❛ TEASER 005 // CANDIDATES 003。

❛ SUBZER0 ⋮ NEW SMENT GIRL GROUP // APPLY CLOSED。
towards subzerO iII.
december 08, 2015

(vii). Nymph of Allurement - The Free

"Kate, shouldn't you take a break?" a male asks, staring at one figure dancing long after the choreographer had left. When he's only met with her silence, he sighs, walking over to the stereo only to turn it off.

The reaction is immediate. The girl whips around, her long ponytail flipping from the sheer force and precision of her turn-around.

"I need to practice to debut," she retorts, walking over to the radio to turn it back on. 

"What you need right now, after five hours of training, is rest," Johnny replies calmly without hesitation, disregarding the female's forceful personality. 

"Soojung just told me Sooman seongsaeng-nim is debuting a new girl group. Come on Johnny, this is my chance," Kathryn says, finally turning to look at Johnny. 

"Kate, you're not getting anywhere without proper rest. If you end up debuting, you'll need it." The boy chuckles, offering the girl a water bottle. There's another silence as Kathryn tries to reject Johnny's attempts to get her to cease training, but eventually, she sighs and takes the water bottle.

"You'll get there. Just make sure to take care of yourself too."  

(viii). The Firecracker  - The Free

"Mina, oh my gosh, it's confirmed! SM's debuting another girl group!" Haneul says– almost screams– into the phone as soon as Mina picks up.

"Wait then," the female on the other side says, as if trying to process the news, "we can be rookies together if you debut!" Haneul grins at the thought.

"If? You mean when, duh. Of course I'm going to debut," Haneul replies with a grin, her phone being held between her cheek and shoulder as she cooks dinner for herself.

"How are you so sure?" Mina chuckles on the other line, and Haneul blinks.

"Optimism?" Haneul offers rather lamely, despite the smile playing on her lips as she stirs the soup.

"Well, you have to do something," Mina mutters, and Haneul can practically hear the eye-roll. "Wow them. Don't you have the monthly assessments coming up soon?" 

Silence.

"I totally forgot! I have to choreograph something for the assessments in three days time!" Haneul screams. Then something else happens. "Shoot." 

"Oh my god unnie– wait, what?" 

"I just poured a whole lot of pepper into this soup," Haneul mutters, looking dispairingly at her soup. "I'll manage... somehow."

(ix). Poker-Faced Doll - The Celestial

Jiae and Joy are walking down the hallways of SM when they see none other than Kang Seoyul speed past them, nervousness laced through her actions despite her head held high and ever-regal aura.

"Hey, why do you think Seoyul-ssi's being sent to the board office?" Joy questions, nudging Jiae lightly. The latter blinks before looking at Joy, then to Seoyul's retreating figure, and then back to Joy, before simply shrugging. 

"How am I supposed to know?" she mumbles, not even having noticed her fellow trainee's presence prior to Joy pointing it out. 

"I don't know... I just thought that maybe there was something going on amongst the trainees." The two girls mull over it as they enter the entertainment building's cafe. 

"I don't know. I doubt that they'd debut another girl group right after Red Velvet," Jiae muses thoughtfully, sitting down at a table by the windows before plucking out some chocolate from her bag. When Joy looks at the chocolate and to her, Jiae sighs, breaking off a singular block and handing it over to Joy.

"Besides, a debut isn't really something I have to worry about right now." 

 
author note

Have any of you guys bothered to notice that all the intros so far are 191 words exactly– I'm making that a trend now. As you guys see, I changed to present tense, so tell me whether or not you guys prefer present or past tense for the story!
Anyway, the apply is closed now and I've handed out two extensions (one for The Golden and another for  The Angelic) so those two will be the last revealed. Most likely, I'll be revealing Radiant or Free first? Once I actually thoroughly compare and contrast apps, and actually choose, of course.
Before revealing group members, I will be working on teasers! I'm writing these teasers on everyone because I want to get a grasp of everyone's characters, and learn how to decently write them. Also with which ones I'm most comfortable writing, and who I have the most fun with. I will be writing teasers for everyone, so please be patient with me! And also because I have school filling up the next two weeks of my schedule. 
Once again, to the applicants with the characters I wrote, please tell me if there's anything wrong! I didn't proof-read this by the way, aksjalskjd, not enough time–

 

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❛ SUBZER0 ⋮ 12.17.15 // Extensions and my finals are now over! I hope to get a teaser up tomorrow, but I have quite a lot to do, though I'll try!

