R: Falling

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DESCRIPTION
The title is a single simple word, but just fits. And in more ways than one. While it can mean the obvious (Chanyeol and Kyungsoo falling for each other), it can also refer to both of them individually, facing their own fears, and that's nice. Your cover is the cutest, and your description is also good. It's literally the story in 19 words. Everything is very welcoming, and we'd read it even if we didn't have to, really.

PLOT
We're here for this ♥ Chanyeol having one sided feelings, then Kyungsoo also very slowly falling for Chanyeol. The fact that it's realistic, and Kyungsoo struggles to accept himself. All the angst, and the cute interactions ;; The pace is also something worth of praise, time flows really well. Although you could use some commas, some of the phrases are just too long. But that's like the only downside of it? We're in LOVE with the setting. It's the same old overused roommates, but you and your style make it different. There's a lack of dialogue, and it's written more like poetry. That's something one of the reviewers personally misses a lot in fanfics written in English, really. The focus on the seasons is also lovely ;; You're writing about everyday stuff, and it's so simple, but you somehow deliver it. I can't wait for the next chapter, and for them to kiss, and find out it's mutual??? o(-(

CHARACTERIZATION
Can we just hug you? Park Chanyeol can cook!!! AND CLEAN!!! LIKE IN REAL LIFE!!! He's so patient and caring and spoils Kyungsoo and sweetie, that's how you make your way into our hearts! Chanyeol pushes Kyungsoo to talk and laugh and have some fun instead of just rummaging in his dark thoughs and we believe that's why Chanyeol is so important to Kyungsoo in real life. He is attentive and buys him medicine even though Kyungsoo doesn't ask for it simply because he sees Kyungsoo. He's observant and useful. And Kyungsoo is also so on point. He may joke around and play along but he's also quiet when it comes to his own feelings ;; I want to cry.



We love Falling and we love you, bananaphone. "Scanty", they said... I wanna scant your face. That's not even a verb but still. Can you believe it, you said scanty... No, Darling. I hope you write more Chansoo from now on and that you update Falling. I see it's been almost a month since VIII and honey, don't you dare stop there. I am warning you that if you do, I'll find out where you live. And I'll probably need to get on a plane, but I'll end up at your door, on my knees and crying. We're subscribing. Violently. Where's that gif of Jongin aggressivelly throwing hearts at the fans when I need it?

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driftwood
#1
I sent a request to your email for both beta & review. I hope to hear from you soon. Thanks!
SrtaTacoMal
#2
Chapter 5: Thanks so much!!! *_*
SrtaTacoMal
#3
Hello! Just popping in for a review:
You Can Never Know
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/937812/
bananaphone
#4
Um, hello. I saw your notice not too long ago but kept it drifting for as I wasn't too certain of my story being worth the time. Though since it was found in one way or another by one of you I might as well perhaps assume someone has eyed it through; if not then please don't fret. I have never had anything reviewed nor truly commented in detail considering the fact that I write rather low key stories so... if anyone would think it would be worth the time then it would be fun and mildly terrifying having my scanty story evaluated. Sorry for keeping things this long; have a nice day.
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/910231/falling-chansoo-chanyeol-kyungsoo
paula1988
#5
Hi I would like you to review my story please it could be view to beta after
Thanks :)

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/340711/kim-taehun-s-son-drama-sad-taehun-zea-depression-bittersweet
tendaerlove #6
Hi! I've seen your ad and I'd like to ask for a review. My story is called "Far, Far Away but Close, Close to You" and you can find it here: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/959934/far-far-away-but-close-close-to-you-comedy-chansoo-exo-baekchen-chenbaek-chinguline-princeau

I have to mention, chansoo plays a very little part, the story is more focused on baekchen. Hope it's not a problem! ^^

xoxo, bea
SHINeeSangtae13
#7
Hi! I'm Alice and I'd like it if you reviewed my fic!
It's called Christmas Wishes and the link is
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/916321/christmas-wishes-christmas-fluff-chansoo
Thank you in advance! <3
Black_diamonds
#8
Ill have to check this oyt... only cuz u ship chansoo....