Two – A Big One

The Case
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Minseok hissed as he applied medicine and Band-Aids to the scratches on his arm.

“Are you sure you’re okay dude?”

Jongdae asked, his face showing concern. They were back at the precinct, at their paperwork filled desks.

“Yeah, I’m okay. But that dog was really vicious, these scratches are deep.”

Minseok had been complaining for a while now, but in a low tone of voice. He didn’t want the other detectives to hear them, since they would definitely be teased for getting a lost pet case again.

The two always tried to get used to it, but it was hard. Just with a simple glance around the room, they could see the busy detectives, with white boards near their desks – filled with complex things written on them – trying to solve their hard cases. Bank robberies, murder, and so many other interesting stories, all going on right before their eyes, but they couldn’t get close enough to touch. Sometimes they felt they would never be there, they would never be important enough to solve a higher complexity case.

And the universe seemed to like putting them down, because at that moment when they were feeling down and insignificant, in enters the most famous and accomplished detective duo of the precinct; Park Chanyeol and Kim Jongin, from the homicide division. It was rumored that they were so good that they could now hand pick their own cases. The two men were very young, but very sharp, and they excelled at everything since the beginning, and their rise to the top was quick.

“Damn… They look cool…”

Jongdae mentioned as he leaned his head over, making Minseok turn to see too, since his desk faced away from the entrance, and he hadn’t noticed the two men coming into the space.

The rookie partners watched with envy as Chanyeol and Jongin walked proudly through the floor, casually greeting people as they passed by, an incredible and effortless cool vibe surrounding them. The two walked straight to the chief of police’s office, going by the glass door and closing it behind them. Jongdae and Minseok continued to watch, mesmerized. They wanted that for themselves; that fame, that coolness; a reason to enter the chief’s office – which they rarely did, other than to get scolded when something was wrong – and engage in an intense conversation about an important case.

“Ugh, this is so annoying! And you know what’s worse? The fact that that Jongin fellow is younger than me!”

Jongdae complained, turning away because he couldn’t look anymore without having his blood boil. With that cue, Minseok did the same, returning to his first-aid kit.

“Yeah? And how do you think I feel? They’re both younger than me!”

Minseok hissed once more, not because of the scratches this time, but because he accidentally closed the box too harshly in his moment of anger and ended up pressing a bit of his finger under the lid.

“I know, I know! Makes me wonder sometimes, if there’s something wrong with us.”

Jongdae sighed as he spoke. The two didn’t quite like that comment. Although it was something they thought of multiple times, they didn’t like talking about it.

“But this experience makes us humble. If we just got to the top too quickly like those two, it would have made us cocky and arrogant. This way when we finally get there, we’ll have a lot more respect for the whole process, and all the rookies will love us because we’re nice and kind to them, since we understand what they’re going through.”

Minseok emotionally responded, trying to bring up the morale on their team. His speech seemed to have worked well, as Jongdae started nodding strongly, a fierce and determinate expression on his face.

“Yeah, yeah! That’s right, you’re absolutely right. We don’t want to be like them, having success handed to us on a silver plate. They don’t k

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[The Case] I've added a cover and a background today! I've been working on this story, and I'll try post the first chapter soon, so please look forward to it!

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Purple-Peng
1301 streak #2
Chapter 13: Finally finish reading this today, I got to distracted reading something else. I love the bromance between Minseok and Jongdae, it almost made me think one of them might like the other. I also like Kyungsoo's brutal honesty and how the two are moved into the homicide division. I do sometimes watch criminal TV shows but I'm more into the mystery ones.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #3
Chapter 11: I knew that neighbor was suspicious, it makes me wonder if he was hiding the murder weapon in his house which might explain his nervousness around the police. To be honest when he and the old lady were mentioned in the other chapter, I found it fishy. Now I kind of think he did it to lure either Minseok or Jongdae to him but when that didn't work he made up a story on how the old lady is attacking him to get one of them to come to him.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #4
Chapter 6: I kind of wonder if there's one or two people cutting up the bodies, that's what I thought based on how the cutting style differs. But...maybe they changed the way they did it because the police could be catching up to them and they want to throw them off their trail.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #5
Chapter 4: I like how the two get into how the criminal is behaving and anything they might have (or someone else on the case) overlook.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #6
Chapter 2: Let's hope their first big case goes smoothly.
Purple-Peng
1301 streak #7
Chapter 1: The way you started the chapter made me think of Ace Ventura where his specialty is finding pets. Although the neighbor did seem suspicious, I wonder if he was hiding something else since he seems uncomfortable around the police.
shipper_ #8
I am so excited to read this story ^^ .
EmberYouth
#9
Chapter 13: That was truly amazing!! I'm in love with this story <3 the way you executed it was brilliant!
On a side note, I'm really glad that you didn't show any kind of romance between the two, since these days, I've been searching for friends-only fics. And I feel that the element of friendship was a better driving force in this particular fic than romance would have been. The amount of friendly love and respect Minseok and Jongdae had for each other was incredible.
Aww. I would have loved a sequel, but okay XD I respect your choice. It's your story, after all, so we can't force you :P
EmberYouth
#10
Chapter 12: Oh oh ohohshiiiitt oooooh . I haven't even read the entire chapter yet, but I wanted to comment. About how wildly my heart is beating. I'm hoping really badly that this is one of those stories with a good ending, and nothing will happen to Jongdae. Fingers crossed!