......................................it's the holidays for me *U* so i'm writing some fanfic... hope my eng improves.. T__T  

  So here are the characters: Kris – King Kris (ROFLMAO) Luhan – Prince Luhan Lay – Guard Yixing/Cook when needed. Xiumin – Butler/House Keeper Tao – Assassin/Guard Chen – Commoner (LOLOLOLOL) Sehun – evil in Kris’ eyes. Ok

This is my first time writing a fanfic so tips would be appreciated!!! Um, this is fanfic of Kris and Lay...and lets see how it unfolds Coz I don't even know how it's going to end! Also er....my writing really and it's just that comes out of my head....sooo sorry in advance if you are going wtf.   oh and sorry for no paragraphing............this will be solely written on my phone! :D