Chapter3

Caught Up In A Bad Romance
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A  MONTH BEFROE THE WEDDING

 Good morning~~! i sang as soon as i entered  the kitchen for breakfast, "what is today´s menu for breakfast omma".

"It´s you´re favourite pancakes, it wll be ready in few minutes acn you go and wake up the others sweetie?

"Are they still sleeping?"    i asked as i looked at omma because i thought i was the lazy one who wakes up late! *hahah looks like they joined the club*.

"YAH! KIKWANG PALI WAKE UP YOU WILL BE LATE FOR YOUR JOB ***H***LE!  trying to wake up him  is like trying to wake up hyena who had too much to drinks.

I left him cause he wouldn´t wake up! i went to the others, Next:Mark.

"Mark~~ wake up~~! i tried to play nice and cool but i don´t have energy i haven´t eat breakfast, aish why did i woke up early! aish omma shuoldn´t have made this role:(IF You wake up before the others make sure to wake them up before you eat breakfast). YAH MARK WAKE UP RIGHT NOW BEFORE I GO DOWNSTAIRS AND TELL DAD WHAT YOU DID AT SCHOOL!............................... why are they not waking up today of all the other days.*blame the pancakes i wanna eat them* i´m going to be late for my job yeah that is right i found a job and those brothers of mine are not waking up. My sisters they left for they jobs and i´m stacked in here with those......  oh yeah! Seo oppa came late last nigh from his trip, is he awake he can help me please say that he is at home!!!! i went down stairs and told omma nad appa that they don´t want to wake up yet and i asked them if they know wether seo is at home or not and they told me that maybe his .. i said my goodbyes and told them that i´ll eat with oppa or buy food at work place.

Few minutes later.

I arrived his house and lets just he didn´t change the house abit, aiish old fashion oppa of mine. It´s my first time visit his house cause he was never at home so i´m goin

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12EXOEXO #1
Chapter 3: This isn't a bad story, the flow is just a little off, and in the second chapter it was hard to figure out who was talking and what was happening. It sort of rattles up readers. I'm not exactly sure we're the story starts.

But if you try to correct some of that I'm sure this'll be very good :)
12EXOEXO #2
Chapter 1: This looks like it has potential, but has been quiet a few grammatical and puncuation mistakes. Other then that I'm interested in reading more..