more serious expression. Once he succeeded, his partner was quickly able to follow.

“Quick recap: 3 bodies were stolen so far, each from a different cemetery. Parts of the first and second bodies have surfaced in trash cans all over the south-east part of town, but there has been no sign of the third body yet.”

Jongdae flipped through the thin pages of the file, reaching a part about interviews, and he realized they’d probably have to talk to most of those people again, so to confirm their statements, and be able to get a proper read on them.

“That means that the third body is still with the people who stole it; probably being prepared to be discarded like the others.”

Minseok naturally deduced. The two were now serious and proper, as more and more they realized that they were in for a real puzzle, something truly challenging for their rookie minds.

“Victim one was Kim Soorong, age 47, died of a heart attack; victim two was Lee Haneul, age 32, died of lung cancer; and victim three was Jang Nara, age 29, died in a car accident. We need to find out what these three people had in common. So far there seems to be nothing, no family relations, no apparent social relations; they lived in different parts of town, they worked in different fields… A cemetery had hundreds of graves to steal from, why these three? What was it about them that made the thieves choose them?”

Jongdae started to present the puzzle, looking at the file to see if there was any info that could help them.

“There’s still the probability that they’re chosen at random too.”

Minseok added, and Jongdae groaned.

“Yeah… And if so, that would just make it harder for us.”

The younger man started sinking down in the car seat. They were too used to being able to solve a case in 10 minutes or less. Now they really had to work on it, and follow all the steps of their training.

“Hey, don’t be down. Just read me the interviews; let’s see if we can find a relation.”

Minseok instructed, trying to encourage his partner. The two went on to discuss the case and the possibilities all the way to the cemetery, but unfortunately got no further to solving the case than when they had begun reading.

 

 

“Don’t worry. I bet talking to the groundskeeper will help. He might have seen something suspicious.”

Minseok tapped Jongdae’s back as they walked through the paths between the graves and the huge trees. They were making their way to the little humble shack on the middle of the grounds, where they figured they’d find the person they needed to speak to.

“Says here in the file that he didn’t see anything…”

Jongdae was trying not to feel down, but he was feeling haunted by the possibility of them not being able to solve that case; if that happened, he knew it would be it for them, they’d probably be stuck with desk duties for the rest of their working days.

“But we’ll ask again anyway. Maybe he remembered something since when he talked to the officer.”

Minseok said, pushing through the same feeling his partner was experiencing. He hated seeing his friend feeling down like that, but he completely understood him. The same dark thoughts kept passing through his mind.

“Okay, let’s go try…”

It was hard, but Jongdae knew that that was no time to moping around and being depressed. He would simply be a burden to Minseok if he continued like that, so he decided to just focus on the task at hand, and not worry about the future right away. They were just getting started anyway, there were still a lot of chances for them to find a breakthrough in the case.

“Mr. Kim?”

Minseok called out as soon as they entered the little shack, but that wouldn’t even have been necessary, because entering the single room establishment made the only man inside immediately turn to them.

“May I help you?”

The old man was thin and short, but seemed sharp. He looked a bit worn down, like he had lived more years than he told; his skin was thin and stretched out, folding into wrinkles at many places of his face, and his muscles seemed to be void of strength. If he were to face an intruder on the cemetery, no matter how sharp his stare could be, when a fight ensued, it was clear he would lose.

“Hello sir. We’re with the police, and we need to talk to you about the stolen body from last night.”

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[The Case] I've added a cover and a background today! I've been working on this story, and I'll try post the first chapter soon, so please look forward to it!

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Purple-Peng
1301 streak #2
Chapter 13: Finally finish reading this today, I got to distracted reading something else. I love the bromance between Minseok and Jongdae, it almost made me think one of them might like the other. I also like Kyungsoo's brutal honesty and how the two are moved into the homicide division. I do sometimes watch criminal TV shows but I'm more into the mystery ones.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #3
Chapter 11: I knew that neighbor was suspicious, it makes me wonder if he was hiding the murder weapon in his house which might explain his nervousness around the police. To be honest when he and the old lady were mentioned in the other chapter, I found it fishy. Now I kind of think he did it to lure either Minseok or Jongdae to him but when that didn't work he made up a story on how the old lady is attacking him to get one of them to come to him.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #4
Chapter 6: I kind of wonder if there's one or two people cutting up the bodies, that's what I thought based on how the cutting style differs. But...maybe they changed the way they did it because the police could be catching up to them and they want to throw them off their trail.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #5
Chapter 4: I like how the two get into how the criminal is behaving and anything they might have (or someone else on the case) overlook.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #6
Chapter 2: Let's hope their first big case goes smoothly.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #7
Chapter 1: The way you started the chapter made me think of Ace Ventura where his specialty is finding pets. Although the neighbor did seem suspicious, I wonder if he was hiding something else since he seems uncomfortable around the police.
shipper_ #8
I am so excited to read this story ^^ .
EmberYouth
#9
Chapter 13: That was truly amazing!! I'm in love with this story <3 the way you executed it was brilliant!
On a side note, I'm really glad that you didn't show any kind of romance between the two, since these days, I've been searching for friends-only fics. And I feel that the element of friendship was a better driving force in this particular fic than romance would have been. The amount of friendly love and respect Minseok and Jongdae had for each other was incredible.
Aww. I would have loved a sequel, but okay XD I respect your choice. It's your story, after all, so we can't force you :P
EmberYouth
#10
Chapter 12: Oh oh ohohshiiiitt oooooh . I haven't even read the entire chapter yet, but I wanted to comment. About how wildly my heart is beating. I'm hoping really badly that this is one of those stories with a good ending, and nothing will happen to Jongdae. Fingers crossed!