Hi I just wanted to know what the status of my request is

Author: KJINJH
Story Title: Lens and Chlorine
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1113426
Genres: romance, drama, angst
Focuses: I guess, everything? Sorry. I wanna know my story as full package. Is it interesting? Inviting? Boring? Writing skill, grammars, typos. Is it too plain? Well, and else. Also the characters. I think overall. I am ready for any critism ^^

Author: -Muasbby
Story Title: An Inheritor's Marriage
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/615507/an-inheritor-s-marriage-read-chapter-24-arrangedmarriage-drama-jinki-onew-romance-shinee-marriagelife
Genres: romance, drama, arrangemarriage,
Trigger warnings: Softcore (?) in some parts
Focuses: Hi! So I recently just came back from a year long hiatus with this story and wanna come back to it. My only issue is I wanna know how my characters are from a reader's point of view. I would like my review to be focused on the characters (predominately Jinki and Nayeon) but ultimately all the reoccurring characters. I want to build on my character development/establishments. You can go ahead and be as honest as possible. Also perhaps how I am depicting the issues (so far).

Author: KangminBread
Story Title: Voiceless Scream
Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1030716/voiceless-scream-angst-drama-kangin-kangmin-kyuhyun-leeteuk-sungmin
Genres: romance (), psychological
Trigger warnings: Psychological, suicide attempt, kidnapping and abuse of children, ia, attempt murder. (all of those are backgrou dinformation so they have are non-graphic scenes)
Focuses: I would like to hear your thoughts mostly on characterization and flow. This story was based on strange dream I had (pretty much what happened in the last three chapters) so I'm most sure this plot is not the most outstanding I had so far, but please comment on it since I would like to know if i could give a little bit of sense into this slice of life story. I feel the end in a bit lacking again because my dream ended there and whatever could come to be added next would only feel dragged in my point of view. The side characters were not mean to have huge spotlights, but have important actions in the play so please comment if any of them felt too plain or lacked the necessary depth. Finaly English is not my first language and I did have a lot of help with my grammar so any new imput would be good, but you can give just an overall view since pretty much every reviewer points out the very same flaws I am still trying to correct ^^ that's it XD

Chapter 6: Thanks for the review ^^ I am just really excited to write a sequel that I really didn't think about the title that much when I started this story. But yeah there could have been a much better title even though my targets at first are really just those who have watched the drama. To give them a proper ending cx I'm not good at descriptions too. I'm still working on that. I am happy that you like my characters tho. I tried to make them really lovable so that readers wil find it hard to hate them once i show who the villain really is cx And omg thanks for the plot holes/points ;A; It will be really helpful. The plot wasn't really supposed to be like that but as I write it gets really messy because I tried connecting everything and unintentionally creat more subplots. I'll read the review again and fix all the things you said. Thanks again. <3 cREDITED

Author: foonew
Story Title: all that glitters is not gold
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1010264/all-that-glitters-is-not-gold-angst-fluff---exo-sekai-kaisoo
Genres: romance (), extreme angst, mild
Trigger warnings: infidelity, character death, brief homophobia, smoking/drugs
Focuses: characterisation mostly as i know that my characters lack development, especially towards the end. also the flow as my time jumps are random and several people have told me that they're confusing - i think i need advice on how to fix this :) thank you.

Authors: twosuns and Unconscioustomato
Story Title: Thank You for Listening
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1012281
Genre: Romance
Trigger Warning: Teenage swearing
Focuses: plot, how the story flows and progresses, characterisation and anything you wish to add if you stumble across any weird parts.

Thank you so much! This is the first time in nearly 4 years that I've applied for a review lol. I appreciate the hard work you guys put into this :)

Picked up! Sorry for the long wait, I've been pretty busy this week, I'll credit as soon as I can. Thank you so much for the review, it helped a lot.