Chapter 8: Stupid stupid hanbinnie; I feel like even I'm blushing from all this flirting, hahahahha!
And looooool at Yunhyung leaving those two alone. XDDD

Chapter 7: Oh goodness, these kids are too much. I'm so glad that they got to talk it out. But I doubt that Donghyuk was that oblivious ;P
I totally need to see the reactions of the other boys and Winner when Hayi and Hanbin finally get together.

Chapter 6: Ay ay ayyyy
So much miscommunication
Fix it Hanbinnnn! ><;

Chapter 5: Huh. Did Hayi really cry on Mix & Match after the vocal lesson? I don't really remember to be honest.
I'm guessing there is going to be some kind of heart-to-heart convo between Hayi and Hanbin. I mean, we all know that the end performance was pretty good, so there must have been some serious reconciliation.

Chapter 4: Interesting developments.
I like how you wrote it as Hayi teasing Hanbin. I think that fit very well.
I'm still interested in seeing how this whole thing will progress.

Random question - do you ship anyone else with Ikon members? I kinda ship Jinhwan/Soohyun. Soooo cute!

Chapter 3: Oh gosh, I totally forgot about that really tough time that Hanbin had gone through.
I like how you wrote this chapter, but I would have loved to see more about how Bobby, the other boys, or even Winner responded in order to support Hanbin (I know we say a glimpse of this in the beginning of the chapter). However, I can't really criticize you for that because this story is about Hanbin and Hayi, not about the other boys. :3 (I just love all those boys, ya know? keke)
And oh man oh man, I am super excited to see how these next few chapters go bc I recall that Hayi's entrance into the M&M show was awkward and they had a rough time in rehearsals and at the same time, there was kinda odd flirting going on (lol).

Chapter 2: Too cute! You are such a good writer!
I could totally picture a lot of the stuff that you wrote.
For example, this part: "'...Stop pushing yourself too hard' He said in a tone that bordered condescending and caring" <----I can TOOOOTALLY picture the way that Hanbin says this. And I feel like that is something that would be said between same-aged friends.
I loved the interaction between Bobby, Jinhwan, and Hayi considering that Hayi was freaked out.
The only part that I thought wasn't as realistic is that Hayi would go to one of the guys rooms because I feel like she would have known that she was asking to scolded, BUT now that I think about it, Hayi is a solo artist which means that she doesn't really have too many other people to keep her company. She will feel lonely quicker, so it's probably best that she hangs out with other artists anyway. I wonder when in the story you'll bring in Soohyun from AKMU or the other girls (or even other sunbaes like Tablo or Big Bang).
I think you did a really great job, and it's seriously making me anticipate the next chapters even more.

Chapter 1: Cute! Of course, a bunch of these are coincidences, but that's the lovely part of fanfiction ;)
I like the banter with Hanbin and Hayi - I think it was pretty natural considering their ages.
Also, I like how throughout the chapter, you kept us guessing on when Hayi would run into Hanbin again and inevitably end up apologizing again.
I also noticed how Junhoe kinda teases Hanbin -- I wonder if Hanbin already likes Hayi at this point...
I look forward to the rest of this story (and I am so relieved that it is a complete story too).

Chapter 8: Loved the story dear~ If i may point something out to you, just trying to help your story flow a bit better but you use "si" in places that don't really need it. At the beginning of the story, its fine because they didn't really know one another but after they become friends they don't really need to talk to each other formally unless they are mad at each other than i guess they could pull that card but It makes it seem like their not close in my opinion. Just a thought, don't think anything bad, i wasn't trying to criticize you in anyway :) I love this shipping and great job none the less~ <33333

Chapter 8: Pls make another Story for BIHI :D love it..! Good thor!