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Welcome to Poison Apple, a shop dedicated to reviews of fanfics. Our goal is to give our honest opinions each and every story that comes into our shop. We are not grammar nazis so we will not point out all flaws with your writing but mostly review your storyline. The service is completely free and will always be free of charge. We take stories of all kinds: , Yuri, Straight, , Non-. 

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Queensabelle #1
Title:
He Heard It
Story Link:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/966063
Status of Story:
Completed
Genre (Name 2):
Romance, school life
Rated M?:
Nope
/Yuri?:
Nope
Anything else?
Thanks in advance! Please check on my story plot and grammars! ^^
gijeong #2
Title: Forever Is Never Enough
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1023097/forever-is-never-enough-angst-death-twoshot-exo-kai-kyungsoo-kaisoo
Status of Story: Complete
Genre (Name 2): Angst, Romance
Rated M?: Nope
/Yuri?:
Anything else? I'm not a native English speaker and I'm still learning. Also please focus on my storyline and description.
loverful #3
would you like to be affies? <3

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/992401/he-onut-ole-a-beta-reading-shop-open-review-you-beta-advice-betareading-reviewshop-proofreader
kimsfangirl #4
Chapter 9: Thank you, I'll credit ASAP
PrimroseEverdeen #5
Title: Night Changes
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/879270/night-changes-krystal-shinee-sulli-taelli-taemin-kai-kaistal
Status of Story: Completed
Genre (Name 2): Romance, Friendship
Rated M?: No
/Yuri?: Boy x Girl
Anything else? : English is not my first language so my grammar might not be as good as others . if there's any spelling mistakes, most probably i didn't realise that :D . tq
sekaii #6
Chapter 8: Thank you so much for the review!
I can guarantee you this story will be very dark and mysterious. I'm quite happy it gave you the chills hehe ><
This story is actually one of my darker stories since I'm used to writing romantic/comedy genres.
Ah, background that is what I was forgetting. I was focused on trying to develop interesting characters that I left so much ambiguity and holes in the actual background.
My beta reader actually told me about how she was confused about the first chapter. I actually had revised some parts in ch.1 in my drive, but didn't make the changes in time. Now I can fully edit the first couple of chapters and fill in those holes.
I'm glad you've enjoyed it! Not many of my readers comment, so I don't really know what they're thinking.
For this story I actually had in mind of the pace and I wanted to pace it a bit slow. I think I'm going a bit "too" slow from what I've gathered. I haven't introduced the main case yet(which is jongin's case) let alone the other side cases that revolve around the dead. I was thinking of actually introducing a side case for ch.4, but I guess I'll be adding into some background information about Sehun and also along with the new character which I haven't went thoroughly with.
I hope to come back with another review for this story once it has around chapters.
Only if thats okay with you ^___^
Thanks for the encouragement~
caeruleusclouds #7
Title: Running After You
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/999991
Status of Story: its a one shot, currently I have only posted the prologue.. but the one and only chapter will be out very soon :)
Genre (Name 2): romance, slice of life
Rated M?: nope
/Yuri?: nope
Anything else? please focus on my writing style and characterisation :) take your time ^^
500sunny500 #8
Title: Miss Pariah
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/870568
Status of Story: Ongoing
Genre (Name 2): slice-of-life, angst
Rated M?: No
/Yuri?: No
Anything else?: I'd like you to focus on the characters, if possible (only the mains, which are Jiyong, Jieun, Minah, and Jiho). Otherwise, thank you in advance!
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