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The Poet: Ravenous 50 Poems Challenge
Your sweet breath lingers on my tongue
My heart staggers at every beat
We're ready to take the plunge
We're ready to take on the heat

Our lips move as if they're one
and our bodies melt together
Our hands reach for untouched places
that will later mark a forever
 
You gently lie me down
I pull you over me
skin connects to skin, it's sweet
I feel like I'm flying over the sea
 
Beginning at a steady rate
we slowly climb to the peak
Our breaths now are fast and harsh
we can barely even speak
 
The mounting pleasure spurs us on
it's taking us to the highest crest
When all is said and done
you know we made it our best
 
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note: this was originally left unfinished when i started it a few years ago. i finally finished it when i knew what i was originally aiming for.
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kpopartory
#1
oh by the way, is this just a challenge for yourself?? and not for many others?? no one can join??
kpopartory
#2
Beautiful, I had a good time reading your poems, keep up the good work!! *clap clap clap*