Not An Update!!

I Should Have Known

Sorry, this is not an actual update, but I have a question for you guys. I was thinking that maybe this story would flow better if it were in first person, so before the story progresses further, I was wondering if I should change the pov and edit the chapters. Unless you guys think 2nd person is better! You guys don't talk to me too much haha but if you have an opinion please let me know! Even if it's to say you don't care either way!

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Kaylie3Two #1
Chapter 6-
OMG. Update whenever. I want to punch Jiho and break picture frames as well. I'm listening to Zico's 'wake me up' at this very moment but I'd rather beat him up haha. You're a very good writer, author. Keep it up with the intensity :-)
Bernice
#2
Chapter 6: Oh my gawd! Please update more often! Cause that cliffhanger.... i just cant! Lool
sarahjang
#3
Chapter 6: !!!!!!
I'm so hooked on this story, thanks for the update omg the ending though!!
desiredbe
#4
Chapter 5: WOW, It was like I was in a haze when I typed out my other comment. I guess it has to do with freshly reading the story with sad music behind it. tehe~!
I actually reached the limit of 2000 words and had to cut some of it out ^_^''
please keep updating, I really want to know what else happens.
thankyou~
desiredbe
#5
Chapter 5: They're both suffering so much, but feeling like everything you did for someone so close and special to your heart was just fun and games for them is the worst feeling ever. he could of talked it out with her, he could of explained the situation because he knows that she loves him so much, that she'd listen.
There were so many different ways to approach this.

& because of that I believe she'd fall in to a deep and dark depression, "You were so tired"..'tired' is a often feeling felt when you just don't want to put any emotional effort towards anything. It's when you're just living but you're not actually there.
But being 'tired' is what can keep you up at night & make it seem like you're naturally born with eye-bags.
Throughout the days you feel so numb, to everything.
J-walking in a busy street doesn't scare you anymore, because you're so numb you can walk inches away from an oncoming car and feel nothing.Or maybe sometimes--on the really bad days--a small speck of sadness will blink in your chest because you wish it actually hit you. So that you don't have to feel so numb, so you can FINALLY feel something.

It drives you crazy seeing so many people in love because you had that, you were that. You will always remember when you first blushed because he brought you flowers on your very first date, that smile you had on your face when he told you, you were beautiful, when he kissed you so delicately because he was scared such an amazing thing would fall apart from his rough lips. The years would pass but you couldn't help but fall more in love with him, you never even thought it to be possible. & even years later you would never regret anything; not even the fights, because you were still happy. He was your haven, your back bone, your teddy bear, your best friend and your challenger. When you were with him you felt so much, but then so suddenly it was just...gone.

You'll never stop feeling 'tired'. You just end up finding ways to hide it better.
Maan2442 #6
Chapter 5: please update soon i really like the story and the war its written!!!!!! :)
Kkomaenggi
#7
Chapter 5: wooww omg that frame-throwing mustve been really satisfying xD sometimes when I am angry I also get the urge to break something and when I do it is so freaking satisfying.. I feel really bad for her and zico probably has a reason for it. he better have a damn reason lol ~~ also I like your writing :) im looking forward to the next chapter ♡
sarahjang
#8
Chapter 5: You accidentally pasted the chapter twice in chapter 5! Really liking this story though :) always looking forward to updates ^^
Kkomaenggi
#9
Chapter 4: I really like this story the way it is so I dont think you should change it also I really hope their relationship gets fixed because they are so adorable omgg