Pain [Poem]

matsu-hyung's journal of weird stuff

Pain (2010)

 

Characters:

  • Nameless Fictionals

Notes:

  • Part 1/1
  • Finished

 


 

Our sadness consumes us,

Draining our blood,

Eating our flesh,

So that we're left as dry fragile bones,

Waiting to whither away with time;

 

Our hearts break easily,

Like a fragment of glass,

Dropped from above our heads,

Unlike the diamonds we pretend to be;

 

They say that lies are wrong,

But they can save us;

 

If negative feelings consume us,

But we take no action,

Can we still call ourselves good?

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Makirei
#1
Oh you changed the name of the journal! I will forever remember dusty roses!
Makirei
#2
Chapter 18: Yay! I love your recent poems, but the last two are so sad :(
aplusjagiya #3
Oh my god. I have only every wanted a deathnote fic. Thats not true but still. Im begging you to continue it.
Makirei
#4
You updated !!
fried-chicken
#5
I creep too much on you. o u o;;;
fried-chicken
#6
12| Sad, cute, and romantic. <3
fried-chicken
#7
11| I must have bothered you with mentioning my boyfriend but this is SO me when I see him on Fridays.<3
I miss that fool and his silliness. ^ 3 ^
fried-chicken
#8
10| Reminds me of my novio although he has no cellphone.
He'll ignore me at times and I'm like asgdkdvsk: what did I do wrong?!
fried-chicken
#9
9| . </3 A guy's done this to me before.
He was so...alluring and he just dissappeared. It took me so darn long to get over him!
fried-chicken
#10
8| My boyfriend sent me a note telling me "it's over" last year. It but it's nothing near this. I'm sort of glad he broke up with me through a note.

We got back together anyway, LOL. <3