It started in the Bathroom

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This is my first time writing a fanfic so tips would be appreciated!!! Um, this is fanfic of Kris and Lay...and lets see how it unfolds Coz I don't even know how it's going to end!

Also er....my writing really and it's just that comes out of my head....sooo sorry in advance if you are going wtf.

 

oh and sorry for no paragraphing............this will be solely written on my phone! :D 

Foreword

He closed his eyes in embarrassment as only "ah.." managed to come out of his mouth. I bet people will take this wrongly .... haha!

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Areumda #1
kraaaaaaaaaaay
fckeverywon
#2
omg i love lay!
WhiteAngelG #3
Holy crap! Who the heck would take Kris away from Lay?! Someones gunna get beat! & it may be Chen if that was his plan! Anyways awsome story!
xiaoxinxing #4
Holy crap did he just ask Luhan(?) out????? WTF wasn't he suppose to confess to Yixing???
poppydoppy123
#5
Um wut o.o
LOL CHONNY
Hey angel you da y
xiaoxinxing #6
lol evil chen!
poppydoppy123
#7
Wut just happened o_o
Yay for Evil Chen :D
fy-exotics
#8
Salttea
#9
@aimeime REALLY? THANKYOU!!! lay...hmmm you'll have to wait and find out!
Salttea
#10
@poppydoppy123 LOLOLOLOLOL that's a relaly smart idea!!! BUT I HAVE SOMETHING ELSE IN MIND ;)