The composer

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Composing is always risky for him, since he tends to put too much soul into every verse, to show his most hidden feelings in every strophe, and then the sample thought that some people could understand who the person behind the idol image is and, more than this, thet thought that they could judge him kills all his joy and enthusiasm.

Foreword

This is a little SugaMon / NamGi story I have originally written for one of my classes, with a few little changes. The ending is the most improved. I wasn't going to post this here, but today I had a really ty day, so here I am. Please, point out any mistakes you'll notice. I want to improve my writting and my English.

The story will be posted tonight, I am 99% sure.

This will also be posted on my Archiveofourown account and possibly on wattpad too.

Thanks for reading. Have a nice day / night.

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Blue82 #1
Chapter 1: I enjoyed the softness of it. It's gentle and sweet.
kikikaka #2
Chapter 1: owhhhhhh... this is so cute XD
sugastruck #3
Chapter 1: short sweet beautiful. I loved it <3
sugarissour #4
Chapter 1: One of the few ships I can't really warm up to is SugaMon, but you've managed to have me squealing like a little kid at their cuteness haha. But, honestly, your writing is really beautiful and really emotional (?). Like, I feel every word you write, and I always feel what the character feels and it's beautiful. The only critique I can give you is that I wish it was longer ^^
AbsoluteHominy #5
Chapter 1: This was a cute little glimpse at sugarmon. I really like when authors capture that easy feeling between the couples and I definitely felt that in this piece. Of course I wish it was longer, but unnie is greedy for sugamon. It was very believable and i liked the fact that even though they know they are being cheesy it doesn't stop them. ^^
If English if your second language, I seriously didn't notice in your writing, so you should applaud yourself.
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