False Premises

YG Family: B.I. x Lee Hi
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“Hayi, are you okay?”

“Huh? What?”

One of the CRAZY dancers held Hayi by her shoulders and couched down to her eye-level and asked her, “Lee Hayi-ssi, are you okay? Would you like to stop now?”

“I’m fine, I’m fine. Let’s go on, I’m sorry about that” Hayi said as she snapped back from her daze

“Hmmm… I think we’re done for the night.” The dancer unnie tells her, noticing that Hayi’s mind was off somewhere else “You were already perfect in the last couple of runs. You shouldn’t wear yourself out too much. We’ll just go at it again tomorrow at the sound check, okay?”

“Okay…” Hayi resigned to her unnie who looked her straight in the eyes

“Alrighty then. It’s a wrap. Go home and get a good sleep, Hayi-yang. You shouldn’t worry about anything, you’ll do great”

“Yes, Unnie. Thank you for your hard work today” Hayi said with a bow as the CRAZY dancers got their stuff and headed out.

Left alone inside the practice room and waiting for her manager oppa to arrive, Hayi began tinkering with her phone and somehow ended up opening her Kakao conversation thread with Hanbin.

“Hanbin-ah… Are you really mad?” Hayi sighed as she reads her long, unanswered message to Hanbin which read,

Kim Hanbin, I’m really sorry for what happened yesterday. I’m really, really sorry. I shouldn’t have walked out on you guys like that, I just felt frustrated with myself too. I know you want this performance to be good and that it means a lot for all of you; that’s why I promise to be more helpful this time and practice more. There are a couple of days left before the performance after the Family Concert, let’s do our best ‘til then... I’m sorry.

“Ahh… What do I do? I think he’s really angry” she grunts to herself frustratingly “Why would he not reply back when he already read it? Ahhh… This is so bad.”

In the middle of staring at her empty screen, contemplating whether to message him again to say sorry or not, she receives a message and was so surprised, she almost dropped her phone. She hurriedly checks who it’s from only to be let down when she finds out that it was a message from her Manager Oppa telling her that her car was already outside, waiting.

“Tsk… Oppa, you always have the best timing” she sneers as she grabs her bag and made her way out.

There was no one inside the other practice room and nobody seemed to be around either, but there seemed to be people in one of the rooms on the right just before the cafeteria which made her felt more at ease and less scared.

As she made her way out and got closer to the room though, she heard distinct and familiar voices. Her piqued curiosity had her trying to eavesdrop but she couldn’t really make out who they were so she leaned in a bit closer, with her back against the wall.

“Why are you being so stubborn?!?” the first person said in an annoyed tone “I already told you last time that you’re not allowed to change songs anymore…”

“Change songs?” Hayi repeated to herself “Who is this?”

“But hyung-nim, I can make a whole new track in just a day or two! I already have a couple samples here. If you could only liste-“

“Ya, B.I.! Hanbin-ah!” the other guy’s voice boomed

“Hanbinnie?” Hayi gasps

“I’m sorry” sighs the other guy, breathing out heavily “Hanbin-ah, if it was only up to me, I’d be okay with it but we possibly can’t have you guys change it now with just a few days away from it. We’d need Sajangnim’s approval too. And he’s busy with a lot of things right now including the Family Concert right now... You should be too...”

“But Hyung-nim, if we could just-“

 “Look, I have no doubts with your talent to produce music, Kim Hanbin-ssi, but it’s just not possible now. I know you can do well

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SecretStorywriter
#1
Chapter 8: Stupid stupid hanbinnie; I feel like even I'm blushing from all this flirting, hahahahha!
And looooool at Yunhyung leaving those two alone. XDDD
SecretStorywriter
#2
Chapter 7: Oh goodness, these kids are too much. I'm so glad that they got to talk it out. But I doubt that Donghyuk was that oblivious ;P
I totally need to see the reactions of the other boys and Winner when Hayi and Hanbin finally get together.
SecretStorywriter
#3
Chapter 6: Ay ay ayyyy
So much miscommunication
Fix it Hanbinnnn! ><;
SecretStorywriter
#4
Chapter 5: Huh. Did Hayi really cry on Mix & Match after the vocal lesson? I don't really remember to be honest.
I'm guessing there is going to be some kind of heart-to-heart convo between Hayi and Hanbin. I mean, we all know that the end performance was pretty good, so there must have been some serious reconciliation.
SecretStorywriter
#5
Chapter 4: Interesting developments.
I like how you wrote it as Hayi teasing Hanbin. I think that fit very well.
I'm still interested in seeing how this whole thing will progress.

Random question - do you ship anyone else with Ikon members? I kinda ship Jinhwan/Soohyun. Soooo cute!
SecretStorywriter
#6
Chapter 3: Oh gosh, I totally forgot about that really tough time that Hanbin had gone through.
I like how you wrote this chapter, but I would have loved to see more about how Bobby, the other boys, or even Winner responded in order to support Hanbin (I know we say a glimpse of this in the beginning of the chapter). However, I can't really criticize you for that because this story is about Hanbin and Hayi, not about the other boys. :3 (I just love all those boys, ya know? keke)
And oh man oh man, I am super excited to see how these next few chapters go bc I recall that Hayi's entrance into the M&M show was awkward and they had a rough time in rehearsals and at the same time, there was kinda odd flirting going on (lol).
SecretStorywriter
#7
Chapter 2: Too cute! You are such a good writer!
I could totally picture a lot of the stuff that you wrote.
For example, this part: "'...Stop pushing yourself too hard' He said in a tone that bordered condescending and caring" <----I can TOOOOTALLY picture the way that Hanbin says this. And I feel like that is something that would be said between same-aged friends.
I loved the interaction between Bobby, Jinhwan, and Hayi considering that Hayi was freaked out.
The only part that I thought wasn't as realistic is that Hayi would go to one of the guys rooms because I feel like she would have known that she was asking to scolded, BUT now that I think about it, Hayi is a solo artist which means that she doesn't really have too many other people to keep her company. She will feel lonely quicker, so it's probably best that she hangs out with other artists anyway. I wonder when in the story you'll bring in Soohyun from AKMU or the other girls (or even other sunbaes like Tablo or Big Bang).
I think you did a really great job, and it's seriously making me anticipate the next chapters even more.
SecretStorywriter
#8
Chapter 1: Cute! Of course, a bunch of these are coincidences, but that's the lovely part of fanfiction ;)
I like the banter with Hanbin and Hayi - I think it was pretty natural considering their ages.
Also, I like how throughout the chapter, you kept us guessing on when Hayi would run into Hanbin again and inevitably end up apologizing again.
I also noticed how Junhoe kinda teases Hanbin -- I wonder if Hanbin already likes Hayi at this point...
I look forward to the rest of this story (and I am so relieved that it is a complete story too).
Jdazngal #9
Chapter 8: Loved the story dear~ If i may point something out to you, just trying to help your story flow a bit better but you use "si" in places that don't really need it. At the beginning of the story, its fine because they didn't really know one another but after they become friends they don't really need to talk to each other formally unless they are mad at each other than i guess they could pull that card but It makes it seem like their not close in my opinion. Just a thought, don't think anything bad, i wasn't trying to criticize you in anyway :) I love this shipping and great job none the less~ <33333
VichaTan #10
Chapter 8: Pls make another Story for BIHI :D love it..! Good thor!