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_kellyyyv_ #1
Haiii there, I just wanted to let you know that I've changed my username from Sehunismine12 to _kellyyyv_ :))
-glimmeron
#2
Chapter 16: Wahhh I can't wait for this!
(pardon the late comment- I haven't checked for a while XP)
I'm just finished reading everything, and I'm surprised by how much detail and effort you put in for all of the individual teasers!
It was literally like having a little sneak peak preview into all of the personas of each of the unique girls!
I'll anticipate for your next update! Hwaiting!
ER2029 #3
Chapter 12: Yoooooo hoooo~
Hi there, sweety <3
Thank you so much for the teaser, I really enjoyed it. Especially, after a long day.
I hope you had a nice rest after your finals and just some time to chill. A lazy day/days from time to time are good for the soul. >u<
I guess you are getting comfortable with writing this applyfic?? Therefore the feeling that you wrote better? I don't know, but I end up reading this much faster than I would like to have read it. It was really good and fluent <3

I just realized that I probably fell asleep on this comment in the middle of writing and never send it HAHAHHAHAHAHHA
Gaads... I'm sorry, I swear i'm not dead XD ANYWAYS!!! HAPPY NEW YEAR, MY DEAR <3
-hopefullee
#4
Chapter 12: i think you did a great job! and oh my when i saw "master of all traits" i was like WOOOH IT'S JIWONNNNN hahahha xD but yes the teaser is rly rly well written and i'm not being biased! hahahha ><
"we're getting your in gear" omg i love that line xP
LMAO DID JINHEE JUST SLEEP TIL ALMOST NOON OMG HAHAH but yes omg group chats that cause my phone to ring until i wake up are so annoying ._.
aww haneul is so cute! x) hehe good luck with the choosing! (:
sharehappiness
#5
Chapter 4: Aha I accept this waiting with an open hand, because all your writing is beautifully done. The interaction well written, and I definitely think you've nailed the art of writing everything that is detailed, precise, entertaining, but not boringly long winded. So I cannot wait to see what else you've gotten in store for the applicants, and who you've chosen.
Good luck with choosing, no pressure because either way I'll happily keep reading. Take your time, because we'll still be waiting for you. Fighting!
ygsmjypfam
#6
Chapter 12: Ohhh, I agree! this teaser was pretty great!
I enjoyed reading it too. In fact, I honestly want more OvO
And I can't help but notice~ Is the theme for this teaser about friendship and/or love? /wiggles eyebrows
They're all cuuuute!
Taemin and Jiwon are so cute tbh! Especially when she asked about the text.
I dunno? They seemed adorable. And it's Taemin! Freaking Taemin! :">
And Jinhee. Early in the morning... Why Wendy? Why? Haha!
Man, if I was Haneul and I saw Seoyul in that position, I'd be worrying too ;n;
At least, Seoyul gave out a positive news! Haha. <3
Ah, I missed this story tbh. All of your teasers are great and easy to read.
But of course, no pressure :D Just take your time, authornim.
Can't wait for the rest to be released! Good luck with choosing :)
Fighting!!
bbomeyy
#7
Chapter 12: Happy New Year, by the way, Authornim~
bbomeyy
#8
Chapter 12: Gosh, all these teasers gets me more hyped up!
_kellyyyv_ #9
Chapter 12: Omg I love your teasers~ and you're an amazing writer!!! I'm srsly so exited for all the girls! :)) good luck to everyone and happy new year!!
avidari
#10
Chapter 12: your teasers are very neat and entertaining. i can't wait to see subzero's debut >.<

anyway, happy holiday, author-nim! :))