take my hand (and never let go)

Description

Perhaps our greatest flaw in this world was the inability to find peace.

 

A tragic war love story told through a collection of time skips.

Foreword

Title: take my hand (and never let go)

Pairings: Xiulay, some Sesoo and Krishan if you squint hard enough

Word Count: ~9606

Rating: PG-13/R

Warnings: war!au, historical!au, angst, swearing, character death, minor blood/gore, erted Lu Han, smooth as hell Minseok

No Prompt

 

"I don't have a bias," I tell myself as I proceed to make Yixing one of the main characters of my projects once again, goddamnit

Xiulay's ing cute don't even try to deny it.

This is loosely set towards the the end of World War II. I tried to make things accurate, but please forgive me if I didn't because I'm utter at proper research.

Beta-ed by my fave, mylittleemo~

 

Written for Round 2 of the EXOplosion Writing Contest~

Entered in district three writing contest

Entered in  » polyamorous ☆ writing contest ☆

Entered in ƞew year • ƞew story || a 2015 writing competition

Entered in the BARCODE Writing Contest

This is kind of my first full throttle attempt at angst, so uh, hope you all enjoy?

Less than three <3

 

Update: Won 2nd Place in Round 2 of the EXOplosion Writing Contest~ Thank you all for the wonderful support ^~^

 

Gorgeous new poster by Paper Heart Graphic Shop <3

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Lovexiu16 #1
Chapter 1: This story is amazing, and it’s really written quite well.
forsteye #2
Chapter 3: Everything is so subtle and hinted, if there's no A/N i am pretty sure i won't know about it. Are you a doctor or someone in medical field? Because if you're not, your research for this fic extremely well done. About the angst tho, I am still trying to sink it down. Because at one moment the fluffs started to go down so fast. Your writing is so smooth tho :) and gosh, how i love sesoo, thank you for chimming in some Sesoo ♡♡♡
yixings24 #3
Chapter 1: I'm crying, this was so beautiful and I love historicalau and Yixing being a physician and Minseok playfully flirting with Yixing 24/7 and I'm heartbroken because these was beautiful and incredibly good and I can't believe he died and I just wanna give Yixing a hug and omg...

I CAN'T WITH THE FEELS, KILL ME, OMG

Why? ლ(ಠ_ಠლ) WHYYYYYY? Mr. Kim needed to live and be happy happy with Dr. Zhang, oh holy xing's , I can't express how much I love this :B


THANK YOU LIKE SO MUUUUCH FOR WRITING THIS! ♡
Solbee #4
Hi there! I really like this fanfic so much that I featured it in my favorites fic: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1080503/2
If you have any objections in me sharing this fanfic please do let me know, so I'll remove it again! :)
fefedove #5
Chapter 2: i read perks of being a unicorn before and i DIDN'T KNOW YOU'RE THE SAME AUTHOR holy , the difference in the two styles
but umm yeah... this was amazing. everything was so well thought out, and the characterization was great. i'm so envious of people who can develop their characters and their plot and all that so well in a oneshot >_<
and now i'm just going to cry forever over this byee
tatertot #6
Xiu ing lay why you gotta mess with my heart like this ughhhh
chendearing #7
Chapter 2: i absolutely loved this oneshot and i usually never read angst ( because weak imnida ). the characterization of your characters, especially sehun, was lovely in how you hinted at subtle things of their past/persona through out. i think even without your a/n analyzing the whole story i picked up on each of the points you described, so i think even though you were discreet with some details you could definitely pick them up and be able to read with total understanding. also, i'm a er for war!au, bless. :' ) this was wonderful!
Ha_Jae_Lyn #8
Chapter 1: WHAT KIND OF MAGIC ARE YOU USING ON ME ? YOU MAKE MINSEOK DIE, YIXING HASLOST THE LOVE OF HIS LIFE AND YET I STILL LOVE YOU ?! TT.TT
Why did I read that..? I know I can't handle angst but yet here I am ;-;
Anyway it's just beautiful and I mean it because I usually don't read war!au like never. I don't really everything war related but this is... "wow, amazing !" (I had to use it x) )
limonade #9
Chapter 3: "Much love and appreciation"
(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧ ily2
Zenitora #10
Chapter 3: I love the story. Thanks for writing it. Keep writing!
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