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Before That Day Comes
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It was a gloomy day. I was sitting on our favorite table when we went to this cafe, your favorite cafe, to be exact. I waited for you and I had ordered your favorite food and beverage. I looked around at the café, it’s still the same. They still played old songs or the classic masterpiece from Beethoven, Vivaldi, and many other musicians. We loved going to here because of the ambience, the wood scent from the old book shelves they have in here, and the tea and coffee. Our favorite table was the one farthest from the entrance, somehow it was hidden, giving us more private space than the other tables. You would read something from the shelves, and I would be busy with my notes and papers, composing something.

We would not talk to each other for hours, drowned into whatever we were doing. But one thing we did for sure was: we would still glued to each other. One day, I would just lean to you while I was writing something. Some other time, you would place your arm around my hip then enjoy your book or laced your fingers with mine. If I took a rest from writing, I would, kind of, pester you. I would touch your ears, playing with your earlobe, then watching your reaction. Sometimes you tried to wriggle away from my touch, and the other time you just glared at me; and after that I would grin like a child.

I didn’t know that waiting for someone could make me suffocated. I impatiently knocking at the table while took a glance to the clock at the wall. I’ve been waiting here for just ten minutes, yet it felt like it’s been thousand years. I knew you wouldn’t make me wait like this. It has always been me who

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bigbangwho_ #1
Chapter 12: AAAAA I REALLY LOVE ITTTT tell me why didnt i read this before???? right bc i was in too deep with todae i cant see him with anyone other than top geez. but srsly i really like this story. love even. i always love ur way of writing so its really enjoyable! ahh pls dont stop writing author-nim! (especially about todae...hehe..)
ave9229 #2
It is a really good story, with interesting development. I really like Seunghyun's character where he wants Daesung to be happy, and when Daesung ran back to Seunghyun I was really glad. Jiyong's character really stirred an emotion in me, like how can someone be that mean and heartless, also shameful to still chase after Daesung after what he did? I don't understand his actions sometimes, like how he still get closer to Daesung despite his decision to leave him, and why he was so passive in the beginning of the story. At one point I can't believe someone can be like that. I have to be honest though, I was looking forward for GDae story and apparently this is not one :p so I was a little disappointed but hey, good choice Daesung! And thank you for the story!
LoonyMe #3
Chapter 12: I've been contemplating since forever whether to read this story or not since for me jiyong oppa is seungri's and daesung oppa is seunghyun oppa's. But then i kind of suffering from "good story deficiency" so i decide to give it a go. Aaaaaanndddd.. i'm torn.. i'm delighted that daesung oppa is happy with seunghyun oppa but i'm bawling for jiyong oppa (although he brought it down upon himself by leaving).. Its a happy ending but sad at the same time *i dont know how to describe it.. I'm relived and happy that i decided to read this story.. great job author-nim

P.s. cant you write a sequel about todae's after marriage live?? *wink wink
mitsukinekouchiha
#4
Chapter 12: I love when an ending give this mixed emotions. You know? For me it's not a happy ending, but in a good way. I know JiYong didn't deserve Daesung, he love him but sometimes that's it isn't enough, and he hurt Daesung so much.
When I was reading thid last chapter I tough "OH, he got him back" but no *cries* It's a real love story, a REAL one. When every action have is consequences.
As I'd said, for me it's a sad ending just for JiYong, but it give a warm feeling because Daesungie is happy whit the right person *cries more*
foreverdae26 #5
Chapter 12: Wow, great story, as always :) can you make a story after they're married pleasee? <3<3
aewalon
#6
Chapter 12: Wow, great ToDae story.......I love it!
SCarpediem
#7
I started to read this today and i finished it in one go, i just couldn't stop... when seunghyun asked jiyong to go after daesung i was screaming "stupid seunghyun!!!" in my heart and when jiyong found daesung i was praying "no no no, don't take him, daesung ah", haha stupid me... seunghyun is really sweet and comprehensive and gentle in this story omg he's just perfect, how can one not love him? Jiyong chose leave daesung to chase his dream in Vienna, thinking the distance between Vienna and Seoul wouldn't change a thing, while seunghyun thinks jeju and seoul is an unbearable distance, that tells how different they are...
Conclusion: definitely a good one! :)
todaelovers
#8
Chapter 12: Finally todae hally ending... i am glad n i love the ending of this story... thank u so much for this beautiful story author-nim ^^
Mwoing1025 #9
Chapter 12: Oh my god i seriously thought when seunghyun gave jiyong the suit he gave a chance to jiyong to be daesung husband, but it ended just one of seunghyun's best man. Damn it's really good story, thank you for writing this❤
Senya1986 #10
Chapter 12: Sooo good!!! I love this story. Please write more. ToDae for the win!!!