Annyeong~! This is my first proper fanfic to be published, so do me a favor, would ya n_____n? Be as honest as you can. As a beginner I need to know if something is a bit off.  Got a review on this one (til chap 22), you can find it here: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/193138/12/the-exotic-review-

no.. jumal küll 

  »»»  Miloh and Minhyuk had been online friends for over a year, until one day the boy disappeared into thin air without a warning or explanation. Miloh, who had secretly been in love with the boy she had never met, stubbornly