Chapter4

Caught Up In A Bad Romance
Please Subscribe to read the full chapter

Unknown:pov

On her way to the coffee shop where she works someone bumped to her and she fall down and that person didn´t apologize to her instead he blamed her for not watching her way. 

"Watch where you going idiot" he said that and left..................

Your:POV aish jinja people what is wrong with them today? who the hell was he calling idiot he the one who didn´t look where he was going and calls other people idiot,what a joke! am let for my job.......... today looks like i´m about to die *god save me* if it wasn´t for that rounded face ajusshi i would have made it in time. what unlucky day today is! *crying*. let´s go in and listen to the old man nagging! *wait* please tell me the guys are in there please god!!!! her goes nothing  meanwhile in the coffee shop: "WHERE IS SHE? DID SHE WAKE UP  LATE TODAY TOO OR WAIT SHE IS SICK AGAIN! WHERE THE HELL SHE ? "sh-she is on her way s-ss- sir! she will be he- joisonghapnida, ....... *inside my mind* let´s just say that the time happened to freeze due to the air was too hot like hell was brought to the place judt for that moment* and looks like my friends are ............ are not moving at all. *get a hold* "joisonghapnida jeongmal oisonghapnida sir " oh! waseo. come come in this is your office you can come anytime you want, arrasso. (Kris a..k.a the cold prince) "aish! i wish he was nice as handsome he is, but no he pain in the ing "! Sir sorry i was caught up in trafick jam. Enough! go back to work all of you now!! he said and everyone went back to work as for me i runned to the changing room and started cleaning after i was done changing my clothes... ( let´s me my friends at work) (Hoya ; 21yrs, he works as the cashier)   "Hey Trouble! what happened this time? another one of your f#cked sh**t agin!! BUHAHAHA!! 

"keeping laughing hoya i wll get my sweet revenge

Please Subscribe to read the full chapter
Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
12EXOEXO #1
Chapter 3: This isn't a bad story, the flow is just a little off, and in the second chapter it was hard to figure out who was talking and what was happening. It sort of rattles up readers. I'm not exactly sure we're the story starts.

But if you try to correct some of that I'm sure this'll be very good :)
12EXOEXO #2
Chapter 1: This looks like it has potential, but has been quiet a few grammatical and puncuation mistakes. Other then that I'm interested in reading more..